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Posted: 18 years ago
great part!!! 👏 👏 👏 hope Shiv now fights for Gauri and save her from all of Nikhila's plan.pls continue soon/
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sum2005

nice update maria 👏 .

dadaji was so dejected as mahen dont know how to flert with girls 😆 .

gauri dont want to accept shiv as husband ,but still shiv controlls her......this man shiv .....poor gauri in confused state .

shiv wants gauri to resign the job ,seems he dint like the way gauri pleaded for leave.....

nikki feeling insecure about shiv ,as he is paying much attention on gauri and shiv relly gave nice answer to nikki ........poor nikki uska khel kataam....


thank you so much di. yeah he does not know how o flirt with girls. even a bhooli larki like me knows how to flirt with a guy. waise aisa koi larka ajj tak me ne nahi dekha who did not flirt with a girl. at some point in life ou always flirt. yeah well he had bad to her she had a right ot but can't keep up with her thinking. hmm niki aur us ki chalien khabhi khatam nahi hoti😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: shivgauri

great part!!! 👏 👏 👏 hope Shiv now fights for Gauri and save her from all of Nikhila's plan.pls continue soon/


thank you. yes he will fight what kind of a man does not fight for his wife. 😉😉😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: desi chic

Oh!! That was awesome!! I love how Shiv is supporting Gauri now. And I also love how you show Gauri's helplessness, her sense of loss of control when it comes to Shiv. His presence just makes her loose herself... Sigh... Finally, he showed Nikki her place!! Uff, that woman!... Can't wait to read about pati dev ji nursing his wife back to health!! 😳👏👏

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thank you. yeah me too. he is so protective towards her now. i like thta site of him. hopefully now he he will stand up for gauri and fight the evil nikhila. gauri ki sansien record torne pe a jati hain when shiv is around. 😉😉😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

thank you for your huge applause😉😉😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!!! 👏


thank you for your huge applause
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Jenna Dutt

Awesome update Maria. 👏
The way Shiv is getting possessive about Gauri is just so wicked and what a tell-off to his own mother.... 👏 👏 👏 Keep up your magic...


thank you. he is always possessive about his things or poeple related to him😉😉😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: amneet89

brilliant update
wonder what nikhila is goona go do.lord what is she upto to know
and shiv's shivgiri 😆 i luv it
plz cont asap 👏


thank you. knowing her probably making another plan to destroy her sons life😉😉😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

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nice work!!!!!
Dadaji's remarks abouth Mahen and the way Shiv introduces himself to Gauri's friends and the way he yelled at his mom were very good!!!!!!


thank you. i know. he knows the best. jo khud flirt hota hai us ko baki sab ki bhi khabar hoti hai😉😉😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
part 18

