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Posted: 6 years ago
#41
Tanshi to ahaman

T - chalo ahana bahut tired Hun sone do 😳

A - ha ha di so jao😉 (in a legg pulling)

T - ahana ki bachi chal bhag yahan se

Same scene in rishi's room

Later in tanu's room

Someone coming from window
It's Rishi who come n silent
Sit down on the ground n
Starring sleeping tanu R is about to kiss Tanu

Just then Tanu awake with a jerk😆😳

T - uff jhalli😳 s_s_sapno
Sapne bhi moron aane lga ab to😕
☺️

(It's a dream)

In rishi's room

A beautiful girl in chiffon red
Sari 😳 comes n whispered something in
Rishi's ear 😳

G - wake up u moron 😳

Rishi grab her n fall from bed

R - sapna tha
R - ab ye sapne aane rah Gaye the bas😆😆😉


PS wo word guys 😳teardrop wo word to u glad u guys liked
Cotton candy u r fine na I just pray everything will be fine in Kerela...all r just amazing 😳guys keep this goes on. It's a beautiful thread hope all will join😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#42
Rishi:sapna tha... Kash yeh sach hoti to... Just then he realise what he had said...
Rishi:Arey Rishi tu pagal ho gaya kya??? Kyun aise baat kar rahe ho??? What is special in her to always dream about her... He stood sometime like that...n said.
R:Kya nhi us ke paas?? N smiles by imagining her...

On the otherside...
Tanu:Kya hua Tanu tujhe???Kyun aise uske baare m hi soch rahi ho???kya lagta hai woh tera??
Tanu also starts dream him n unknowingly she says
Tanu:meri jaan...❤️...

TanShi both lost in each others dreams...


Morning
As Tanu didn't woke up... Ahana goes to call her.
A:Dii...tujhe kya hua?? Jaldi utho... Its 8 now...
T:please sone do Rishi...
A:Rishi..😲
Just then realise what she had said...
T:wo...wo mn... I thought I was in office...
A:Acha to phir tu office pe sone k liye jaa rahi thi???
T:Ahana bas karo yeh... Meine kaha tha na...chodo yeh sab... I want to go office...
A:usse milne k liye jaa rahi ho?😉...
T:Ahana...
A:Ok ok tu jaa... Ja k fresh ho jaa...




PS:Superb part Gilehri... Wo word dear...
I'm really lucky to have friends like u... ❤️ u infinity...

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Posted: 6 years ago
#43
Tanu ready in hurry n come at dinning table. Where is my lunch...I am getting late plz hurry
Sarda (tanu's mother)- nasta to krle.
Tanu- mamma me late ho rhi hu.
Sarda- are kitna time lagega nasta krne me chal beth.
Tanu- ok ok (she takes a slice of sandwich) ok mamma bye bye
Sarda- thik se to kha... ye ladki bhi na

On the other hand rishi is also ready in hurry n come at dinning table
Rishi- mom I am getting late. Me office ja rh hu bye.
Rano- are nasta to krle
Rishi- nasta me office me kr lunga. Ok mom bye...
Raj- oye ruk kithe ja rh h
Rishi- papaji office ja rh hu
Raj- ha me bhi tere sath office chal rh hu
Rishi- office per kyu
Raj- oye chal khothiya apne baap se puchta h

Both reach office
Rishi- papaji aap jao me gadi park krke ata hu.
On the other hand tanu is also reach
Tanu- aj to bahut late ho gaya
Both rishi n tanu in hurry. Both r not see each other n crashed

Tanu- awww.. dekh kr nahi chal sakte. Mujhe lag gayi
Rishi- tum bhi to dekh kr chal sakti th na
Tanu- tum apni galti kabhi man nahi sakte
Rishi- haha tum to hamesha apni galti manti ho

