Kismat Ka Khel ff updated pt33 pg91

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Shagufta

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Posted: 18 years ago

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awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!! 👏

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maria

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Posted: 18 years ago

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part16

shiv thought taht gauri will get him a cup of coffee. he sat on the bed waiting for her to return. there was a knock on the door. he smiled. "a jao" his smile faded the minute he saw ramu kaka. where was gauri. he thought she wil bring teh coffee. shiv was very disappointed. "app ko kis ne kaha ke mujeh coffee chahiye" he was angry. "aray shiv baba app ne he to managai thi" shiv remebered when he asked gauri to bring coffee. she did not came so he shouted for ramu kaka but actually asking gauri to come. "rakh di jiya " he put teh coffee on teh table. shiv got really upset and angry with gauri for not bringing him coffee. down stairs gauri was thinking of taking the coffee herself. but she had to feed varni so she sent ramu kaka. she was scared to face him after what happened. she was loosing control over herself. why would she let shiv come near her. why can't she just tell him to bug off.
shiv sat in his room in a trance. he was upset with gauri's illness. he had no one to share the thing with. he did not want to make everyone upset. he did not want to brake gauri's trust. now he knew how gauri would have felt. when he left her. no one to share her feelings with no one to talk to. living her life alone even though there were people who cared about her a lot. but she was alone and he was resposible for that. if he had not left her. she would not have neglected her health. he was guilty. he should have been punished. he did. the love of his life got taken away from him for breaking an innocent heart. he picked up ipshita's picture. "ipshita uperwale ne tumhe muje se cheen liya. abb samujh me aya ke us ne to mujeh mere gunahon ki saza di hai. take eik begunna to insaf mil sake. us ne varni ko tum se dor kar diya. varni ne apni janam dene wali ma ko kho diya lakin usse palne wali ma gauri ho gi. ipshita mujeh dar lag raha hai ke kahin phi se varni se us ki maa na chin jaye. hum kiya kare ge ipshita. abb mujeh gauri pe yakeen hai. waise bhi mama neus pe jo ilzam lagye the wo sare galat sabit hoe hain. wo ilzam jo khabhi sach hi nahiho sakte. ipshita i trust gauri. varni jab bari ho gi to us ko maa bolaye gi. me gauri ko varni ke puray haq don ga. me usse haq don ga ke wo varni ki ma kehla sake. gauri wil be varni's mother and i will make sure that nothing happens to her. janta hon mama is ke khilaf jaye gi. lakin kuch bhi abb gauri ko me sab khushiyan don ga. pehle me ne use barbad kiya hai. us se us ki zindagi cheni thi lakin ab me chahta hon ke wo zinda rahe me use zindagi me khush dekhna chahta hon. or us ki khushi varni me hai. or me in dono ki khushi me kissi ko nahi anay donga. me in ki musibat bhi apne sir lon ga lakin in ko khabhi koi gham nahi anay don ga."
it was dinner time shiv came downstairs. and saw ramu kaka serving food. shiv sat on the table and started eating quietly. when mahen spoke. "papa me soch raha hon ke palak ki shadi kar don" he said to dada ji. shiv looked up pleased. he knew whoever mahen will choose wil be best for her. as it was good for him too but he did not realise it. "bilkul theek keh rahe hain papa" "aray mahen yeh to bohot acha kahayal hai. isi bahane is ghar me thori ronak tjora hala gula ho jaye ga. or kafi sundar sundar larkiyan dekhne ko mile gi" everyone laughed at this comment. except from maya nikhia and palak. "no dad app aisa hargiz nahi kare ge. me kissi bhi asia larke se shadi nahi karon gi jise app ne pasand kiya ho. waise bhi eik bar app ki baat mani thi. abb tak boghat rahe hain. kiya bala la ke rakhi hai humare saron pe talne ka naam hi nahi leti. shiv bhaiya ajj tak pachta rahe hain mujeh nahi karni shadi" "bilkul theek keh rahi hai palak is ki shadi meri pasand se hogi ya is ki apni pasand se app na hi pasand kare to behter hai" mahen and dada ji were really upset. shiv could not take it so he spoke up. "palak apni zaban sambhalo. kiya is tarhan se baat ki jati hai baron se. papa ne jo bhi kiya humare bhale ke liye kiya. yeh alag baat hai hum samujh nahi paye. papa ki choice ho to achi hi hogi. or tum ussi se shadi karo gi jisse papa pasand karien ge" everyone was shocked. nikhila who was just about to swallow somthing choked. palak and maya helped her. while she gave a dusgusted look to shiv. which he ignored. mahen and dada ji were so surprised. they did not expect this from shiv. shiv did not pay attention to anything. his eyes were searching for gauri. he wanted to see her. he wanted her to be a part of the family. not live her life like a servent. he wanted her to face those people who were against her. she did not come. he finshed his dinner and washed his hands the went staright to dinner. gauri was sitting with dadi and varni. she did not have to the guts to face shiv not after their kiss incident. she was to sacred of going in front of him. scared that it will happen again. shiv walked into teh rom and sat beside dadi. he saw gauri playing with varni. "so shiv beta how was your walk to the park. enjoy kiya. varni to bohot khush lag rahi hai." "it was nice dadi. app kaisi hain. app ne kya kiya pora din. dadi jaldi se theek ho jaiyekyun ke dadi ji ko ajj kal bohot larkiyan mil rahi hai flirt karne ke liye." dadi laughed. "eik bar thek ho jane do phir dekhti hon" shiv's eyes were still on gauri. which gauri ignored she did not want to look up scared of looosing her self in them. he came upto her. "gauri me varni ko apne rom me le ke ja raha hon" he picked her up and walked out.