shiv comes to the waiting room angry. he now knew that nikhila thought of nothing but herself. her kids happiness does not matter to her. he looked around but did not find gauri. she had already left for the test. so he seadted him self. his mind drifted off to the conversation he had with nikhila. his anger grew. how could she say that she ia right. when he knows how wrong she is. what she did to gauri. how she minipulated him into thinking that gauri was bad. she was auspicious. that she had aborted the baby. how could she do that. if she had such a serious problem which threatened her life. she might have got cancer. thank goodness he came to know about it in th right time. "lakin abhi agar me ne mom se kuch kaha then she can hurt gauri the more coincern i wil show the more she will hurt gauri. why does she hate her so much. hopefully gauri wil recover soon then i can sattle my scors with mom. for making me a puppet in her finger. which she can give any turn. make him do whatever she wishes. to make him destroy a life. for lying to such extene. for decieving him and ipshita along with everyone family member in teh house. dad was right he should get palak marrried wherever he wants to or otherwise his mom will destory her life too. palak had not seen the real face of her mom yet. but what will she do when she comes to know about it. does she already knows about it. may be taht is why she was troubling gauri this much. she to wanted to throw gauri out of the house. man who can i trust here. my own mother have tricked me."
while gauri was in the scanning room. she was wearing a hospital gown. she was ready for the test but a little nervous. doctor came in and sa that he then asked. "mrs kapoor where is you r husband" "doctor is sitting outside in the waiting room. " what is he doing there. nurse go an tell mr kapoor to come in. its better if he is there. so he knows what is exactly wrong with you. you have already hid and neglected your health too much now he has a right to know about you" gauri was not feeling right. it was too awkward having shiv in the scanning room. next to her. she was nervous. but she could not reason with the doctor. they would not listen to her. and if shiv finds out he will too be angry. because she was interfering in doctors business. the doctor saw her nervousness. he thought it was because of the test. right at that moment there was a knock on the door. "come in mr kapoor." gauri who was now laying on the scan bed closed her eyes. she could not even imagine how shiv's presence made her weak. made her leave al the things and run. made her embarassed. shiv came into the room confused of why doctor had called him. why was he needed in here. "is anyhting serious doctor" "no mr kapoor i wanted you to be beside ypur wife during te test so you know what is exactly wrong with her. what damages there are." shiv looked at gauri. she was shivering because of shiv being here and seeing her through her test. "mr kapoor your wife is really scared of the test. i hope she wil feel better as you are by her side." shiv does not say anything he goes near gauri and holds her hand. "gauri darne ki koi baat nahi hai me hon na yahan tumhare saath" she whispers to herself "isi baat ka to dar hai ke app mere sath ho. mujhe test se nahi app se dar lagta hai. agay pata nahi kya hoga. kash me ap ko reports pehle hi dikha deti.jo natsaha ne ki thin takay app yahan late hi nahi" no one heard it thank god otherwise shiv would hve been angry with her again.
then doctor covered gauri with a blanket upto her abdomen. and the pulled out her gown leaving her naked uptoher abdomen. she was shocked. he was speechless. his eyes popped out seeing gauri in this condition. he had never dreamed of seeing gauri like this. he kept looking at her. while gauri was embarassed. she left shiv's hand and clutches her hand on the bed. she could not believe the doctor had done that in front of shiv. she should have argued with the doctor not to let him in. why did she not do it.doctor was scanning gauri's stomach. doctor calls to shiv. but shiv was lost. he calls shiv about five times then says. "mr shiv" shiv cae out of the trance. "kya hoa mr kapoor ap itne nervous kyun ho rahe hai. don't worry nothing wil happen to her." he then explain things to him. but shiv was not getting a thing he was lost. he comes to his sensess. when the doctor says. "mr kapoor she has to undergo a surgery soon. along with the fibroids the damaged ovary is also to be removed quickly. you know the risk. if will leave it. it will turn into cancer. so we have to do the surgery as soon as possible." "i want you to fix a date for the surgery as soon as possible doctor." "that will be no problem if you operate for a laproscopy. it wil cost you more but recovered soon" "fine doctor do what you think is best and don't care about the money i am ready to pay any amount.mujhe bas apni wife ke liye best treatments chahiye." shiv leaves from there and goes to sit in the waiting room while guari still very very embarassed changed into her clothes. she comes into the waiting room. still embarassed. she comes and stands near shiv. he was reading a magazine but not reading it at all. gauri stood there not daring to look at shiv's way. her being half naked in front of him was enough to make her not look his way. she just stood there not talking to him. "mr and mrs kapoor. ap ko doctor apne cabin me bola rahi hain" "aray gauri tum yahan khari ho bata to deti mujhe laga tha ke abhi tak andar se nahi nikli" he looked into her eyes. she had no choice but to look back. but does