Both r arguing that time rajji comes and interrupt

Raj- chup karo tum dono hamesha ladte rhte ho
Both saying in rhythm
Ye ladta hai/ ladti hai
Tanu- me ladti hu tum ladte ho ladne ke bahane dudte ho
Rishi- oohhh.. me ladta hu ya tum...ye sb tum krti ho
Tanu- aaahhh chup
Rishi- tum chup
Raj- chup karo tum dono or andar chalo

They enters into the office
Raj- every body listen. Today I am come to a important announcement. Our company is collaboration with
Rm company. This is very big achievement of our company. so we will celebrate our achievement. I am invite all the people at my home at sharp 7 pm.
Raj- tanu ithe aa beta
Tanu- ji uncle
Raj- or party ki poori jimmedari teri..chal mere sath ghar
Tanu- me..per me kaise??? Me nahi kr paungi..
Raj- sirf tu hi kr sakti h puttar..me jb bhi tujhe dekta hu na to tu apni lagti h..mujhe tujh pe bahut biswas hai..bol karegi na
Tanu- (given smile) ha karungi..

Neha see both of them angerly.

Ps: wo for late update... Where r u foxi, cotton candy, gilheri n moni.

Edited by Smita_rawat - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#44
Neha(in her mind):I will not leave them... By saying this she leaves.
Both Raj n Tanu goes to Rishi's cabin. They knock the door.
Rishi:Yes come in...
Raj n Tanu enter into the room.
Raj:haan puttar tu bhi aa ja hamare sath...
Rishi(replies instantly by looking Tanu):main??kyun?? Aapke saath aapki chamchi h na...apki beti...phir m kyun??
Raj:hey chupkar...phir se tu shuru kiya...
Tanu(by teasing Rishi):Dekhiye bauji...I mean uncle ji.. Who started fighting...
Rishi:tum...phirse...mujhse ladna shuru ki...
Tanu:mai nahi tum... Mere pas sabut h...
Raj looks both in confusion n says
Raj:Donon k dono chup ho jaa warna mai...
This makes both TanShi shocked n they stand there in confusion.
Raj:aa dono mere saath...
Trio left office n reach home...


Hai...lemon... Happy that u came... I was waiting for u... Where are others??? N u rocked it
Edited by gopsss - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#45
Trio reaches bedi house
When they enter into the house biji comes
Biji- are wah rishi apne sath meri hone wali bahu ko laya hai.
Rishi n tanu shocked to listen this
Biji- kitni sunder hai..chand ka tukda hai...kitni sodi hai..

Rishi interrupt
Rishi- aisa kuch nahi h biji...ye meri..
Biji- haha... me janti hu ye teri hai...chal chad mujhe isse baat krne de
Biji- kya naam hai tumhara???
Tanu- tanu
Biji- tanu..bada hi pyaara naam hai... waise isne tujhe pataya ya tune isse??? Chup kyu hai.. bol na
Tanu- wo mmmee..
Tanu looks at rishi
Biji- uski taraf kya dekh rhi h..bol
Rishi holds biji's hand n going inside
Biji- are kh le ja rh h..ruk
Rishi says slowly
Rishi-meri pyaari biji.. aisa kuch nahi hai..wo meri..
Biji- kya dheere dheere bol rh h..dhora jor se bol..
Rishi frustrated n said to raj

Rishi- plz papaji..aap kuch khte kyu nahi..
Raj laughing n say
Raj- biji... Aisa kuch nahi jaisa aap soch rhi h...ye rishi ki pa hai..or sarda parjai hai na unki beti hai...aj party hai na uska arrangement ye karegi... isliye aai hai yah..
Biji- ooohhh... To ye baat hai to phele kyu ni bataya...
Rishi- hum to bta hi rh th...per aap sune tb na..
Biji looks at tanu n say
Biji- bilkul apni maa pe gayi hai..jaisi sarda hai sanskari waisi hi tu hai..
Tanu- tanu touches biji feets...n leaves for arrangement..
Biji told to raj
Biji- badi hi sodi hai..aisa man krta hai...isse apne ghar me rakh lu..
N biji sees rishi n said
Biji- waise badi hi sodi hai..tu isse bahu bana ke le aa...bol layega na
Rishi- wo mmmee...
Rishi( in his mind)- rishi beta yah se bhaag ja...agar nahi gaya to biji teri shaadi is tanu se krake manegi..
Rishi turn n run fast n collide to manpreet

Biji- are kh ja rh h.. sunto..lagta h sarma gaya...

