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Posted: 6 years ago
#51
Some one holds her n pulling to himself that was none other than rishi singh bedi.
Tanu- (she close her eyes because of fear)
Rishi- open ur eyes...u r save now
Tanu- open her eyes...n takes deep breathing...
Rishi- kya hua...kuch bologi..tum thik ho na
Tanu- ya ya...I am fine...thanks

That time bani n her family enter n sees rishi n tanu closeness...
Neha- dekha mamma...ye dono koi moka nahi chodte...or ye bhenji tanu kitni sithi banti h...
Bani- ha kitni bholi bani firti h...isko to aj me chodungi nahi tu bus dekti ja...

Here manpreet n ahana is still fighting...
Tanu holds ahana...
Tanu- stop fighting...hum yah party me hai..behave urself...
Ahana- tu hat ja dii... aj me is sukde ka muh tod dungi...
Manpreet- tu kya muh todegi moti...hath to laga ke bata..
Ahana- moti kisko bola be ..
Rishi also trying to stop fighting...but manpreet is not listen anything...
Rishi- chote...stop fighting...chod de ladki hai...
Manpreet- ladki h... kon ye ( he laughs loudly)
Ahana- me ladki nahi hu...abhi batati hu...sukde
Ahana n manpreet fights loudly n yuvraj listen this...
Yuvraj- yah kya ho rh h...
Rishi- kb se lad rh h ye dono...chal hum manpreet ko ander leke jate h
Rishi n yuvraj forcibly take manpreet.
Manpreet- bhai aap dono mujhe ander kyu le aye ho...aj me us moti ko chodta nahi..
Tanu- ab tu chup hoja...
Ahana- tu kyu beech me ayi...me aj uska muh tod deti...
Tanu- hum party me h...agar maa ne dekh liya to gussa karengi...

Ps: koi baat nahi cotton candy...tumhara update chota hota h per interesting hota h... I have also facing some trouble when I post.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#52
A:Mn uss sukde ko chodne wali nhi hu... I will not leave him...😡
T:oh... Ab bas kar Ahana... Aao let's enjoy party...
A:Haan ab aati hu... Par ek din zaroor mai us sukde ka muh tod dungi...
T:ok...ok...(in her mind:Rishi...hamari ladai in dono ki se kitna behtar h... 1000 guna achi h!!!)
Both Tanu n Ahana go to enjoy party...
In ManShi room
M:Bhai...aap kyun mujhe yahan lekar aya h?? I want to kill that Moti...😡
R:Manpreet bas kar yaar... Woh hamare mehman hen... Behave...
M:par us moti... 😡
R:Ab yeh sab chodo lets enjoy our party...
M:aap k liye ab chodta hu...par ek din I will take my revenge...
R:Haan chalo...

ManShi with Yuvi also come to party hall... Manpreet notices all are tired with usual customs of party... So he takes a mike n goes to the centre of hall...
M:As I know all of u will be tired of common procedures of party... To come out from the mood I am going to make a couple dance here... And for that I want some couples...
The first couple is My dad n mom... Mr Raj Singh Bedi n Mrs Rano Singh Bedi...
The second couple is Mr Veerendar Khurana n Mrs Sharda Khurana...
Both raj n rano and Veeru n Sharda got shocked as well as feels shy...
Meanwhile Bani asks Neha to go n dance with Rishi... Neha comes forward to dance with Rishi...
Manpreet says the third couple is... Biji comes to Manpreet n whispers some thing to him.
M:And the third is none other than my Bhai n Tanu...
Both TanShi as well as Neha got shocked...



