FF: Battle of the Hearts ... P7 on Page 7

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Battle of The Hearts

Part 1

The night was young and so were the people who were making the dancefloor unsave dancing to their heart content. Everybody seemed full of energy and happy, but there was one lost soul. He sat at the bar. His head hanging down, his eyes all red and gazy fixed on a couple dancing not far from him. They didnt seem to notice him or anyone else for that matter. They were too busy with themselves. He was holding his glas full of liquor with his right hand, while he formed a fist with his left hand. The music was beating in his head and by every minute that passed his terrible headache seemed to increase. He kept drinking without averting his gaze from the couple, especially the girl. According to him she was looking absolutely dashing in her high heel boots, short skirt and top. Her hair was dancing behind her back and her kohl eyes seemed to see nothing else but her dancing partner. 'Jai, this is enough yaar. They don't deserve it. Why are you killing yourself?!' Jai recognized Roshini's voice. He laughed out loud and tried to turn his heavy head towards her. 'Killing myself? They have killed me a million times already!'. He pronounced the words slowly and in a stuttering way. It was clear that he was drunk. It took him much effort to lift his head and look straight in the eyes of his friend. He couldn't make out to speak to which of the three Roshini's that where standing in front of him. 'Are yaar stop moving around!' Roshini felt so bad for Jai and wished she could do something for him. She hold his shoulders to sustain him and prevent him from falling off his chair. He kept brabbeling things to her, while she convinced him to get up and leave. After what seemed a century she managed to drag him out of the disco , to the parking lot. They had almost reached Jai's car and he kept making funny guestures and walking unsteadily, making it a hell job for his friend to hold him. She tried her best to reason with him, but he wasnt in a mood to listen. He pushed her off him and walked towards his car, not able to set one straight step. 'Roshini, get in get in. Today we will celebrate the end of my life. Where are you? Come! Ill take you to a nice restaurant and we will dance, till our feet will hurt us. Who needs this disco anyways? We will have fun, far away from here!' He laughed hystarically in an attempt to control the tears that invaded his eyes. Roshini tried her best to convince him not to drive and give her the keys, but Jai was admanant. She didnt have a choice but to get into the car.