not say anything. they go to the doctors cabin. "have a seat plz." "you are lucky mr and mrs kapoor you can have the surgery really quick. we have a date for day after tomorrow. for gauri to undergo her surgery. is this ok with you mr kapoor." "sure doctor. acha hai ke jaldi mil gayi appointment." "ok then complete the formalities at the reception. and mrs kapoor i wil see you early on the day of the surgery" they tahnked the doctor. and shiv and gauri went to the receptionist. shiv filled up al the form and payed the fees in advance. gauri not saying anything she stil thinking about the incident that happend to the a while back. "chalo gauri mujhe tum se zaroori baat karni hai" gauri nodded. she had no idea what he wanted to talk about but she did not have the courage to argue. she was stil embarassed. she follwed shiv and sat in the car. they did not speak another word gauri was happy. she did not have the courage to tallk to him now. shiv took his cell and called. "hello machan. gar pe ho. natasha bhi wahin pe hai. acha me a raha hon mujeh zaroorai kaam hai natasha se. gauri bhi saath me hai"
"gauri tum mere saath machan ke ghar ja rahi ho. or tum ghar pe sab ko kaho gi ke tum 2 weeks ke liye training pe ja rahi ho which is important." gauri fogot her embarassment. "nahi shiv plz me do week ke liye nahi varni ke baghair plz shiv" "don't worry gauri kuch nahi hoga. varni won'tbe far from you. i promise. tum sab ko kehna ke tumhe kal sham ko jana hai" "ok" gauri was happy as shiv had promised her to not to take her away from varni. shiv too was happy seeing gauri worry for varni. "me tumhe humesha khush rakhon ga gauri kyun ke tumhari khushi varni me hai. me khabhi dukh tumhare nazdeek nahbi anay don ga" shiv and gauri arrived at machan's house. machan wellcomed them confused, but trying very hard to hide his confusion. "aao betho" he made them sit." stil confused why shiv came here all of a sudden taht too with gauri. natasha was surprised to see them at the same time scared "kahin shiv ko pata to nahi chala. omg agar pata chal gaya to i am in trouble" "shiv app log achank yahan" she felt guilty about hiding things from shiv but she had no choice. shiv did not say anything when he spoke it was this "why natasha. why did you hide this from me. i trusted you that is why i called you so late at night when gauri was ill and all you have done is hide things from me. why did you not tell me about gauri's condition. you know she could have cancer if i did not came to know about it. she would have ignored everything" "i am sorry shiv" shiv told machan everything. "omg natasha tum ne yeh sab kyun chupaya shiv se. agar gauri ko kuch ho jata to. shiv ko janene ka pora haq hai she is his wife." "ok that is all in the past. now tell me wil you both help me" "aray yeh bhi koi poochne ki baat hai shiv. hum kuch bhi karien ge" "thanks man natasha i hope you don't have problem with this" "offcourse not shiv. me waise hi bohot guilty feel kar rahi hon." "sorry mujhe yeh sab nahi kehna chahiye tha" they sat there talking about the plan and talkig about other things "shiv chaliye na varni ro rahi hogi pata nahi khaya bhi hai ke nahi. plz chaliye na" she whispered in his ears. then shiv and gauri left. they were on their way to the house when shiv spoke. "gauri tumhare operation ke bad. tum do week tak natasha ke sath raho gi un ke ghar pe. wo tumhara khayal rakhe gi" he looked at gauri she seemed as if she was not happy "don't worry me or varni tumhe rozana visit kiya karien ge" she became happy "thank you shiv" shiv saw the tears of happiness in her eyes and promised to make her happy. he stoppted the car a little far from his house. "gauri tum utar jao me bad me aon ga is tarhan kisi ko shak naho hoga" gauri nodded. she got of the car and started walking towrds the house.
she entered the house. she heard varni crying she ran to chachi's room. she could not stand varni crying she just could not see tears in her eyes. she ran and took varni from chachi's hands. "acha hoa gauri tum a gayi kab se ro rahi hai yeh. na tum ghar thi na shiv. jab se roe ja rhi thi. me ne kitna chip karaya lakin tum dono ke siwa kissi se chup nahi hoti" varni saw gauri's face and stopped crying. while wondering "hey bhagwan mere bad shiv is ka kahayl kaise rakhe ge. wo kya un se chup kar jaye gi. eik or musibat sir pe khari hai sab ko kaise bataon ke me do week ke liye ja rahi hon. dadi ji dada ji mahen papa to khabhi ijazat nahi de ge. me kya karon mujeh koi rah dikhaiye" she made varni sleep while feeding her. but varni woke up she as trying to play with gauri. shiv walked in he saw gauri worried. he walked upto her "kya hoa gauri tum pareshan ho" he whispered and too varni from her "mere room me aao mujeh tum se bat karni hai" he took varni and gauri went to the kitchen to make varni's bottle. she went to dada ji rom and sat there. talking to dada ji but did not seem to be answering very well. "aray gauri jao na mujeh fashion show dekhna hai kitni khubsurat khubsurat larkiyan ati hai. fashion tips alag se milti hain. wo dekh dekh ke to me larkiyon ko impress karta hon." thinking to himself. when shiv called varni is hungry she is crying. "chali uthio gauri varni ko khilao usse bhookk lagi hai shiv ke kamre me" gauri picks up the baby foo and mil bottle and left for shiv's dada ji quickly changed the channel.
she walked in and saw shiv playin with varni. varni very happily pulling his chain. shiv too seemed happy. gauri surprised why shiv said varni was crying.
Edited by crystalclear - 18 years ago

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