Ps: wo for u cotton candy...n u rocked yaar..rishi is also come with tanu n raj...really excellent yaar..n where r all...
Edited by Smita_rawat - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#46
Manpreet:Kya hua bhai???kyun aise bhaag rahe ho??
As Rishi was about to answer biji answered in hurry...
Biji:Wo to sharma k...
Manpreet:Kya?? Sharam??? Wo bhi bhai ko??kyun?
Biji(by pointing Tanu):isse pucho...jiski vajah se usko sharam aaya usse hi pucho...😛😉
Both TanShi got shocked first...by seeing TanShi in a confusion Raj comes forward n says Biji...
Raj:Aap aao mere saath...aap yahan rukna ham sab ko acha nahi...
By saying this raj takes biji from there...
Meanwhile Rishi hits Manpreet...n says
Rishi:tujhe ab khush mil gayi...
Manpreet:bhai wo mn...
By saying this Manpreet runs from there n Rishi goes behind him... Tanu starts smiling at the cute moments of brothers...


Lemon I always love ur parts... N wo word for ur compliment... Love u...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#47
Rishi hits manpreet
Rishi- ajkl tu mujhe bohut pareshan krne laga hai
Manpreet- are bhai chod do na yaar...ab bache ki jaan loge kya...dekho papaji ap samjhao na ( manpreet lying to rishi)
Rishi- papaji kh h papaji..u lier
Manpreet pushes rishi n run
Rishi- ruk kh jata h
Manpreet makes shield to tanu
Manpreet- tanu bachao...dekho apne bhai ko koi aise marta h kya
Tanu- dekho rishi koi apne bhai ko aise marta hai kya...agar isse koi galti ho gayi to ise maaf kr do
Rishi- dekho tanu tum hum bhaiyo ke beech mat aao...hat jao samne se
Tanu- nahi me nahi hatungi...jo krna h kr lo...kitne ghadush ho tum...
Rishi irritate n say mom dekho manpreet ko
Manpreet- mom mene kuch nahi kiya
Manpreet turn nobody was there
Manpreet- bhai kitne bade jhuthe ho aap..
Rishi- ha to juth tu hi bol sakta h...I am rbk... I am always win.
Manpreet wants to run but this time rishi holds his hands...ab kh jayega baccu...
both of them fight...they pushed tanu unknowingly...when tanu is falling... rishi pulling to himself...n their eye lock...n both lost in each other...
Manpreet sees them n smile
Manpreet- me kuch khta hu to bhai marte hai...or ab dekho...chal beta manpreet nikl le yah se
Biji also sees them...dekha mene kh th na inke beech kuch to hai...biji ki teeji aakh se koi nahi bach sakta..

Ps: wo for u cotton candy n love u too baby.. it's my pleasure that u like my update 😳😊

Edited by Smita_rawat - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#48
Manpreet leaves from there... Biji acts cough...n says
B:jab mn bolti hu tab bolega kuch bhi nhi...par ab... kuch kuch hota hai kya Rishi???
This makes both TanShi to come back to senses...n Rishi in frustration says...
R(by stammering):woh...woh...chotte ne kiya h...
B:maine dekha... Sab kuch dekha...😉
R:aapne kya dekha???
B(by singing):Kuch kuch hota hai...
Then Tanu was about to go...just then biji holds her hand n say
B:ab tu kaha ja rahi ho??? Mere pote ko company do...
T:kya company???
B(by teasing her):kya woh bhi mn hi bolun??
Both TanShi got shocked... Before biji could say anything Rishi takes her with him... Raj comes there n gives instructions of her duty...
R:Beta... event management wale sab kuch karega...tu sirf supervising ka kam karna h...
T:haan uncle ji mn kar lungi...


