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Archie, I hope this 🤗will make you feel better!I thought you will be ecstatic that Munna got Krishna minus Amma!😉😆

-Raaga

Originally posted by: Raaga_om

You little devil, wait for my pm!😈

-Raaga

Originally posted by: pooja.walia

Ok as much as I thought I'd read it kal...I couldn't help but read it now..
would u mind if I told u I hate u right now...

I don't mind at all my love! If I've made you hate me, I've succeeded as a writer. thanks

call me silly..immature...or plain stupid... but I'm more of a happy ending kindda person... I firmly believe that if its not a happy ending...its not an ending yet....

No honey. You are a very wonderful sensitive human and want to surround yourself with roses and happy memories. But life is a bed of roses with thorns too...


U say it is catharsis...but it leaves a hollow in the mind of the reader... a void which needs to be filled...

I agree it was very selfish of me that to give relief to my feelings, I played with yours. But I never expected a mere story to make such an impact. Sorry about that. Hope the other ff will make it up.

was his six years of suffering not enough punishment... was what he did unpardonable... maybe yes... but if he did love bani...and she in turn did love him equally if not more...then I guess it should have meant them to have them overcome this too... anyways...that only my thought...u needn't agree...

Poo, why did Romoe Juliet die without getting together? Why did Desdemona and Othello suffer such a fate as theirs? That's the same reason why these two here could not meet.

Tragedies are not happy. The irony of the tragedy is heightened especially if the protagonists suffer due to no fault of theirs. Fate and one fatal flaw...

But I agree with you Poo. I would never want anything like this to appen to any couple in this world, especially JB. I too crave for happy endings. This was just...let's say a perversion.

Needless to say its BEAUTIFULLY written... 👏 👏 👏

Thank you. You flatter me.😳

I loved what u did with all the characters except...

If I didn't do what i did with them, would I be getting what I am getting now, from all of you?

Would u ever... way into future think of altering this end...

Anything for you.🤗I will bring out a sequel. Ok?

But...

Tell me Poo honestly can this story have any other ending? After rising to such tragic heights, would you be able to accept JB sink down to normalcy?

If JB met then this would become an ordinar story, JB would become ordinary lovers.

I meant this story to be about two extrordinary people, puppets of destiny and their inherent fatal flaw...several themes run parallely..but I guess you are right Poo. We don't need this sadness. We have lots of it all around.

I'll pen down thatsequel soon.😃

Now please smile and I hope I won't be unforgiven!!!

-Raaga

Poo

Originally posted by: Raaga_om

Archie, I hope this 🤗will make you feel better!I thought you will be ecstatic that Munna got Krishna minus Amma!😉😆

-Raaga

U hav doubts on that....u know how evil i become when it comes to munna.I was so happy!!!!

PS : now i'll PM u all my thts..cant risk posting them here

Originally posted by: sangitadas

Excellent,. but 😭

And believe me, you will pay for this.

Where's my hanky?

Look who is talking??? what abt ur last FF...didnt u seperate them???how much i cried u know??? here to pia is useless,and there u got them married and hell of all IVF also.

This is called poetic justce.

BTW why are u crying??? coz amma is blind and munna got krishna😉