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Gopika

@gopsss

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#31

Manager leaves n whispers something to the waiter.
Tanu:Rishi...konsa trouble h yeh...
Rishi:What can I do???He is not listening to my words...
Tanu:Ab yeh kya karne wala h??? Mn biwi... Woh bhi tumhari... What a punishment is this...
Rishi:What?? U mean...mn
Tanu:Haan tum jaise ek moron ki biwi...Chii...
Rishi:Tanu...chup ho jaa warna...warna mn...
Tanu:Warna kya karoge??
Meanwhile manager comes with the waiter
Manager:Mr n Mrs Rishi... Please come with us...
Tanu n Rishi get up
Tanu(in her mind):Ab kya h??
Manage:Aise nhi...hath men hath rakh kar...aao...
Manager takes them to a special room... When TanShi enters that room...

PS:Guys how much talented u r!!!! Really u took the story to a next level...Foxi,Gilehri,Lemon...hats off you guys... N really woh for late... Due to heavy rain in Kerala...there were no signal n electricity...

Edited by gopsss - 6 years ago

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DiyaMoni

@TearDrop50

Explorer

Posted: 6 years ago

#32

How much talented all of u guys???😲

itna talent kash thorasa meri dimag mai bhi hote😭

aap sabnne bohot accha likha,parne mai bohot maja ata hai😃

@vinushi aapne to story ko aur bhi interesting and exciting bana diya😳

keep continue guys😊

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Smita

@Smita_rawat

Navigator

Posted: 6 years ago

#33

Manager said plz have a seat.

Room is well decorated with flowers and candles..

Tanu- wow

Rishi- kya

Tanu- I mean to say it's well decorated

Rishi- ooh

Both hesitate n sits

Manager - I hope u liked it. N plz give ur order

Rishi- just a minute

Manager- ya ya sure u asked bhabhiji

They give their orders

Tanu gives anger expression to rishi 😡

Rishi- what???

Tanu- tum apne is friend ko btate kyu ni ho ki me tumhari wife nahi hu

Rishi- u see na he doesn't listen to me. Plz yaar I am very hungry. So baki ki fight baad me.

Phle khna kha le

When they were eating that time manager come with a cake.

Rishi- what's this???

Manager- it's a cake for u

Rishi- for me but why??

Manager- are ye meri taraf se gift samaz le first time aya h bhabhiji ke sath. Plz cut this...

Rishi takes a knife n moves to cut the cake that time manager said stop stop!!

Manager- are akele nahi bhabhiji ke sath

Rishi sees tanu. Tanu said ok.

Both cut the cake

Manager- are ab ek dusre ko khilao. Kitna sarmate ho tum dono.

Both feeds the cake to each other.

Manager leaves. Some cake gets on rishi's face

Tanu- hahaha😆

Rishi - kyu hash rhi ho?? Pagal ho gayi ho kya??

Tanu- tum itne bade ho gaye ho tumhe cake khana bhi nahi ata. Look at ur face. N she laugh.😆

Rishi- very funny. Kha laga hai

Tanu- wah per... are nahi wah per. Lao me krti hu

She wipes. Both sees each other n their eye lock.😳

That time manager comes again.

Manager- I am sorry. I think i am disturbed both of u.

Rishi- no no!! Aisa kuch nahi h.

Manager- actually I come for a surprise for u

Rishi- surprise! Kya😲

Tanu in her mind ab ye kya naya krne wala hai 😲

Manager- said sound

N a romantic song play (tere sang yaara)

Manager- plz have a dance

Rishi- no yaar plz

Manager- ek dance to banta h. Jb tk tu dance nahi karega jane nahi dunga. Manager insists rishi.

Rishi says ok ok

Rishi apna hath tanu ki taraf batada hai

Rishi- may i

Tanu holds rishi's hand.

N both r dancing

Firstly they r hesitate n feel awkward but after some times they lost in each other.😳

Ps: u rocked vinushi. 👏

Gopika r u alright?? I watched news about heavy rain in kerala.

