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Posted: 19 years ago
#21
fantastic... 👏
and I'm glad u posted this on the KS forum... as I don't visit the others 😉

So when can we have the next part...
and I can't believe I'm saying this but...I think I like this Roshni....

Poo

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Grumpyy, superb fanfic and am loving it. Read all the four parts in a go and fell in love with Bani, she really is some trigress, and Jai is just as arrogant, proude, as one should be and a chavanistic pig at that too.

Really liked Roshni as Jais friend, she seems a good person here.

Cant wait for you to update soon, like today if possible!!!!!.

Love

Krishna

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: pooja.walia

fantastic... 👏
and I'm glad u posted this on the KS forum... as I don't visit the others 😉

So when can we have the next part...
and I can't believe I'm saying this but...I think I like this Roshni....

Poo

Thank you Poo! Ill try my best to post it asap. I hope this evening, but I cant promise. 😉

Originally posted by: Angelskiss

wow great fanfic... loved reading it... poor bani n rano 😭 pls do cont soon

Thank you!😳

Originally posted by: ash9

jai is soooo mean...
its k..im getting used to these new ppl in this FF
continue soon 😊

Ill try my best. 😉

Originally posted by: kubare

Grumpyy, superb fanfic and am loving it. Read all the four parts in a go and fell in love with Bani, she really is some trigress, and Jai is just as arrogant, proude, as one should be and a chavanistic pig at that too.

Really liked Roshni as Jais friend, she seems a good person here.

Cant wait for you to update soon, like today if possible!!!!!.

Love

Krishna

I like Bani too. 😆 Thx alot sweety, I try my best to update today, but I cant promise. Still have some important work to do first. 😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
#24
Another awesome ff Grumpyyy!
👏
Poor Bani and Rano 😭 😭...
Jai you MCP! 😡 🤢
How I wished she slapped him again in part 4! 😡
Roshini is a good friend!
Please continue soon!

V. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#25
hey sweety waiting for ur update !!!!!!!!! zaldi karna yarr
pls 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#26
heyy nice story, please continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Grumpy..just read all 4 parts and cant wait for more..
pls post as soon as you can 😛
mandu
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey guys,

Thx alot for your posts and Im sorry for not updating earlier. Here is part 5. I hope you will like it! 😉

Grumpyyy


Part 5

Roshini was fuming. She wanted to shout and beat Jai for his bad behaviour. What was the need to humilate those poor girls so much. What was their fault if Pooja left Jai. She was scolding and calling him names in her mind, but kept her mouth shut. She knew very well that right now she shouldn't comment on his behaviour. The big smile on his face couln't cover up for the fire in his eyes. The slightest provocation would make him explode and Roshini wasnt in a mood to bear Jai anymore. He drove his car fast through the busy traffic and parked it perfectly before her flat. He turned towards her and smiled. Roshini repayed him with a killer look. She grabbed her purse and got out of the car, slamming the door harsh behind her. She couldn't stand Jai right now and she could miss his arrogant smile as a bad thoothache.

Bani hold still to catch her breath. Her heart was beating fast and her blood kept rushing through her veins. She was looking infront of her, but due to her anger she couldnt see exactly where she was standing. She closed her eyes and kept remembering all that had happened at the restaurant. The urge to kill Jai was growing bigger by each and every memory of his arrogant face. Rano was fighting against her tears. She was so scared of everything that had happened and she knew that she was responsible for it. She collected all her courage and whisphered with a suffocated voice that she was sorry and asked Bani to forgive her. Bani slowly opened her eyes and took a silently and mortified with guilt Rano in her arms and comforted her. 'It's not your fault Rano. That arrogant, good for nothing, heartless and ugly fat face is the only one to be blamed.' Rano giggled and lifted her face. She wiped her tears and looked at Bani with a small smile. 'Actually didi we can call him alot of names, but not ugly.' Bani playfully slapped Rano on the head. 'Chup. He is the ugliest person Ive came across in my whole life. Its noy appearance that make you ugly, but the heart. And now stop crying. That jerk is not worth of my little sisters precious tears.' Rano cutely nodded her head and hugged Bani tightly.

Jai washed his face and without looking at himself in the mirror, took the towel that was lying across his shoulder and wiped off his just shaved face. He hadn't slept all night and he was feeling like a wreck. If it wasnt for an important meeting he would have skipped work today. He walked back into his room and got himself dressed into his black suit, before Tony came walking in with his breakfast. At the sight of food Jai felt how his stomach turned upside down. Deep down in his heart he knew why. He knew that he was feeling guilty about threating those two poor girls so badly and making fun of their poverty, that has made him lose his appetite. But being stubborn Jai he ignored his guilty feeling and told himself that they deserved every word he told them, especially that two inch big mouthed dwarf! Jai shook his head, skipped his breakfast, grabbed his carkeys and ran towards his car. He was getting late for his meeting. Today was a big day, if he knew how to play his card at the end of the day he would be the owner of a complete new hotel chain in Morocco.

