Kismat Ka Khel ff updated pt33 pg91 - Page 28

Originally posted by: sum2005

dadaji was so nice ladkiyon ki peeche padi hai..... 😆 .

gauri served breakfast to shiv 😳 and dadaji got biggest schok of his life 😆 .

did dadaji purposley spilled oil on the floor 😳

nice update maria ,it was so nice .....

shiv telling palak that mahen choice was never wrong 😳

thank you. well kal me ache mood me thi is liye funny part dalay. ajj me tired hon to dekhiye kya hota hain. probably saray hoe dialouges mile ge. thanks again😉😉😉

Originally posted by: Jenna Dutt

oh Maria, dadaji's character is so nice and he is such a charmer.... 😳 😳 😳
Someone has started falling in luv all over again. The way Shiv is getting upset about not seeing Gauri around or bringing his coffee in his room is such a shocker...next thing he mite ask Gauri is to sleep in his room from now on to take care of Varni ofcourse... 😳 😳 😳
Luv u sweety for the wonderful updates...keep them coming.

thanks you. i know dada ji character are always nice. in real life and on tv. yeah it had to happen one day. mera manena hai. ke pyar sirf eik bar nahi hota. i know so nice of him na. hahahaha. you had me on the last bit. not a bad idea by the way. 😉😉😉

Originally posted by: amneet89

oh wow shiv is like controlling her.i like him when he does his shivgiri.
shiv bossing gauri and taking care of her oh can't wait.plz post soon

