UNFORGIVEN - Page 4

Originally posted by: who am i???

Look who is talking??? what abt ur last FF...didnt u seperate them???how much i cried u know??? here to pia is useless,and there u got them married and hell of all IVF also.

This is called poetic justce.

BTW why are u crying??? coz amma is blind and munna got krishna😉

poetic justice my foot 😭

wonderful ,
i was having the images in my mind

superb

u shud be one of the kreatives of KS

Very well written but 😭

But if it is catharsis and makes you feel better I am OK with that I guess.

Getting rid of all those bottled feeling has given us the old Raaga back so I will deal with my 😭

I shall be telling this with a sigh
Somewhere ages and ages hence:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I -
I took the one less travelled by,
And that has made all the difference.

from: The Road Not Taken (Poem)by Rober Frost

i got these lines after i read the story. better than this i didn't see an answer for such an ending you chose to give.. am i consoling myself for the ache it left in the heart...

it is wornderful... then i should accept it as you meant it to be.. because i believe every creation meant to be a unique one like the choice of the road which less travelled by anyone... congradulations.. but i think a sequel will kill its uniqueness... as many did kill Pride and Prejudice with it useless sequels... i wish it would be left as it

now let me tell you this too... i hate you to breake that man's heart like that... whatever it is no mistake is bigger than the life... that is why still we grow up in this world to see every changes happened after our sins... it was symbolic... a blind can be from your poetic point is someone who grown up to be a learned one from life... the "learned one" is defined by those who are beyond expectaions and hopes... the worlds happenings will not be enough to make an effet on them.. as bani said she is above all these .. she is learned.. and i wish jai will also learned... then no need for a sequel... they are connected to each other always..

good luck.. it is good to see u back.. cheers

Rose

😭 😭 😭 i loved it and hated it at the same time .. it is very well written and powerful but it is not the kind of ff tht i wud want to read again ...... bcuz i dont wanna cry again ! 😭
i hope the kreative lurkers dont read this and get crazy ideas about incorporating it in the story ! 😕 😡

Rose/Raaga,

I am inclined to agree with Rose here. Forgiveness is a quality of the highest level. After all didn't Munna forgive Pia, Pooch, ND and Kiran for what they did to him, don't u think some forgiveness was also due to him? Or is forgiveness something that only the Dixits are entitled to?

Rgds,

Pri

Originally posted by: majumdar

Rose/Raaga,

I am inclined to agree with Rose here. Forgiveness is a quality of the highest level. After all didn't Munna forgive Pia, Pooch, ND and Kiran for what they did to him, don't u think some forgiveness was also due to him? Or is forgiveness something that only the Dixits are entitled to?

Rgds,

Pri

I don't want to take the writer's right to do what she likes to do. I accepted that. What i said about life, natural life... big or small , we are all having one life... does any one person in this world who didn't make a mistake? big or small... we realise mistakes, repent it... but then it is the way it is.. repentence is the worst punishment a mistake can ever get... no one i mean no one can give more bigger a punishment than that... but we intend to see the life through a preset of narrow corridor... there we become helpless to do anything more than an impulsive reaction... because human is ruled by emotions than wisdom..

Hey Raaga Om
👏 👏
Jai Walia, for me, died that night in Dubai. The socalled Kreatives made
chop suey out of him in exchange for a trp. He was sold to the cheapest
bidder. Blind Bani-well she was blindly in love with her husband. Poor
thing she can't see
that ppl can have their own hidden agendas even if it is her own sister.
Bani
could never think let alone imagine of something like wht Pia did to her in
her soul bc she
is not Pia. Bani's soul is pure and her love for JW was a pure love, a true
love, a simple love.
I understand why Bani's character can nver live with JW. And I actually
admire her for her decision. She had loved Jai Walia and that Jai Walia to
her died that Dubai night. But her daughter does need her mother, even
if her mother is blind. Krishna needs Bani.
(I simply love the Blind metaphor-You have really captured the depth of
Bani's love.)
AP

Raaga,

I just read the story... and it was wonderfully written. 👏

It left this sensation with me that I can't even explain to you. Somehow, it felt okay for you to have that as an ending. I am a happy-ever-after girl, it bugs me when stories end like this... but the way Jai and Bani both knew what they had to do at the end made it okay. I am still crying about it and I still feel hollowness about this story but it was nonetheless a piece of art.

I don't know if I am making sense.

Even though Bani is blind, she can still raise Krishna because I have seen people do that. It is now unfair how Jai has his entire family, Rano, Pushkar and especially Krishna with him but Bani has no one. I can't imagine her living all alone far from her loved ones... it is as if she is paying for Jai's mistakes more then he is.

Also, your story was such a conventional idea for us KS addicts that it raises so many different types of questions. We all hate Jaigiri and Banigiri but in the end we love Jai and Bani together. It is as if they are just in a different category together, they belong to each other with their strenghts and weaknesses.

But overall, I loved the story, it made me cry for both of them! But I guess that is life, we don't always get what we want.

Look forward to other works that you may kindly give us in the future! 👏

-Pari

Originally posted by: aperture

Hey Raaga Om
👏 👏
Jai Walia, for me, died that night in Dubai. The socalled Kreatives made
chop suey out of him in exchange for a trp. He was sold to the cheapest
bidder. Blind Bani-well she was blindly in love with her husband. Poor
thing she can't see
that ppl can have their own hidden agendas even if it is her own sister.
Bani
could never think of something like wht Pia did to her in her soul bc she
is not Pia. Bani's love for JW was a pure love, a true love, a simple love. I
i understand why Bani's character can nver live with JW. And I actually
admire her for her decision. She had loved Jai Walia and that Jai Walia to
her died that Dubai night. But her daughter does need her mother, even
if her mother is blind. Krishna needs Bani.

I agree. It is not the sin that killed Jai but what the actions he took after the sin that killed him in my eyes.

-Pari