It was the end of the afternoon and Bani was over joyous that she had finally found the head quater of the Walia Industries, The Walia Crown Hotel. She stood across the streets and looked up and down the impressive building. She saw how expensive cars stopped infront of it and people dressed up very fancy walked up, being recieved by different servants. Bani heard how a deep sigh escapped Rano's mouth. 'Imagine didi, if only we could be those people for one day.' Bani giggled. 'We would be arrogant and proud. We would walk without looking at our feet, setting each step with much air and confidence, like this ...' Bani started acting like a rich and proud lady. Rano burst out laughing and started acting like a rich and proud gentlemen. She hold Bani's arm bent over exaggerating enormously and planting a kissed Bani's hand. Both girls broke out laughing. 'Let's cut the crap Rano. We will go and hand this wallet over to that jerk and go back home.' The girls hold each others hand and crossed the streets. As soon as the walked into the Hotel gates a guard started shouting at them to get lost. 'This is a five star hotel, not an orphanage.' He came walking up to them, but Bani and Rano didnt wait for him. They started running towards the hotel door. When they reached it they were stopped by two guards and soon the gate guard had followed them. They grabbed Bani and Rano and were pulling them forcefully. Bani started fighting with the guard trying to get out of his grip and yelling that she came to meet mr. Walia and that she isnt moving before meeting him. The guards made fun of her and kept pulling her away. Without giving it a second thought Bani bit the guard who was holding her. The guy screamed out of pain and let go of Bani. She quickly ran up the stairs again towards the door. She was once again stopped by a guard. Bani started screaming again that she was there to meet mr. Walia when she felt how a hand landed harshly on her cheek and made her drop to the ground. Bani was in severe pain and as she opened her eyes and saw a pair of shining black shoes she heard the well known heavy voice of Jai Walia. 'What the hell is going on here!' Bani got herself up and Jai was clearly taken aback by seeing her. Poor Rano was watching the whole scene from across the streets. She was thrown out by one of the guards. Bani starred at Jai and at the three pair of eyes that were watching her from behind his back. A guard told Jai that she was trying to get inside the hotel and they tried to kick her out, but she made a whole drama out of it. Jai turned around and looked murderous towards Bani. 'What the hell are you waiting for. Get her the hell out of my face! Does my hotel look like an orphanage!' Aditya, Ranveer and Sahil looked how two guards came walking towards Bani. She pulled her hand up. 'Stop right there!' As on command both men stopped. 'She walked towards them and with an ice-cold voice asked them who of them exactly had the nerves to plant his hand on her face. The guard on her left showed her his teeth. 'If you liked it so much I will give you another one.' He said with a dirty smile on his face. Bani turned and looked at Jai and then out of the blue slapped the guard very hard. Everybody looked at her in shock. She grabbed the guard by his collar and almost pointed her index finger in his eye. 'Don't you ever dare to lie your dirty hands on me. This time I slapped you. Next time Ill cut it off!' She let go of him and turned her finger towards Jai. 'You! You are lucky that three men are accomanying you today and that I respect them. Otherwise I would have not only slapped you, but I would've spitted on your face. If you and these dogs of yours had giving me five minutes you would have known why I've walked across Mumbai and came to you.' She lifted her shirt and grabbed Jai's wallet. She pulled his hand towards her and pushed his wallet it. 'This is your wallet! You had dropped it the other day when you were drunk.' Jai looked at her in shock, but she didnt pay him anymore attention. She walked past him and stood infront of a shocked Aditya, Ranveer and Sahil. She asked them to forgive her for her bad behaviour, but she was compelled to it. The three of them just nodded their heads and Bani started leaving.
When she almost reached the gate she heard Jai's voice loudly calling for her. She turned around and saw how he came walking towards her dangerously. She took a deep breath and waited to what was coming. When he reached her he gave her a wicked smile. 'Not so fast missy. Last time I checked the mirror, it didn't say STUPID on my forehead. Why on earth would I believe that you have found my wallet after I dropped it. I'm very sure that you have stolen my wallet!' Bani turned all red and started stammering. She didn't know what to say as she knew very well that Rano did steal his wallet. 'Save it! You can tell the police what happened!' Jai grabbed Bani's fist and dragged her towards the hotel. Rano started screaming Bani's name and came running towards her. The guards grabbed her and Jai barked at them to let her follow him. Jai dragged Bani past everybody without letting go of her wrist. When he reached his office he pushed her inside and barked at Rano to wait outside. He instructed his secretary to not anyone in and call a guard to keep Rano wherever she was and not to let her leave.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
I want the next part asap. Jai is a jerk


-Rimpy
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
hey this was owesome
I wonder what jai gone say to bani hiiyyllaa 😉 😉
Edited by perveen - 18 years ago

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