thank you. yeah sure he is. he always liked his control on women didn't he.😉😉😉

part17

dada ji was still in shick. he could not digest the scene which was happening in front of him. but he was also happy that shiv had started to trust gauri. his behaviour towards her was changing. shiv had accepted gauri in his life. he liked the way their realtionship was heading. shiv was now more concerned about gauri. he remembered how he was upset at the time when gauri was in hospital. kept going to the hospital to ask for her. kept phoning to make sure she was ok. he looked at mahen. who was playing with varni. dadaji' expression changed. he knew if mahen came to find out about gauri and shiv attractivness. he will be mad. he was stil mad at shiv tfor leaving gauri. "abb kahin yeh kabab me hadi an ban jaye, mujeh kuch karna hoa ga. yeh zaroor un ke beech me anay ki koshish kare ga. abb to shiv badal gaya hai phir bhi yeh us se gusa hai. abb mujhe is ka kuch karna hoga. shiv or gauri ko is ke keher se me hi bacha sakta hon akhir baap hon is ka. hey bhagwan kaisa nalayk beta diya hai app ne mujhe. seedha. har waqt gusa naak pe rehta hai. or to or larkiyon se flirt karna bhi nahi ata. koi bhi mujeh pe nahi gaya. kissi ko mere jaise charming ness nahi mili. kissi ki habits mere pe nahi gayi sab ke sab apni ma pe gaye hai boring." "aray dad kya hoa" "kuch nahi kuch doston ki yaad a gayi." gauri came out of a trance then went near dadaji and mahen papa. "papa laiye varni ko mujeh de di jiye me ise change kar deti hon" "gauri insan hai change nahi ho sakti. or wo bhi tumhare hathon to nahi" "dada ji mazak na kare. ap ko pata hai me kiya keh rahi hon." "ok baba le jao" gauri takes varni from there. she went to shiv's room and opened his cupboard. she toot out varni clothes. she then went into the bathroom and filled in the babay tub with warm water. she came out and picked up varni she took of her clothes and gave her a bath. she got her dressed. putting on everything that was needed. she then went to chahi's room. she knocked "cachi me a jaon" "aray aoo na gauri tumhe poochne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai." she came in and smiled. "hi bhabhi app yahan subha subha koi kaam tha" gauri started laughing. "vivan tum subha subha yahan kya kar rahe ho." "yeh mujhe se advice mangne aya hai ke larki ko kis tarhan pataye" "aray phir to tumhe dada ji ke pass hona chahiye" "aray haan bhabhi mere dimaag me kyun ahu aya yeh" "mere bache tumhare pass demaag hai kya" "me ja raha hon" vivan left. gauri sat beside shyla. "chachi mujeh app se kaam tha" "han bolo beta" "chachi me varni ko app ke pass chor don mujeh school me kuch importaant kaam hai" "aray yeh bhi koi poochne wali baat hai befikar ho ke jao. me is ko sambhal lon gi." "chachi shayad dair ho jaye" "aray beta bola na koi baat nahi me sambhal on gi" "thanks chachi" "abb tum mujhe se mar khao gi. is me thanks bolne wali kya baat hai. tum mere kitne kaam karti hon me ne khabhi tumhe thanks bola. thanks bolne se apas ki frankness kahtam ho jati hai." gauri smiled "ok chachi me chalti" gauri left vari with chachi and came to her rom and got ready. she went to dadi's room and said bye to her and shyla chachi kissing varni who was with her.
gauri went to her school. she stood outside the principles oofice. she knocked and went in when she got a reply. "aray gauri aao" she went in and took a saet as been told to do. "kaisi tabiyat hai abb tumhari" "bheter hai maam pehle se" "good. tum yahan kyun koi kaam tha jahan tak mujhe yad hai ajj koi meeting nahi thi" "maam mujeh app se eik kaam hai" "han bolo" "maam mujeh leave chahiye. 2 months" "gauri i am sorry me itni long leave nahi de sakti waise hi tum do week se off ho. abbb itni lambi leave kyun koi problem hai" "i am sorry maam i can't tell but mujeh leave chahiye" "i am sorry gauri it is impossible. itni lambi leave eik teacher hote. nahi i cannnot do this sorry" maam please. she tried to persude her. for half an hour. then she said "than maam i will have to resign. i can't work. i have to leave" "gauri what are you doing. you know how important you are to scholl. fine i will give you leave." gauri became happy "thank you maam thank you so much." she came out of the office. she went outside happy. she was sure that she wil have to resign. she went out and stood withothers teachers. all asking her about her health. she was answering when shiv came. she stood there near her friends. she wanted to leave instantly but could not as they were atlking to her and shiv was moving towards her already "yeh kon hai gauri" gauri did not answer. shiv heard the lady but was angry beacuse gauri did no bother to answer she had not told them about him. "chalo gauri hume late ho raha hai" "app ka gauri ke sath kiya rishta hai" they thought he was bugging her so they were furious. shiv looked at gauri as i asking "why did you not tell your friends that i am your husband." "oh i am shiv kapoor. gauri's husband. gauri never told you if you don't believe me you can confirm it. hope now you understand how we are related." gauri looked upto him in shock. how could he just tell everyone that she was his wife. "gauri tum shadi shuda ho or tum ne khabhi hume bataya nahi." gauri did not say anything she did not even bother to smile. shiv took her hand and started walking gaui followed. she wanted to fight him. tell him to get lost. she was angry. "shiv kis haq se tum ne mujeh apni biwi kaha. biwi to jab hoti jab tum in deah salon me mere saath hote. jab me khushi khushi tumhe apni doston se introduce karati. par tum ne to khud mujhe se rishta tora tha to abb kyun. kya samujh rakha hai mujeh jab chaha chor gaye. jab chaha wapis a gaye. me insan hon shiv khilona nahi jis se jab dil bhar gaya to chor diya. me ne tum se bohot pyar kya tha shiv. agar tum mujhe chor ke na jate to sab kuch alag hota. me tumhe bohot pyar deti. hum khush hote. humari apni eik duniya hoti. meri duniya shoro hone se pehle hi bikher di tm ne shiv. to phir yeh haq kyun. mera or tumhara eik hi rishta hai tum meri beti varni ke baap ho. bas or kuch nahi" tears escaped her eyes. she wanted to turn back the time. she would have never married him if she knew he would leave her. "kash hum saath hote shiv. me duniya ki sab se khush naseeb aurat hoti lakin shiv ab mujhe dar lagta hai tumhare saath rehne se. ke kahin phir tum mujeh chor ke na chale jao. kahin phir se tum mujhe pe ilzam na lagao" she was weak whenever he was near her. she wanted to go away from his life but coulf not because of the power he had over her. she just could not escape him. even if she want to go away. he would always find a way to break her defence.
"gauri long leave mili ke nahi" "hmm han mil gayi. kitne haath paon joray phir ja ke ke mujeh leave mili without a pay" she saw his face his anger was showing off clearly. he yells. "tumhe kya zaroorat thi un ke agay haath jorne ki. kya hum mar gaye hain. humien koi zaroorat nahi hai tum se kaam karane ki. agar mujeh pata hota to me khabhi tumhe jane hi na deta." he punches the steering wheel "anyways jo ho gaya so ho gaya. alkin abb j me kahon wo karo. you are going to resign. koi zaroorat nahi aisi jaga kaam karne ki jahan problem nahi samujh sakte." "but shiv" "har baat me argue karna zaroori hai. kaha na ke resign kar rahi to kar rahi ho" she lowered her head. why can't she fight him. why does she et him rule her life.
tehy reach the hospital car park. shiv and gauri got off the car. shiv locked the car behind him and walked towards the reception but now gauri was behind him she was scared. she could not walk fast. shiv saw her and held her hand then dragged her to the reception. "hi humari appointment hai ajj. gauri kapoor ke naam se" "yes sir. but you wil have to pay for the test" shiv took the money out of his coat adn handed it to the recpetionist. gauri was shocked he had paid such a big amount on her test. "shiv yeh test to pehle bhi ho chuke hain kya zaroori hai phir se karna" "gauri tumhe me ne kaha hai na ke chup raho. tum pe kissi baat ka asar kyun nahi hota. me jo karna ho karne do. tum behter janti ho ke doctors." gauri keeps quiet. shiv smiled he knew why she said it because he was paying a big amount for her and she did not want that.
they sat in the waiting room for their call. when shiv cell started ringing. he saw the number it was nikhila. shiv could not be bothered talking to her. he cut the call. but after a while it rang again he excused himself. and went outside to take the call. "hi mom kya hai" "shiv kahan ho" "me apne doston ke sath hon" "tum ne mera phone kyun kata" "mom kaha na doston ke saath hon" "mujeh tum se baat karni hai" "ghar a ke karien ge" "mujeh abhi karni hai. tumne raat ko mahen ko kyun kaha ke us ki choice apne bachon ke liey achi hogi. kya me tumhare liye nahi sochti." "mom plz can we talk later" "no shiv mujhe janena hai. kyun ke dekh rahi hon ke ajj kal tumhare pe us jadogarni ka jado kuch ziyada hi chal gaya hai us ka bohot khayal rakh rahe ho aj kal. kyun ke wo tumhari bachi ka khayal rakh rahi hai" "mom plz me ne kaha na hum akay baat karien ge. or wais ebhi appp ko meri life me dakhal andazi karne ki koi zaroorat nahi haii me apna khayal rakh sakta hon" he calms down then spoke again "or waise bhi app ko is se kya. agar app ko varni ki itni fikar hi meri itni fikar hai to app apni parties ki bajaye meri beti pe dhayan deti. khud to kuch hota nahi or agar koi or kare to deewar ban jati hain. or rahi baat gauri to or varni ki. to un ke chinta nakre mujeh pata hai mujhe un ka khayal kaise rakhna hai" saying this he puts the phone down angrily. shiv walks down towards gauri. putting his anger at ease.
while nikhila was so shocked by shiv's tone. he had never spoken to her like that. she had to do something. she had to kick gauri out of the house. even if tha means she had to play dirty.