Wo word for u gopika n moni. Moni Y r u not join us. U can do it.😊

Edited by Smita_rawat - 6 years ago

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Gopika

@gopsss

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#34

Tanu n Rishi enjoyed their moment.They didn't realise that the song get over. Manager starts teasing them... Manager acts cough.
Manager:Pehle dance karne ke man hi nhi tha...aur ab...😆
Both TanShi r lost in each other...😳...
Manager taps Rishi...
Rishi get back to his sense with a jerk.But Tanu...is still lost in him.
M:Arey tu abhi hi...
R:Kya hua?Kya abhi hi?
M(with a smile):Mujhe sharam aa rahi hai...
R:Sharam kyun???
Manager points towards Tanu...
M:idhar dekh...
Rishi turns towards Tanu...who is still lost in Rishi's thoughts...
Rishi taps Tanu...
R:Tanu... Tanu...
T:Sweet moron...😳...
Rishi got shocked... Manager smiles...Just then she realise what she had said...
T:Mn mn...Tanu panics

PS:Lemon superb dear...
In our district there were lots of problems... Par hamare yahan aise koi problems nhi tha... Hope soon all get cleared...n it will come back to its early state... Woh word for ur love n enquiry dear...

Edited by gopsss - 6 years ago

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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#35

T: mn...wo...wo...mne kuch nhi kaha...

And she turns her face on other side cluntching her eyes...

A small smile escapes Rishi's lips...

M: mn chlta hon...u both carry on...

R: shut up yr...

M: ya ya..😉

Rishi taps Tanu's shoulder...

R: he is gone...

T: i m leaving...cant tolerate ur friend anymore...

When Tanu starts moving just then Rishi holds her hand...

And he says unconciously...lost in her...

R: mjhe chor kr nhi jao...

T: han????

R: mm...mera...mera mtlb sath chlte hn...

T: hmmm..lets move...

PS: very well done guys...

Glad to see u here gilehri...tune itna acha likha hai..or jhooti bolti hai IDK how to write...khr jo bhi ho tune marvellous likha.. 😳

Very glad cotton candy that u are ok...hope all will be ok soon in ur district...😳

Moni plzzz join us...u can also write three to two lines...plzzz come..😳

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Gopika

@gopsss

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#36

Rishi n Tanu leaves from the room. Just then Tanu hits by a lady.Tanu was about to fall...but some one hold her by her waist... It was none other than Rishi... Both TanShi share an eyelock...after sometime both get back to their sense..
R(little bit tensed):Tumhe kuch hua nhi h na?tum theek ho na??
T:I'm ok...
Just then lady comes n says
L:Sorry beta...mn galti se...
Rishi looks that lady wid little anger n says:kya sorry??kya galti se???
Tanu asks Rishi to calm down n she says
T:Sorry kehne ki koi jarurat nahi hai aunty...Aap sorry mat bolo... Aur inki taraf se mn sorry bolti hu...
L:Koi problem nahi h beta... Har pati aise hi hai... Apni patni ki baaton se woh zyada possessive ho jate h... Waise tumhe ek achcha pati hi mila... Jo hamesha tera khyal rakhne wala...tujhse bohot pyaar karne waala... Hey bhagwan in dono k yeh pyaar salamat rakhe...
Both TanShi got shocked... N as well as they both feel happy... The lady blesses them n leaves.

PS:Thanks a lot guys for ur love... I have no words to express my happiness.. Really I am feeling proud to be a part of this great world,who always shower love n care... This is the real brotherhood... Thanks a lot guys for ur care n love...im blessed.

Edited by gopsss - 6 years ago

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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#37

Edited...😆

PS: love u too cotton candy...❤️

I also feel the same...i always got love from u all...

Love u all...❤️

Edited by HayaZehra313 - 6 years ago

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Smita

@Smita_rawat

Navigator

Posted: 6 years ago

#38

Both sits into the car but nothing to say each other...

Tanu- looks at rishi when rishi sees she ignore.

Rishi- kya hua??

He smile..

Tanu- kya ho gaya tanu tujhe?? Pagal ho gayi h kya???

Both reached their home

Rishi - ghar agaya

Tanu lost her senses she is not listen rishi's word

Rishi click in front of tanu's eye

Tanu- kya hua

Rishi- ghar aa gaya.. kha kho gayi??