PS:Really wo word Lemon for ur compliment... I love u... As usual u rocked it!!!
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Posted: 6 years ago
#53
Tanu n rishi looks to each other n hesitate..
Ahana- are dii...kya soch rhi h..ja na..
Tanu- nahi ahana... mujhe nahi jana.. mujhe dance nahi ata
Ahana insists to tanu
Ahana- kya diii...ja na
Manpreet also insists to rishi..
Manpreet- kya hua bhai...jao na..
Rishi-nahi chote.. mujhe nahi jana
Biji looks both of them...
Biji- ye aise nahi manege...mujhe hi kuch krna padega..
Biji holds tanshi hands n pulls on dance floor..
Biji- chalo ab suru ho jao..
Rishi n tanu looks each other n hesitate ...rishi gives his hand to tanu...
Rishi- may i???
Tanu holds rishi's hand..n a romantic song play (sb tera)..
Firstly they have hesitated...but after some while...they looks in each other eyes...n their eye lock..they lost in each other...they feel some connection to each other...
Everyone happy to seeing them..
Raj n biji r also happy to seeing their chemistry..
Biji- rajji...kitni sunder jodi h...kitne pyaare lagte h sath me...kiski nazar na lage.
Raj- nahi lagegi biji..n gives smile
Both tanshi was so lost in each other that's why they did not realise that the song was over...
Everyone seeing as a shocked...
Neha n bani r also shocked and give angry look...
Manpreet- (seeing all of them n says) wow bhai...what a dance...so guys give a big applause to my bhai n tanu...
Everyone clapping...
Tanu n rishi find their senses...n feel awkward...
Ahana- (hugs to tanu) wow dii...kya dance th...(ahana teasing to tanu)... tujhe dance nahi ata ha...hahaha
Manpreet n yuvi also teasing to rishi..
Manpreet- kya dance th yuvi bhai... ankhon hi ankhon me isara ho gaya...
Yuvi- sahi kh chote...kya dance th..
Both r laughing loudly...

Ps: wo word u cotton candy..I love u too dear..ur updates are always entertaining me...plz update like that..n sb tera song is my fav..so that's why I'm add that.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#54
Ahana started teasing Tanu... But Tanu was lost in her own thoughts...
Tanu(herself):what happened to me??? Why always I feel strange when Rishi comes close to me...
Ahana notices Tanu is lost in somewhere... To make her sense she taps her...Tanu come back to her sense with a jerk... N Ahana says...
A:dii m tujhse baat kar rahi hu...
T:haan kya bol rahi thi???
A:oh ab mujhe samajh gayi... Tu us ki yaadein m phas gayi thi... 😉..
T:Kiski???
A:uski...jis ke saath tu dance kiya...,jisse tu hamesha ladti thi... 😉.
T:Ahana ab bhut ho gyi... Bas kar...
A:Ok ok m bas karti hu... Par mujhe jaanti h...sab kuch k bare me jaanti hai... 😛😉...
T:Ahana...
A:Tanu dii😃... I know... I know!!!
Tanu hits ahana to stop... Ahana continues her teasing... Both of them got engaged in their cute fight...

ManVi was still teasing Rishi...
M:Kya kya bol raha tha... Par ab... Junior Michael Jackson ban k aaya hai...
Y:Haan chote... Yeh insaan kyun itna jhoot bolta h... 😉...
R:Bas kar dono... Phir se shuru kiya...
M&Y:Humne kya kiya???
Rishi was distracted by what happened to him... He in anger leaves there in hurry...ManVi tries to stop him... But he didn't stopped... As he moved hurry he didn't notice Neha there... He bumps on her...