Rano felt how her feet couldnt bear her no more. She has been wandering the streets from early morning. She had tried to stop, to take a rest, but her sister didnt allow her. 'Bani didi! I'm tired I can't take it anymore.' Bani turned around and saw how exhausted her little sister was leaning on a traffic light. She walked away from the car she was standing next to and hold her sister. She knew she has been harsh on Rano, but what could she do. The life of the streets was hard. She quickly took the tissue boxes out of her little sisters hands. 'Alright Rano. You go and sit there infront of that closed shop. I will continue to work for a little while. Tonight is a beautiful night. It's saturday night and rich people are going out to enjoy there lives. Every rupee we will get, will be good.' Rano just nodded her head and went to drop herself on the cold ground. She looked at her sister who had already turned back to the cars. Trying to sell tissue boxes and flowers and cleaning the windows, in a attempt to get some money. Rano watched how fancy cars stopped at the traffic lights. How boys hit on her sister and how girls laughed at her. She saw how men insulted her and how women closed their car windows scared to catch some kind of disease from her. Rano smiled as she thought that Bani never gave up. She would curse those bad people and try her luck with others sweettalking them to buy something from her or let her clean their windows and mirrors. Rano closed her eyes for a while and burried her head in her arms. All she could wish for right now was a shower, a hot meal and a comfortable bed. She felt how a hot tear fled from her eye at this wish and she laughed at herself thinking 'You silly girl. People dream of fancy car and huge houses and all you want is a decent meal.'
Bani took a deep breath and put her best smile on when a brand new black BMW approaced her. The window of the driver seat was down and she could see a young men sitting. The music coming out of his car filled the noisy street. Bani screamed in an attempt to be heared by the handsome hunk. 'Goodevening sir. I hope you had a nice day sir. I can see you and your wife must have enjoyed a great party. Here sir, please take this flower for your wife, so your life together will blossem just as this red rose.' With a big smile she handed the rose to Jai. He just kept starring at her. Annoyed by her go happy nature. She kept talking and talking. He tried his best to ignore her but he couldnt. Just when he was about to close his window, he changed his mind. Out of the blue he grabbed the rose out of Bani's hand. She got scared and stepped back looking at him with wide eyes. 'Well since you insist miss, thank you!' And without saying anything else he pushed the button of his seatwindow and got himself seperated from Bani. Roshini was shocked at Jai's behaviour, but she knew he was not in his senses. Bani on the other hand didnt have any reason to bear Jai and she angrily knocked on his blackened window. Jai with a sigh dropped the glass a little and gave her a deadly annoying look. 'Now what?' Bani couldnt believe the guy. 'Mera paisa sir. You took the rose but didnt pay for it.' Jai rolled his eyes and said: 'Whats your problem? You begged me to take the rose and I did, so what do you want from me now?! Please leave me alone and get lost!' Jai made a waving gesture with his hand as if he was slapping away an annoying bug. But Bani didnt let him scare her and with full confidence replied back to him. 'Sir I'm not a beggar, I work for my money and all I want from you right now is money!' Jai laughed out loud and opened his door. He got out of his car and stood right infront of Bani topping over her and looking down at her with a wicked smile on his face. Roshini felt that something bad was going to happen. She quickly got out of the car and walked towards Jai. Before she could say anything he raised his hand as a sign that he didnt want to hear anything from her. He had a hard time standing up straight and still. He kept giving Bani some evil looks and then grabbed her arm, making her drop the roses and the two tissue boxes she was holding. In the meantime the traffic light had gone to green and back to red again. The people behind Jai started to get angry and blow their horns, but he couldnt care less. Infact he didnt even notice the big massa of people that got out of their cars, that stopped walking and driving down the street and all gathered around him. He was holding Bani in a tight grip and bent down to her breathing into her ears. 'What did you say? You want money?' Bani smelt his alcohol breath and she felt her stomach getting upset. She realised the guy was drunk and she was scared, but she refused to show it. She tried to pull herself out of his tight grip and as she looked him right in the face she replied back. 'Yes, you heard me right. I want my money!' Jai pushed her away and laughed out loud. Bani felt the pain in her arm, but didnt give a kick. Instead she kept looking at Jai as if challanging him. She was wondering why he was wearing sunglasses as it was night, but quickly decided to herself that it must be one of those cool things rich people do. 'Achha accha.', Jai said. 'Well you know, who ever wants money has to work for it.' He sniffled as he once again came close to her. Everyone around them was holding their breaths. Out of all the men standing there watching, no one bothered to interfere. It was as if they were watching a Bollywood movie, eagerly waiting for the next scene. 'Well I'll make you a deal. I have this good butler, who works very hard. So hard he has no time to have a wife or girlfriend. Since he has always been a very good and faithfull employee I want to gift him something, or its better to say someone. I'll gift you to him to be his girlfriend for a night and I'll give you whatever money you want. Thats what you girls always want right? MONEY! So do we have a deal?' Bani was frozen to the spot. She couldnt believe what she had just heard. She has been living on the streets long enough to hear all the dirty talk people could think of. She was running away from guys who tried to hurt her and take her pride and honor more than she was running to give herself and her sister a nice meal. But never did she ever think that a rich and supposedly a sophisticated man would treat her like this and say such things to her, just because she was asking for what was rightfully hers. She felt disgusted and before she knew what she was doing she gave Jai a tight slap. And another one. She then grabbed his collar and snatched away the sunglasses from his eyes. 'It's true that I'm living on the streets. And its true that these streets are filled with dust and filth and its true that I'm poor and don't have much money, but its also true that I'm rich at heart and I'm cleaner that you or the people of your kind will ever be. You are one disgusting fellow. I curse you for a lifetime! One day you will come across yourself and you will repent humilating and mistreating a poor orphan infront of all these people. Take the rose and take your money. The rose wont make me poorer and your money won't make you richer!' She spitted right in his face dropped his glasses, picked up her roses and tissue boxes and walked away, trying to find her way through the silent massa who were standing watching her. Leaving a stunned Jai and a teary Roshini behind her.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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No wonder the name sounded so familair!!😆

Loved this FF hun.......and now it's a KS FF!!😛

Waiting for you to continue!!

