FF: Battle of the Hearts ... P7 on Page 7 - Page 7

Grumpyy, superb, fantastic, wonderful 👏 , ....am out of adjectives to use for you and your fanfic 😃 . Lovely, ahha...one more 😉 😆 . It is getting more interesting day by day. My god, he all ready brought Rano to his home and now Bani. 😃

What is Jai up to??? 😉 is the real question. Our man is real confusioning but I bet he has something up his sleeves. He never odes anything without a reason. 😛 😃

Cant wait for you to post the next part soon.

Love
Krishna

wow...i never commented on this ff...but after today i went from a simple smile to 😃 ... i love to see this side of jai..i wonder what happened suddenly...may be rano told him the thruth...
well anyway i love the way this story is progressing...
and i hope that bani gets the love she deserves...
i hope the roaring lion becomes nicer... 😆 😆

update soon

neetu

Grumpyyy will continue this Fan Fiction after "ff Try To Remember me" is finished. Until then, enjoy the other FF!

This ff is opened because she has finished her first ff

just finished reading all the parts again to catch up
pls cont soon.......

Grumpy
Read all the parts at once and must say you have woven magic into the story...the street urchin is now gonna get cleaned up and become a swan!!!

Jai is not gonna know what hit him and of course Pia will be back but am glad Roshni seems positive so far!!

Continue soon eagerly waiting Jai's reaction at Bani's transformation!!!

Nina

wow read all 7 parts in one go.
very damn good and unique storyline.. 👏 👏

i hated jai before but now i guess hes being nice to the girls 😊

continue soon

plz cont soon
read all the 7 parts in one go
its a different story
but why did jai take bani and rano home
yah kya chal raha hai
koi samjhayega mujhe