inthe morning gauri made varni's milk. she was pacing up and down in the kitchen for shiv to bring her dowm. but he did not come. she heard varni cry. but still no sign of shiv. she wondered if he was awake or not. she could not takeit anymore so she walked upto hid room. she opened the door and walked in. she saw shiv holding varni in his arms. "shiv app isse neeche kyun nahi ley kab se ro rahi hai" shiv looked at her than gave varni to gauri. gauri fed her. "hello remeber you are her mother. its your responsabilty that you feed varni every morning. i am not gonna bring her down form now own. she is your daughet you handle her." he finshed saying what he had to and smiled. gauri looked at varni. she saw tears on edge of her eyes. gauri wiped them and kissed her on teh forehead.
"gauri ajj tumhe tests ke liye jana hai. ajj varni ki dadi ke saath chor dena. tum school chali jao me tumhe wahan se pick kar lon ga. me nahi chahta ke ghar me kisi ko is baat ka pata chale. sab khakha pareshan honge. hum abhi kisi ko nahi bata sakte. or tum to janti ho agar mama ko pata chal gaya to bilwaja natak shoro ho jaye ga. or tum pe ilzam lage ge. is liye hum log is ko scret rakhe ge" gauri nodded. shiv was right. nikhila aunty should not come to know about this otherwise it wil be trouble for her. "jab waqt aye ga hum sab ko bata dein ge" he walks to the cupboard and took out his cothes. "gauri ajj mujhe office jaldi jana hoga take kaam khatum kar ke jaldi hospital chale jaye. could you please make me my breakfast." gauri looked up to him in surprise. but shiv pretended he did not see that. gauri wondered what was wrong with shiv. why was he bring so nice to her. she was cofused by his behaviour. he changed too much but she was to sacred of nikhila. what would she say. when she saw shiv taking care of gauri.
she goes downstairs and saw dada ji and mahen sitting in the living room. she walked in and greeted them. she was about to o to kitchen. when mahen called out to her. "gauri beta varni ko idher hi chor do mujeh is ke saath khelna hai" she does what he asked. mahen and dada ji both played with varni. and varni was happy tooo palying with her dada's. gauri smiled and left for the kitchen. she was making shiv breakfast. when shyla camein "kiy akar rahi ho gauri. yeh tum nashta kis ke liye bana rahi ho tum to already nashta kar chuki ho." "woh chachi me.. me.. me" "shiv ke liye bana rahi ho. "gauri lowers her eys. she was too embarassed. "ji unho ne kaha ke ajj unhe jaldi office jana hai to is liye" "ok aray baba rok kyun gayi continue me ja rahi hon" shyla chachi left smiling and before going she patted on her cheeks. gauri sighed. shyla chachi went to dadi's room. "mama ap ko pata hai me kya dekh ke a rahi hon" "kya dekh ke a rahi hon yehi na ke tumhare papa larkiyon ki batien kar rahe hain" "aray mama yeh to old story hai. wo baz nahi anay wale. me kitchen me gayi thi." "to ajj se pehle khabhi nahi gayi kya" "aray mama sonu to. mene dekha me gauri shiv ke liye breakfast bana rahi hai. such mama mujhe lagta hai in ke dramiyan ke differences abb khatam ho rahe hain" "aray agar shiv ko pata chal gaya to wo kahin chilaye nagauri pe" "kuch nahi hoga mama. shiv kuch nahi kahe ga" they smiled and lughed talking about their future.
shiv came downstairs ready for office. he saw mahen and dadaj playin with varni he walked upto them he greeted them and gave varni a kiss. "hain shiv tum itni jaldi kyun tayar ho gaye office ke liye." "papa mujeh kuch doston se milne jana thasham ko is liye socha jald hi office chala jaon kaam khatam kar e wahin se agaay chala jaon ga" "mujhe yakeen nahi hai shiv.tum apne friends se nahi girlfriend se milne ja rahe ho. sono khubsurat hai. agar hai to tum kya kar rahe ho mujhe milao usse. larkiyan too humari surat pe mar mitati hain" "dadi ji dadi ko pata chla na to khoob pitai hogi. mujeh lagta hai wo oil app ne jaan bojh ke giraya ho ga. kyun ke app nahi chahte hain ke dadi app keorlakiyon ke darmayan aye" "bilkul theek us ko na batana nahi to bohot pare gi"
shiv went to sit on the dining table. he was waiting for gauri. she came and served him breakfast. it was all the things he liked. dada ji had seen this. and got the shock of his life shiv getting srved by gauri. he turned himself towards mahen quickly not wanting him to se he might get angry on shiv.
"gauri me office ja raha hon tumhe waha se pick kar lon ga. plz ajj leave ke liye apply kar dena." "shiv wo log mujeh khabhi itni lambi leave nahi de ge. me itni chootiyan kais kar sakti hon" "me jo kaha ha wo karo" "but how shiv. they need teachers. agar hum hi chooityon pe chale jaye to bahcon pe kya asar pare ga" "i don't give a damn about it gauri. agar kuch nahi ho sakta to resign kar do. and that is final. no more behes. sayin this he left. with a worried gauri behind him.