PS:Wo word Lemon for late... Love u infinity jaan... Superb part with lost TanShi ... Yes I too like Sab tera on TanShi...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#55
Neha- dekh kr nahi chal sakte... kon hai??
Neha turns
Rishi- sorry sorry...wo galti se...
Neha- (says in between) koi baat nahi rishi...mujhe to acha laga tum takraye to..
Rishi- kya kh tumne??
Neha- nahi kuch bhi to nahi...
Rishi- ok
Rishi moves ahead..neha holds his hand
Neha- ruko ( neha holds rishi's hand tightly n pulling herself)
Kh ja rhe ho rishi..( she rotates her finger on rishi's shoulder)shall we a dance??
Rishi- (he jerk her hand n gives angry expression) leave me...I am not interested..
( Rishi wants to leave but neha again holds his hand)
Neha- tum mujhe sayad galat samaz rhe ho..me to sirf dance krna chahti hu...bus
Tanu sees them but assumes wrong..n gets angry
(Rishi wants something to neha but he sees tanu)
Rishi jerks neha n goes to behind tanu..
Rishi- tanu..tanu listen..
Neha-( gets angry) ye tanu hamesha mere or rishi ke beech aa jati hai
Rishi- holds tanu's hand..ruko..meri baat suno..tum galat samaz rhi ho
Tanu- mera hath chodo rishi...mujhe kuch nahi sunna..
Rishi- tum galat samaz rhi ho..
Tanu- me galat samaz rhi hu..mene apni ankhon se dekha h..tum dono kis tarah...CHii!! Mujhe to bolte hue sharm ati h..
Rishi trying to convince tanu but she is not listen anything..
Rishi gets angry..n holds tanu's hand tightly...tumhe meri baat sunni hi padegi..
Tanu- rishi...chodo mera hath mujhe dard ho rh h..
Rishi sees that
Rishi- shit... Rishi apologize...I am sorry..me sach kh rh hu mene kuch nahi kiya
Rishi holds tanu's face with his hands.
Rishi- look at my eyes...tumne aise soch bhi kaise liya...ki mene us neha ke sath...mene aj din tk kisi bhi ladki ke sath aisa kuch nahi kiya..ki tumhe mujh pe sharm aye...n I mean it..
Tanu sees in rishi's eyes.. suddenly ahana comes.
Ahana- dii..dii..
Both looks at ahana's side
Ahana- shayad me galat waqt pe aa gayi..
At the same time manpreet comes..
Manpreet- (say slowly) yah kya ho rh h...I am sorry..u just guys carry on..
Ahana- u carry on..we leave..
Tanu- ahana kh ja rhi h..me ati hu tere sath..
Tanu n ahana leave..
Rishi- oo shit..ta..ta
Manpreet- sorry bhai..me galat waqt pe aya..per aap to usse ladte hai sabke samne..or akele me kuch or..
Rishi told about whole incidence..
Manpreet- omg..us neha ne aisa kiya..per aap tanu ko ye sb kyu bta rh th..
Rishi- me isliye bta rh th ki wo mujhe galat nahi samaze..
Manpreet- bhai agar wo apko galat bhi samaze to aapko itna fark kyu pad rh h..
Rishi- aisa kuch nahi h..wo to me..mmm
Manpreet- wo to me kya???
Here tanu also told to ahana about whole incidence..
Ahana- acha to aisa hua..to tujhe kyu bura laga.. tujhe kyu jalan ho rhi h
Tanu- mujhe.. mujhe kyu bura lagega..mujhe koi jalan nahi ho rhi
Ahana- agar tujhe jalan nahi ho rhi h..to thik h na kya fark padta h wo kisi k sath bhi ho..
Tanu- (say suddenly) firk padta h..wo mere sath kaam karta h isliye..
Ahana- oh dii..kyu juth bol rhi h mujhse or apne aap se..acha ye bta tujhe kya lagta h rishi juth bol rh h
Tanu- pta nahi..per uski ankhe to yahi kh rhi th ki wo sach kh rh h..
Ahana- ha dii wo sach kh rh h
Tanu shocked to listen this..
Ahana- dii jo ladka tujhe samazane ke liye itna desperate ho gaya..wo galat nahi ho sakta..or wo tujhe samaza hi kyu rh th..kis liye..kon h tu uski..
Tanu hear but nothing to say..
Ahana in her mind - di tujhe rishi se pyaar hone laga h..or tujhe pta hi nahi h..

Ps: wo for late..u r fabulous cotton candy.. hatts off to u yaar..

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Posted: 6 years ago
#56
Here Manpreet also(in his mind):bhai aapko Tanu se pyaar hone laga... But u r ignoring it...
Both ManShi goes to their room as Rishi don't want to stay there anymore...
Tanu n Ahana were searching for their parents...
T:maa-baap kahan hai??? Actually I want to go home...
A:haa dii dekhne ko nahin mil rahe h...
T:shayad rano aunty aur raj uncle k paas honge...
A:haa dii chal... Dekhte h...
T:haa chal...
Both Ahana n Tanu goes to search their parents... But they didn't met their parents. So they decided to move different direction.Ahana searches in ground floor n Tanu goes upstairs...
While Tanu goes to upstairs Biji comes to her and asks
B:Kya mere pote ko dekhne k liye jaa rahi ho?😉...
T:nhii nhi...biji m maa ko dekhne aayi hu...
B:kya saas ma ko dekhne k liye... 😉...
T:Are biji aise nhi m meri ma k liye aayi hu...
B:oh!!... Rishi ki saas ma k liye... 😛...
Tanu(in her mind):yeh biji aise nahi chodti... Chodti hi nhii...
B:chal beta...m mazak kar rahi thi...
Tanu goes n search her mom n dad... Unknowingly she opens Rishi's room n at d same time Rishi was coming outside... When door opened Rishi lost his balance n about to fall...this time Tanu holds him...
Biji sees this n laughs... 😆... She says
B:ab dekho...m pehle hi kaha tha na tu sirf aur sirf Rishi k liye aayi ho...😉...
But TanShi was lost in each other...they didn't heard anything... But AhaMan were there n they saw that..