Tanu- me wo kuch nahi. Ok bye

Both said bye to each other but their hearts don't allow to let go.

Tanu in her room n look at chand. Tum to sb jante ho na ye mujhe kya ho gaya hai. Rishi ke liye kuch...

Nahi nahi tanu aisa kuch nahi ho sakta.. aaahhh chup mera dil itni tezi se kyu thadak rh h...setup

Aisa kuch nahi chupchap soja tanu.

On other side rishi also sees chand n thinking about tanu.

Rishi- kuch to th... aj uski ankhe kitni khoobsurat...

Nahi nahi rishi ye kya soch rh wo bhi us tanu ke baare me..

Chupchap soja..

Tanu lost her senses n sees chand that time ahana enters into the room

Ahana- di tu soi nahi abhi tk..

Tanu is not listen any word

Ahana- diii... Kya hua tuje

Tanu- tu.. kb aai

Ahana- kb aai... Kb se awaz laga rhi hu tu h ki sun hi nahi rhi.

Kh khoi kui h.. kahi aj bhi us neha ne to kuch nahi kiya.. aj to me usko nahi chodungi.. aj to me uska muh tod dungi..

Tanu- ruk ruk!! Hamesha gussa nak pe rakha rhta h.. neha ne kuch nahi kiya.

Ahana- to phir tu kuch bol kyu nahi rhi h. Use baccha rhi h na..

Tanu- aisa kuch nahi h.

Ahana- to tu kiske baare me soch rhi h. Juth bol rhi h na.

Tanu - me juth nahi bol rhi hu me neha nahi rishi ke baare me soch rhi th..

Tanu in her mind ye mene kya bol diya..

On the other side manpreet enters into rishi's room but doesn't notice by rishi

Manpreet- aj aisa kya naya h chand me ki bhai ap itne dhayan se dekh rhe ho..

Rishi- aisa kuch nahi h.. me bus yu hi..

Manpreet- me bus yuhi dekh rh th.. ap chand dekh rhe th ya chand me uska chehra dekh rhe th..

Manpreet teasing rishi.

Ps: wow foxi n cotton candy u both r rocked. 👏

Really yaar mujhe padne me itna maza ata h ki kya batau...

N gopika may everything is clear asap n don't say to thanks we r friends so no thanks n no sorry.

N foxi eid kaisi rhi n where is my eidi.😉😃

Edited by Smita_rawat - 6 years ago

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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#39

@lemon...

Ooopppss!!!. 😆

We updated at same time...

Doesnt matter i will edit my part...

Bcz its short...😳

And what do u want in eidi...😛

Edited by HayaZehra313 - 6 years ago

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Gopika

@gopsss

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#40

Ahana a little bit shocked n asked in hurry.
A:Dii kya tu tere moron k baare m soch rahi thi? 😲...
T:Mn bas office matters k baare m soch rhi thi...Aur Ahana...woh utna moron nhi h...dil se bahot achha h..😳...
A:kya hua di tujhe??? Tu us k baare m hi na baat kar rhi ho jis se tu hamesha ladti???
T:Haan par aaj mujhe woh acha laga...
A:Aaj aise kya hua tujhe woh ache lagne jaise???
T:Aaj...Tanu remembers her time with Rishi n smiles...

At Bedi house.
R (without noticing):Haan...😳...
M:Kya aap bhabhiji k baare m soch rahe the??
Just then Rishi remembered what he had said...
Rishi(in his mind):oops Rishi tu kya bol diya...
M:Kya abhi bhi bhabhiji...kya bhai yeh(in a teasing style)...
R:Chotte...aajkal teri baat karne ka tarika hi badal gaya...
M:mn nhi to phir kon aap se aise baat karega??...😳...
R:Chote...n he smiles...
M:Carry on bhai... Bhabhiji k sapne dekh ke so jao... 😉...
Manpreet runs by telling this...Rishi first run behind him then stops n smiles... He starts thinking about Tanu...

PS: Love u infinity friends... Lemon u rocked it... Haya Congo dear❤️...

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