nice update maria 👏 .

dadaji was so dejected as mahen dont know how to flert with girls 😆 .

gauri dont want to accept shiv as husband ,but still shiv controlls her......this man shiv .....poor gauri in confused state .

shiv wants gauri to resign the job ,seems he dint like the way gauri pleaded for leave.....

nikki feeling insecure about shiv ,as he is paying much attention on gauri and shiv relly gave nice answer to nikki ........poor nikki uska khel kataam....

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

Awesome update Maria. 👏
The way Shiv is getting possessive about Gauri is just so wicked and what a tell-off to his own mother.... 👏 👏 👏 Keep up your magic...

brilliant update
wonder what nikhila is goona go do.lord what is she upto to know
and shiv's shivgiri 😆 i luv it
plz cont asap 👏

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nice work!!!!!
Dadaji's remarks abouth Mahen and the way Shiv introduces himself to Gauri's friends and the way he yelled at his mom were very good!!!!!!

Oh!! That was awesome!! I love how Shiv is supporting Gauri now. And I also love how you show Gauri's helplessness, her sense of loss of control when it comes to Shiv. His presence just makes her loose herself... Sigh... Finally, he showed Nikki her place!! Uff, that woman!... Can't wait to read about pati dev ji nursing his wife back to health!! 😳👏👏

Cheers,
dc