UNFORGIVEN - Page 2

Raaga ji
empty your pm box it is full again 😆 😆 😆

Originally posted by: Raaga_om

Thanks Divs! 😉 Personally i hate it.

-Raaga

Raaga,

Completely understood what you wrote, and how you must be feeling then. Its a sad and tragic end but soooo fitting.

Bani was blind then to her sister Pia and her greed, and alos so blindly in love with her sister and hubby that she missed so many signs of betryal or the hurt htat she caused him

And yes Jai did the most unforgivable thing ever, be it because he wanted to hurt her or was forced, but he did betray his love.

And I so beleive that heaven and hell both are here on this earth and what ever yourr Karams you pay for them in this lifetime itself.

Love

Krishna

aarthi....
😭
U made me cry!!!! i never cried even after ONS but now i cried!!!
Only u can do that....Well excellent one ,esp the words,the description of bani it was great!!
Love pia's fate...really liked french beared pooch and his wife.
Sahil,let him dream still!!!Thank u for bumping off maasi.

Though i hated their seperation,but i am happy krishna will be with her dad!! Finally some justice for him. so dad a dn daughter duo will be togethere with all other GFN away!!!

Originally posted by: divya_123

ok the first thing which comes to my mind right now is

"why did they have to separete"😭

Divs my love, catharsis. I was punishing...who? Them? Amma? Me?😕 I cannot say.

u made me cry raaga buddy the last lines were really emmotional😭

bani lost her eyes now she gave her krishna to jai and she herself left why..why..

The blindness is methaphorical. That's how I meant. Hence the final separation, the freedom when the umblical cord is cut, severed.

really excellent buddy.. a unique story with the unique end 👏👏

super b dont have words to say more

the story itself said alot 😭

thanks for coming up with this dear....😳thanks alot

I must thank you you sweetheart for many reasons. You said no thanks and sorry in dosti. Forgot?😉

Thanks so much for the appreciation sweet. I cry now.😭

-Raaga

Mamta and Poo,eagerly awaiting your comments. take your time dears.

Yes this story is complete Mamta.

DC i won't call it a ff. I call it catharsis. I think the title bst remain what it is, if you don't mind. 😳

-Raaga

Originally posted by: Raaga_om

I must thank you you sweetheart for many reasons. You said no thanks and sorry in dosti. Forgot?😉

Thanks so much for the appreciation sweet. I cry now.😭

-Raaga

aww raaga meri jaan i dont wannt to feel the buckets of tears over here😭

oh yah no thanks and sorry buddy kabhi maat bhul na🤗

why u crying hawe.....stop the tears 😕plzzzzzz

well let me tell u once again ke this story was really superb buddy only someone like u could come up with it😳

did u stop crying😡😕

Originally posted by: m3ghna

question: crazy in love with munna or just crazy crazy?

Plain MAD megs! You should ask Sangita di how I was when the ONs happened! But I never stopped locving my Munna. That moron ne tho janam janam ke liye crazy kiya hai!😆

Ok now tell me how you really feel about the ONS 😉? Don't be so mad at munna, he was drugged by that thing yaar. He is not crying anymore or drinking. Munni is giving him love, things can only get better.

When I wrote this no one had any idea that he was drugged. They just added it as an afterthought. Damn them! I was never exactly mad at my Munna. I was only mad at the cartoon they had substituted my Munna with.

Well written. Loved Pia' fate and the fact the Rano and Pushkar are married. Munna got Krishna but he needs munni too.

Well, Amma being Amma can always change her mind esp since Raaga is back to her normal self!😉😆

Blind?

Thank you for liking it.

-Raaga

😛

Originally posted by: nibbles

Gosh that was long😕, but totally worth it Raaga!!😛

Only someone like you could come up with that!........Honestly, you made everyone miserable but made it sound like the most wonderful thing in the world!!👏👏👏

Poetic justice indeed!!😆

Loved it!!😃

And now that you're back to being your crazy self - is there any chance that you'll finish your previous two FF's?😉

The new rule says you can have only one going on. You guys scared the hell out of me with your pms. So I have posted two new parts (Killing me softly wala). I can now afford to laze around for next two months!😉😆

Thank you very much my dear under 16!😆

Poetic justice is not funny!!!

😛

-Raaga

Originally posted by: sweetu144

😃 You know i love you alot right?
i can't believe my wishes have finally come true!
After days and days of irritating and constantly asking and threatening you to, you finaly did!
Like is said sangs di and MT di it's time parrtyyy raaga is back in business 😳 😃 !
You know i love your writing to bits, am your numero uno fan!!
Will read later 😳 , sorry i have so much to do!
Love you angel
Mwah
sweetu 😳

You little devil, wait for my pm!😈

-Raaga

Originally posted by: hanaane

WOW..simply awesome Raaga.... 👏

Thank you soo much for writing.... it was absolutely amazing ..... 🤗

God I hate goodbayes.... 😭

Thank you so much dear. I am touched.

-Raaga

Originally posted by: kubare

Raaga,

Completely understood what you wrote, and how you must be feeling then. Its a sad and tragic end but soooo fitting.

Bani was blind then to her sister Pia and her greed, and alos so blindly in love with her sister and hubby that she missed so many signs of betryal or the hurt htat she caused him

And yes Jai did the most unforgivable thing ever, be it because he wanted to hurt her or was forced, but he did betray his love.

And I so beleive that heaven and hell both are here on this earth and what ever yourr Karams you pay for them in this lifetime itself.

Love

Krishna

That was so beautifully put Krishma!👏I hope your namesake in the show will have as much sense as you, unlike her parents!

And thanks for understanding the metaphorical implication. Thanks very much for understanding and of course for the lovely compliments.

Thanks everyone. 🤗Please don't cry and make me guilty like my poor unfortunate Munna.

Yes Divs I guess the tears the drying up now.

😃

-Raaga