PS:wo word Lemon... U r really talented dear... I was imagining all u had written... Some glimpses of old Kasam... 😳...
Edited by gopsss - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#57
Manpreet n ahana comes when they see rishi n tanu not listen than ahana calling tanu..
Ahana- diii...
Tanu n rishi finds their senses n get shocked..
Ahana- dii chale..
Tanu- ha chal..
Biji- kh ja rhi h..humne tumhe disturb kiya..
Tanu-( she goes shy) wo me..n she leaves
Biji looks at rishi side
Rishi is also leave
Manpreet- bhai suno...kya hua..uski galat fehmi dur ho gayi??
Rishi- oohh shit...ye to mene pucha hi nahi..abhi jata hu..
Manpreet- are per bhai..bhai to gaye kaam se
Tanu n ahana come down to stairs..
Bani sees both of them..
Bani- aj me is tanu ko nahi chodungi..
When tanu comes last stair..bani pushed her..
Tanu gets hurt on her foot..rishi sees everything...
Tanu- aaahhh
Ahana- tanu dii.. kya hua kaise gir gayi...
Sarda n veeru r also come
Sarda- tanu beta...kh chot lagi..
Neha n bani give smile
Neha- bahut acha kiya mamma..
Rishi comes fast..
Rishi- tum thik to ho tanu..tumhe kh chot lagi h..chalo room me chalte h..utho
Tanu trying to stand-up but she doesn't because of pain..
Tanu- mujhse nahi ho rh h..bahut dard ho rh h..
Rishi takes tanu to his lap n goes to room..call the doctor chote..
After treatment tanu feels ok..
Raj- ab kaisi h tanu..
Tanu- ab dard km h..
Tanu- bauji..ghar chale..
Veeru- haha chalte hai .
Rishi- per abhi tum thik nahi ho aj yahi rest kr lo..
Tanu- nahi mujhe ghar jana h..plz
Raj- rishi..tanu ko ghar jane de..
Rishi- per papaji..
Raj- rishi..
Rishi- ok papaji
Bani- haha rishi ab tanu thik h..ab hum ghar chalte h..waise bhi to do kadam ki doori pe ghar hai..
Ahana- ha di..chal ghar chalte h..per dii tu giri kaise..
Tanu- pta nahi.. mujhe aise laga jaise kisi ne dhakka diya..
Bani gets shocked n say
Bani- dhakka kon dega..tu hi dekh kr nahi chal rhi hogi..
Rishi gets angry..
Rishi- tanu thik kh rhi h..use kisi ne dhakka diya h..or wo koi or nahi..
That time neha doing drama..
Neha- mamma mujhe chakkar aa rh h..plz ghar chalo..
Bani- meri bacchi..kya hua tujhe..chal ghar chalte h..
Raj- bhabhiji.. doctor ko bula lete h
Bani- nahi bhaisab.. actually neha ko migraine h..ghar pe dawa legi to thik ho jayegi..chalte h..
Ahana takes tanu n leave..
Rishi looks tanu's side

Ps: wow cotton candy.. u r amazing yaar..wo word for u cotton candy..u always support to me alot baby..n plz update soon..
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Posted: 6 years ago
#58
Tanu n Ahana leaves with their parents. Neha n Bani also goes with them. Rishi looks Tanu n feels bad for her. As they crossed Bedi house Neha asks Tanu in hurry.
N:tere aur Rishi k beech mein aisa kya hai...jaise tu aur woh hamesha ek sath rehte...
T:kuch bhi nahi...
N:I was noticing u from d first day in office... Hamesha tum dono ek saath hi hai...
T:maine bola na...kuch bhi nhi...
Neha was not in the mood of leaving. Ahana gets angry on her questions...
A:ab tujhe sar pe dard nhi h kya... 😡... Mujhe lagta hai ki tu act kar rhi h...
Neha somehow manages to lie n says by holding her head...
N:bahut h...aur tujhe aur is ko dekhkar yeh zyada ho raha h...
A:to chup ho jaa... Kyun hamare pas hi reh rhi ho???
Neha goes in anger. Tanu n her family enters their home.
At Tanu's room.
Tanu is simply lying in her bed n thinking about today's party.
T:mujhe kyun aise lag rha h...ki mere aur us Rishi k beech mein koi rishta hai... I only used to fight with him...par aajkal... I'm feeling something special when I'm with him... Aise kya h???
By thinking so she sees moon n goes near window.
T:only u can give its answer moon... Sirf tumse hi mujhe iska jawab milega...
By saying this she goes to bed...
In ManShi room
Rishi also staring moon
R:mere aur Tanu k beech m kya h??? Jab m use dekhta hu mujhe wo apni lagta hai... Kyun??? U should give me its answer... By saying this he goes to bed. While lying on bed he thinks about Tanu.
R:aaj Tanu ko bhut chot lagi thi... I didn't asked her about it... Let me call her. By saying this he takes phone n dials tanu. As her phone was in silent mode, she didn't picked it.
R:its ringing. Par phone nhi utha rhi hai... Ek baar phir se check karu...
But no response from her. So Rishi thinks that to go n check himself.
R:ab mujhe khud jaana padega...
By saying this he leaves...