PS:Superb part Lemon... How r u???

Edited by gopsss - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#49
Tanu involved in her work..
Rishi also goes to his room.

In khurana house
Bani calling neha but she didn't listen...she hits neha
Neha- aaahhh mamma mujhe lag gayi..kya kr rhe ho
Bani- tu kya kr rhi h...kb se awaz de rhi hu...tu sunti hi nahi h...kitna kaam pada h ghar me..
Neha- are mamma aj bedi house me party hai...me uski prepration kr rhi th...
Bani- kya challi ab bta rhi h mujhe..mujhe bhi kitni tayaari krni h...
Neha- tayaari krni h..apko kya krna h
Bani- mujhe bhi to acha dikhna h...abhi meri umra hi kya h..aj bhi me 16 ki lagti hu...hai ki nahi???
Neha- (laughing) ha mamma ha...per mujhe sabsi achi dress choose krni h...mujhe aisa dikhna h ki rishi mujhe dekhe to dekhta hi rh jaye...
Bani- are tu to kuch bhi pehan le beautiful lagati h...
Neha- are mamma aap ni jante pehle to us tanu ka rishi diwana th per ab to raj uncle bhi us tanu ki tarif krte h..
Bani- acha... us tanu ne aisa kya kr diya..koi baat ni aj party me us tanu ko dekh lenge..

Here tanu complete her work n goes to her house.
Ahana- di tu ye pehan...sb dekte rh jayenge...
Tanu- mujhe kisi ko kuch nahi dikhana...
Ahana- plz dii...ye dress phen le mere liye plz..
Tanu- ok ok phen lungi.. notanki...
Tanu going for ready
Tanu- thanthana...I am ready...
Ahana- di tu kitni sundar lag rhi h...aj ek do to tujhe dekr behosh ho jayenge...
Tanu-( holds ahana's ear) tu phir shuru ho gayi..
Ahana- ok ok sorry sorry..ab nahi karungi..
Tanu- ok next time mt krna..

Sarda comes
Sarda- meri dono betiyon ko kisi ki nazar na lage..ab chale der ho rhi h...papa bahar wait kr rhe h
Tanu- ha mamma chalte h..
When tanu enter in to the bedi house... rishi sees tanu..
Rishi- wow...(rishi lost his senses )
Biji sees khurana family n go for welcome...

Ps: wo for cotton candy...I am fine dear...what about u...


Edited by Smita_rawat - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Rishi comes forward to come to Tanu... While moving he collapses with a waiter n the juice which the waiter had carried falls on him... He got wet...
By looking at Rishi, Tanu n Ahana start laughing...
Sharda hits them n says chup ho jaa... Somehow Tanu manage laughing but ahana was not able to control...
Rishi in frustration goes to his room...
Meanwhile raj, rano n Manpreet comes there
Raj:welcome welcome andar aayiye...
Khuranas enter Bedi house... Rano n Sharda goes to their discussion... Raj n Veeru starts sharing their old memories... Then Tanu goes to check final touches... Ahana was alone there...
Manpreet sees ahana still laughing... He asks her.
M:Kya hua moti??? Kyun has rhi ho?
By hearing moti... Ahana's face turns red... She says...
A:moti teri hone wali... Sukde tille... Chupkar warna mai tera muh tod dungi...
M:kar ke dikha...
They starts fighting again...
Meanwhile Tanu comes back from checking n sees them fighting...
Tanu tries to stop their fight but she fails n gets a hit... She was about to fall but someone holds her...


PS: I'm fine dear... Really wo word Lemon for little part... I'm not able to write long one... When I write it, it is not uploading...

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