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Part 2

Bani is starring at the sky admiring the moon and the millions of stars. She sits herself straight and lend her back on the big tree they call their home. Ever since they've came to Mumbai they made that tree their home. They would wonder the streets at day and go to sleep under the tree at night. Rano is sleeping peacefully, unawre of anything around her. It's a chilly night, but a very beautiful one Bani decides to herself. It's almost time to wake up Rano and go to sleep herself. They never sleep at the same time, as one of them has always to keep watch. The night was full of dangers and suprises. Bani sighs to herself as she looks on the smile of Rano's face. She has missed that smile so much. She tries hard to recall the last time she has seen Rano sleep so peacefully. All she knows is that it must have been ages ago. Seeing her sister apparently having a happy dream, she doesnt have the heart to wake her up and decides to leave her sleeping. Bani keeps singing old childhood songs the next two hours to keep herself awake and she doesnt't regret staying up at all as she can watch how the beautiful sun comes up and brightenes the sky and turns dark into light and the sleepy into wake and the silent into noise. A simple smile adornes her face as she decides to herself that this day will be just as beautiful as the previous night.
The sunlight wakes up Rano and for a change she gets up at once, without moaning and without looking grumpy. She plants a kiss on Bani right cheek as she realises that her big sister has let her sleep throughout the night, depriving herself from any rest. 'I promise you didi one day I will repay you back and make you proud of the fact that I'm your little sister.' Bani giggles as she hugs her sister. 'We will see about that missy.' Rano free herself from the suffocating hug and jumps up. 'Guess what didi?!' Bani gets up herself and shakes her head and puts her hand up as a sign for Rano not to speak any further. 'No Rano, I don't have time to listen to one of your fantasies right now. We have to go to the main street quickly. Rajeev must be already waiting for us.' Rano's faces drops. She doesnt know what bugs her more, the fact that her sister isnt ready to hear her out or the mentioning of the name she hated most in the world. Rajeev was one of Munna bhai's men. Munna bhai was the local goon of the south side of Mumbai city. He decided who could work on his streets and in which area. It had took Bani a two hour plea to get herself and Rano a job. Every morning they meet Rajeev and take tissue boxes, flower or any other stuff from him to sell it on the streets. At the end of the day they had to return the unsold stuff to him and give him the money they made. According to his mood he would give them their salary. If he was in a very bad mood he would shout at them, spit at them and kick them away without a penny, cursing them for life. And if he was in a good mood he would give them some change and still shout and spit at them.
With heavy legs and a deep sigh both girls crossed each others arm and went to their daily job each of them drowned in her own thoughts.

Jai feels a terrible headache bashing his head up mercilessly. Little by little he regaines conscience. He moanes and tries to open his eyes. The little light that hits him, makes him scream and he quickly closes his eyes. His limbs are feeling numb and he doesnt have a clue where he is. All he knows is that he has a hangover and a bad one too. He keeps lying there, without any sense of time or reality. He doesnt attempt to move again or to open his eyes and look around. Untill the smell of a strong cup of hot capuccion makes him come back to his senses. He feels how a soft hand goes through his hair. He feels Roshini's hot breath on his face, as she is whisphering his name trying to wake him up. He is thankful that she isnt speaking out loud, making his migraine worse. He slowly openes his eyes, but closes them again quickly. The light is just too bright for him to handle. It is already afternoon and the sun is shining high and bright. Roshini gets the hint and she quickly walks to the other side of her bedroom and closes the curtains, making the room darker and protecting Jai's eyes from a light invasion. He murmles a thank you and tries his best to lift himself from the bed. After a couple of attempts he get himself seated in Roshini's bed. He doesnt have a clue how he ended up there and what happened last night. For someone who hardly ever drinks he must have seriously blown it yesetrday. He feels how Roshini is giving him a concerned look. He gives her a faint smile. 'Ok I'm ready. Chalo tell me how on earth did I get myself drunk yesterday? Whoes party did I enjoy so much? Oh and please whatever you tell me dont tell me I misbehaved with you. Id never be able to forgive myself!' A sexy grin was playing on his face as he gave his best girl-friend a naughty smile. Roshini couldnt stop herself from giggling. Drunk or not, hangover or not Jai always knew how to charm and amuse her.
She looks at her friend and wonders how he could mess up his life so bad. Jai was a 28 year old man from a good family. He was born with a golden spoon in his mouth, but yet managed to grow up to being a sensible and down to earth man. He joined the family business at an early age and is now in full charge of it. To the outworld and his worst enemies he is known to be the ruthless arrogant and proud business tycoon, but to his family and very close friends he is known as a kind and fun loving guy. He is a real heartthrob too. When he was a bachelor untill 6 moths ago, he was the most eligable and down hunted bachelor around. Roshini sighs at the thought. If only he hadn't met that witch she thinks to herself. About 7 months ago Jai met a girl named Pia in a nightbar where a friend of his was celebrating his birthday. It took her just 1 month to win Jai's love. Jai who never got himself trapped in the many traps girls set for him, was now the prey of a golddigger. Many a friend, including Roshini warned him but he didnt believe them, yelled at them and broke even ties with some. One of them was Roshini. She feels how tears are burning behind her eyes as she recalls how he had yelled at her in a public restaurant and accused her of being jealouse of Pia as she was in love with him. Roshini knew at that time very well that she loved Jai. She loved him with all her heart, but she had never showed him she loved him beyond friendship as she knew that all he would ever give her was friendship. The fact that he knew about her little secret shocked her, but the fact that he made her and her love ridiculous infront of so many people had broken her heart and when the news was all over page 3 the next morning, she knew just like her heart their friendship got broken too. She has been avoiding him ever since. Avoiding parties he was in, places he would go to and events he took care of. She refused to hear anything about him ever again. Yesterday she saw him back again for the first time after nearly 4 months. She didnt knew he would be at that disco, since he hardly ever went to disco's, unless a dear friend insisted on him. He wasnt realy a party animal, unlike her. After dancing for hours she went to get herself a drink only to find Jai almost falling out of his chair, drunk and out of his senses. He was murmeling to himself and his red eyes were fixed on that witch who was dancing with Rahul Oberoi, the son of Jai worst business rival. It broke her heart to see him break himself that way.
Jai kept looking at his friend, wondering what took her so long to reply. The look on his face changed as he screamed out with horror 'Oh my god! I did misbehave with you!', bringing Roshini back from her thoughts. She burst out laughing and assured him that he didnt do such a thing. 'No you didnt. But you did behave badly with another lady yesterday, but I bet you don't remember that. You were too drunk, trying to forget that Pia has ditched you for Rahul!' Roshini bites her tongue as she realised that she had spoken too much. She quickly got up and softly apologised to Jai, before she left the bedroom and her appartment.