PS: Fabulous part dear!!! U rocked it Lemon.Wo word dear for late... Yes ofcourse u r my inspiration to write... Wo word for coming here dear... Love u...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Rishi comes at khurana's house..
Rishi touch to bell n when he pushed them suddenly he diverge...hold on rishi hold on
Rishi- agar bell bajayega to kya khega ki kyu aya hai..rishi beta tu yah aa to gaya per ander jayega kaise..usse milega kaise...think about it..
Rishi finds ways to enter into the house that time some body tap on his shoulder...
Rishi gets shocked n turned with closed eyes n says
Rishi- acc.. actually me..
Manpreet- are bhai me hu...yah kya kr rhe ho aap..
Rishi open his eyes n say..tu...n takes deep breathing..
Rishi- me to dar hi gaya th..tu yah kya kr rh hai..
Manpreet- me to aap ke piche aya..per aap yah aadhi raat me choro ki tarah kyu aye ho..
Rishi- actually me tanu ko dekhne aya th..pta nahi wo kaisi h..mene phone kiya usne uthaya bhi nahi..
Manpreet- bhai ab aadhi raat me usse kaise miloge..or ho sakta h wo so gayi ho isliye usne aapka phone nahi uthaya..
Rishi- aisa bhi to ho sakta h ki wo bimar ho isliye phone nahi uthaya ho...
Manpreet- bhai plz usse kl mil lena..or uske parents hai na uski dekhbhal ke liye..
Rishi- nahi mujhe usse abhi or isi waqt dekhna hai..or tu jana.. tujhe kisne bulaya hai yah...
Rishi pushed manpreet
Manpreet- ok ok bhai..per aap ander jayege kaise???
Rishi- kaise bhi krke chote...bus mujhe jana hai..
Rishi sees a open window...
Rishi- are wo dekh...
Manpreet- kya...kuch bhi to nahi h
Rishi- are wah nahi..uper dekh wo khidki khuli hui hai..
Manpreet- aap us khidki se jaoge..per kaise...rhne do bhai ghar chalte hai..
Rishi- u just wait n watch...
Rishi climbs above the support of the pipe... n he reaches tanu's room...
Rishi-are ye to tanu ka hi room hai...per in dono me tanu kon hai..
Rishi is not recognized because both ahana n tanu covers his faces by blanket...
Rishi- I think...ye h tanu..n he moves to touch to her..
Suddenly ahana said in her dream aj me tera muh tod dungi.. manpreet ke bacche..
Rishi- mujhe laga ye tanu h..ye to ahana hai..to meri tanu us side hai..rishi thinks...meri tanu ye mene kya kh..
Rishi goes to near tanu n wants to remove blanket but tanu turns n blanket remove...n moon light comes down on her face...rishi sees tanu n sit near to her...rishi lost his senses...he forget why he comes..
Rishi- kitni sunder lag rhi ho tum...or ye chand ki roshni tum pe char chand laga rhi h..pta nahi kya h tum me kyu me tum tk khicha chala ata hu..
Rishi was lost so much n his hand hit a glass...by glass sound..tanu is awake...
Tanu- kon hai...tanu sees rishi's side..tum
Rishi- hi...
Tanu- (say slowly)tum..tum yah kya kr rhe ho..mere room me..wo bhi adhi raat ko...
Rishi- wo me...
Tanu- wo me kya...(tanu standing)..
Rishi- tum beth jao.. tumhe chot lagi h na...
Tanu- me ab thik hu...tum yah kyu aye ho tum jao yah se..tanu pushed rishi...
Rishi- me yah kyu aya hu...me tumhare liye aya hu...
Tanu gets shocked to listen this...
Tanu- mere liye??
Rishi- tumhe chot lagi th me bahut pareshan th...ki tum kaisi hogi..mene itne calls kiye tumne uthaye bhi nahi...
Tanu feels happy to listen this...tanu wants to saying something..but ahana wakesup
Ahana- dii tu khidki ke pass kya kr rhi h...abhi bhi chand ko dekh rhi h kya soja...
Tanu gets shocked but ahana didn't see rishi because of sleepiness..tanu sees them n feel relax
Tanu- acha hua ye nind me th...ab tum jao rishi plz...
Rishi- per me tumhare liye...
Tanu- thanku very much...tumne meri itni fikr ki..plz ab jao..kisi ne dekh liya to..plz plz..ab jao
Tanu requested n folding her hands..

