Kismat Ka Khel ff updated pt33 pg91 - Page 30

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Posted: 18 years ago

Hey

i finally read your whole fanfic and it is absolutly fantastic and a very well written fan fic i love the story and well varni is just so cute 😳 and i love how she has brought shiv and gauri together they are so adorable 😃 woah girl that scene between shiv and gauri where they kiss was intense i cant believe how sad he was it was really heartbreaking 😭 u could really feel the emotional distress the two were going through lol very well written 👏 seriously your fan fic is mindblowing i love how shiv finally stood up for gauri against his mom she really needs to learn her lesson!

its really sweet how much he cares for her and woah what a hilarious embarrasing scene when she was getting tested lol shiv totally zoned out😆😆poor gauri!

plz continue soon i really cant wait 😳 ............................. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

-Rupi😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
that was awsome update.plz cont soon 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wonderful update!!!!!
i jus cant wait for the next part!!!!
Shiv is brilliant!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: crystalclear


thank you. yeah me too. he is so protective towards her now. i like thta site of him. hopefully now he he will stand up for gauri and fight the evil nikhila. gauri ki sansien record torne pe a jati hain when shiv is around. 😉😉😉

humaara haal bhi kuch aisa hi hai jaaneman... unke hote hue, humaari kya majal ke hum saans len😳

Cheers,

dc

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Posted: 18 years ago
so shiv want to settle scores with nikila but after gauri was recovered from illness........

shiv saw gauri half naked ,will he spare gauri now 😉 .

perfect plan kiya patni ki operation keliye.........wow shiv kapoor in the role of perfect husband.......

dadaji wants to see fashion tv....to learn tips of fashion so that woh ladikiyon ko patanekeleye 😆

nice update maria...... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
great part!!!! 👏 👏 👏 pls continue soon!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hooray Maria, brilliant update hun, Busy yesterday could not read it, read two just now, it wad so sweet, shiv has changed so much and really like the way machaan is , he is a good friend, I think shiv is in love with Gauri already 😳 😳 but don't wanna mention it. keep it up.👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part Maria!! 😳 😳 😳
continue soon 😃
p.s sorry for not commenting earlier as i m really busy , hence u r spared from my super long comments 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: rupi b

Hey

i finally read your whole fanfic and it is absolutly fantastic and a very well written fan fic i love the story and well varni is just so cute 😳 and i love how she has brought shiv and gauri together they are so adorable 😃 woah girl that scene between shiv and gauri where they kiss was intense i cant believe how sad he was it was really heartbreaking 😭 u could really feel the emotional distress the two were going through lol very well written 👏 seriously your fan fic is mindblowing i love how shiv finally stood up for gauri against his mom she really needs to learn her lesson!

its really sweet how much he cares for her and woah what a hilarious embarrasing scene when she was getting tested lol shiv totally zoned out😆😆poor gauri!

plz continue soon i really cant wait 😳 ............................. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

-Rupi😃


thank you rupi. i am glad thta you read it. welll me too in love with this ff of mine. yeah varni is after all shiv's daughter how can she not be cute. she has more sense than him. hey viewers wants to see those romantic moments so i have to write them glad you lot like it. thank you so much again😳. i will do my best to keep it this way in future. i will cont😉😉😉

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