Edited by Grumpyyy - 18 years ago
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Part 3

Rano and Bani were sitting on the pavement, catching their breath as the cars kept passing them by in hundreds. Bani grabed the small bread she has just bought and devides it in two. Giving 3/4 of the bread to Rano and keeping 1/4 for herself. 'Didi! Now you are doing it again.' Bani told her sister to shut her mouth and finish her bread. 'Didi?' Bani gave an annoying look to Rano. 'What is it this time?' Rano sighed deeply. 'I've been trying to tell you something important since yesterday night, but you havent giving me one chance. Can I please tell you now?' Bani finished her bread and got up. She grabbed the tissueboxes and wiped her mouth. 'Later Rano, later. We don't have time for chats we have to work.' Rano got frustrated by now. 'No did we dont hav e to work anymore!', she said in a winning tone. But Bani had already hit the streets again by and couldn't hear what her sister said.

Jai slammed the door of his car and walked towards his office. He was greeted by his employees, but he didnt care to reply them back, leaving them wondering what happened to their boss. Jai told his secretary to cancel all his meetings and block all phone calls and visitors. After that he slammed the door of his office and dropped himself in his comfortable chair. He kept starring at the picture of Pia that was standing on his desk. He laughed mockingly at himself. Grabbed the picture and threw it in the dustbin. Pressed the intercom button and yelled for coffee. His secretary, an middle age lady who was kind hearted and always treated Jai more like a son than her boss, came walking in. She put a hot cup of Jai's favourite tea infront of him. 'What the hell is this?' Mrs. Singh was taken aback by the tone of her boss. 'Your tea sir.' Jai rolled his eyes in annoyance. 'I've ordered coffee Niharika!' Mrs. Singh felt hurt that Jai called her like that by her first name, while she has always been like a mother to him and he had always adressed her with respect. 'Ji, I thought you meant tea, but accidentally said coffee. Since you never drink coffee.' Jai got out of his chair. 'If I say coffee I mean coffee! So I suggest you clean those old ears of you and do exactly what I tell you next time. If you can't handle your work anymore, just tell me and Ill get a new secretary!' Mrs. Singhs eyes well up with tears. She was too shocked to say anything. She just kept looking at a furious Jai and wondered what has gotten into him. 'What the hell are you starring at me for! Take this tea and get lost. Forget about the coffee, just dont show me your face for the rest of the day! Move!' Poor mrs. Singh took the tea with trembling hands and left Jai's office in tears. Jai dropped himself back in his seat and started his computer in frustration.