Edited by crystalclear - 18 years ago

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maryam

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Posted: 18 years ago

#253

wow it was wonderfull update 👏

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suni

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Posted: 18 years ago

#254

dadaji was so nice ladkiyon ki peeche padi hai..... 😆 .

gauri served breakfast to shiv 😳 and dadaji got biggest schok of his life 😆 .

did dadaji purposley spilled oil on the floor 😳

nice update maria ,it was so nice .....

shiv telling palak that mahen choice was never wrong 😳

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Jenna Dutt

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Posted: 18 years ago

#255

oh Maria, dadaji's character is so nice and he is such a charmer.... 😳 😳 😳
Someone has started falling in luv all over again. The way Shiv is getting upset about not seeing Gauri around or bringing his coffee in his room is such a shocker...next thing he mite ask Gauri is to sleep in his room from now on to take care of Varni ofcourse... 😳 😳 😳
Luv u sweety for the wonderful updates...keep them coming.

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Amnu

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Posted: 18 years ago

#256

oh wow shiv is like controlling her.i like him when he does his shivgiri.
shiv bossing gauri and taking care of her oh can't wait.plz post soon

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Shagufta

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Posted: 18 years ago

#257

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

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Iqbaladdict

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Posted: 18 years ago

#258

beautiful update, his impatience for her to come to his room was adorable and then that kaddak jawab for his sis, wah wah ,kya baat hai, der aayay dooroost aayay. it was teribbly sweet, keep it up, I really look forward to it daily.

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prab_rockinn

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Posted: 18 years ago

#259

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shiv is soooooooooo sweet......He is finally realised Gauri's true worth in his life....
He has definitely fallen for her...... The fact that he wants her around him always is proof enough....
hope she gets better soon.......
His arrogance and stubbornness when it comes to gauri's health,express his protectiveness so wonderfully......

continue soon..........