Rishi- says ok...per me yah se nahi ja paunga...
Tanu- ok me tumhe main gate se nikalti hu...
When rishi n tanu going outside...that time something is dropped down in the hall...
Tanu- ye kaisi awaaz th..tum jaldi chup jao.. me dekhti hu.
ahana hear that n wakes up...
Rishi hides outside of room...
Ahana- dii..ye kaisi awaaz th...lagta h ghar me chor ghus gaya hai...chal dekhte hai...
Tanu- me dekhti hu ahana tu rhne de...
Manpreet- oh no...dekh ke nahi chal sakta th..yah aya th bhai ki help krne..or khud hi fas gaya...

Ps: wo word for u cotton candy.. u fabulous always...I am always waiting for ur updates.. n it's my pleasure that u liked my updates...love u baby..wo for late..

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Tanu asks ahana to go n sleep. But Ahana denies.
A:dii tujhe chot lagi hai... Tu kaise chal sakti...mn dekhti hu...
T:nhii...Ahana. I'm alright now... Mn khud check karti hu...
A:nhii dii... I will check...
By saying this Ahana goes to check. Ahana comes to hall. She switch on light...
A:kaun h?? Kaun h???
As Manpreet sees Ahana he hides himself behind the sofa
A:yahan to koi nahi h
As ahana was about to leave Manpreet hits a vase near sofa... Ahana looks here n there... She initially shocks n gains some power n asks...
A:kau...kkk...kaun h???
Manpreet slowl y moves from there n somehow comes out of house..
Here TanShi is in discussion...
T: Ab hamare paas ek hi rasta h... Khidki...
R: Khidki??? Mn khidki se nhi ja paunga...
T:phir kaise nikaloge???
R:gate se...
T:gate se??? Ahana is there...phir kaise???
R:mere pas ek idea h... We can talk still ahana come...
T:haan good idea!.
N promptly she hits him n says.
T: tumhara dimag kharab ho gaya kya???
R:kya yeh idea tumhe pasand nahi aayi???
T:bhagvanji...kill me...
Rishi laughs seeing her cute antics...Tanu sees this n says him.
T:kyu has rhe ho??? Koi comedy show chal raha hai kya???
R:comedy show nhii... Ek joker mujhse baat kar rahi hai...
Tanu unknowingly shouts in anger
Just then she realised that no one knows about Rishi in their house..
T:Oh god... Phirse...
R:Tanu yeh tumne kya kiya ab sab k sab yahan aayega...
T:now what will I do???
R:tumhe kya problem hai... Ye tumhara ghar h... Ab mn phas gaya...
T:I'm sorry Rishi...
Just then Ahana rushed to the room. As Rishi sees ahana he hides behind curtain.
A:dii... Kya hua tujhe??? Kyun chilla rahi thi...
T:mn...mn...mn...wo ek chipkali...
A:u were screaming for that???
T:haan...
Ahana laughs at Tanu...
T:ahana bahut ho gayi... Ab bas kar...
A:JKR dar gayi...
By hearing this Rishi was unable to control his laughter... He laughs out... Tanu got scared n ahana doubted...
A:Rishi...yeh Rishi ki awaz h na???
T:awaz??? Kaisi awaz mene suna hi nhi...
A:maine suna h... Rishi ki awaz thi...
T:nhi ahana...its just ur feel h... Yahan koi nhi h...
A:shayad yeh sach hoga... Aao wahan koi nhi... Come lets sleep...
T:tu so jaa mn abhi aati hu...
A:ok gud nite diii...
T:gud nite...
Tanu(in her mind):Tanu is bar tu bach gayi... Aage kya hoga???

PS:superb part lemon... When I read ur portion I was remembering old Kasam... Woh word dear for this beautiful update...
Edited by gopsss - 6 years ago

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