Bani was exhausted and so was Rano. The had reached their tree and dropped themselves under it. The lack of sleep was almost getting fatal for Bani. She could hardly keep her eyes open. She lied down immediately, while Rano sat next to her. 'Di, now its evening. Can I now please tell you something?' Bani rolled her closed eyes at her sisters determination. She mumbled a yes as she was on her way to dreamland. 'Didi, you know that jerk who misbehaved with you yesteday? I mean the one in that black car.' Bani just nodded her head. 'Well I got even with him you know. Look!' Bani wasnt planning to open her eyes. She just hummed a yes. Rano tried to turn her towards her but Bani didnt give in. Rano sighed in frustration. 'Fine, dont look. I will keep his wallet to myself!' Bani's eyes flew open. She got up in a swift. 'Rano what did you say?' Rano smiled and sat infront of her sister. 'Look didi. I stole his wallet. And its loaded I tell you. He also has some cards in it. We are rich now. We dont have to ever work again!' Bani blinked a couple of times and looked from her happy sister to the brown leather wallet she was holding and back. Before she realised what she was doing she gave Rano a tight slap, making her drop to the ground. Bani's eyes filled with tears and she couldnt stop crying. 'Why Rano? Why did you have to do that? This is not what I've thaught you! Is this the way you want to make me proud Rano? Is this it?! Well I'm not proud of you being my sister! I'm ashamed! Do you hear me?! Im ashamed of you!' Bani was heartbroken. She never wanted to live of dirty money nor did she ever wanted to beg. She wanted to live from her hard earned money, even if it was very little. Rano got up and looked at her sister. Her words had hit her soul. She never meant to hurt Bani, she just wanted to take revenge from that jerk! 'I'm sorry didi. Please forgive me.' Rano started crying like crazy and Bani pulled her in her arms. Both of them hugging tightly and crying for their own reasons.

Jai opened his officedoor and look at his secretaries desk. Mrs. Singh was holding her head on the desk. Jai coughed to get her attention. She jumped off her chair immediately. Her eyes were red and her face wet with tears. Jai felt how his heart stung him and he felt even smaller than he already did. 'Yes sir. Im sorry I was already leaving.' He shook his head and walked towards her. He placed his left hand on her shoulder and hold placed his right hand on her face, while he wiped her tears with his thumb. 'Niharika auty.' His voice was trembling and sounded odd to him. The lump in his throat made it hard for him to speak. He was on the verge of breaking down. He had a hardtime holding back the tears that were standing in his eyes. He forced himself to complete what he came to tell mrs. Singh. 'Niharika aunty. Ever since I was a little boy and came to visit papa, you made sure of all my comforts. You would lift me, make me laugh, wash my hands, wipe my nose and give me candy. When I grew older you stood by me with you advice and when I took over the office you stayed with me and stood by me and made me pass every hurdle. And I ...' He laughed mockingly. 'And I'm just a unthankfull jerk. Look how Ive repaid you back. Ive misbehaved with you so badly. Please forgive me mother.' He broke down crying on her shoulder and she ... she just patted him, being a true mother.

It was early morning and Bani had once again spent the night up. This must have been one of her worst and longest nights. It didnt seem to end. She spent all night thinking about what went wrong with Rano. She had hold the wallet in her hand. Too afraid to open it. When the same came up and she was able to see again properly she carefully opened the wallet to check its content. There were a couple of cards and alot of money. Bani looked for an adresse, she found a card belonging to Walia's Enterprises. There was a picture of the guy who has insulted her badly. She shook her head in disappointment and put the card back. 'Rano? Get up. It's time to go looking for Jai Walia.'
Edited by Grumpyyy - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow!!! i just think you are a great writer!!! 👏 👏 👏 awesome 2 parts.... please continue soon!!!roshni bits her toung.... lol.... 😆


very nice ff!!!!!!!! 😊

kritu 😉
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ooopssssss...... you wrote the part three already! 😃 huh....u are a fast girl! 😉
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Originally posted by: nibbles

No wonder the name sounded so familair!!😆

Loved this FF hun.......and now it's a KS FF!!😛

Waiting for you to continue!!

😆 Thx sweety. I just completed copying and adjusting the three parts I had already written. Ill try to write part 4 in a little while. 😉

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Originally posted by: Kritika.

wow!!! i just think you are a great writer!!! 👏 👏 👏 awesome 2 parts.... please continue soon!!!roshni bits her toung.... lol.... 😆


very nice ff!!!!!!!! 😊

kritu 😉

Thx a million sweety. Thats so sweet of you. I will try to write the next part in a little while. Just trying to figure out what will happen next. 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow if u promise to update next part i will wait for ur part basically i am avoiding my sleep so u better update
pls its really nice story yarr u got me glued to ur ff 👏
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Originally posted by: Grumpyyy

Thx a million sweety. Thats so sweet of you. I will try to write the next part in a little while. Just trying to figure out what will happen next. 😆



ya... and that is very hard to figure out what is going to happen next.....😆 waiting for u to continue!!!😃

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