Unspeakable Love FF NEW PART- 18 PG 19

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kaira11

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Posted: 18 years ago

#31

amazingg part 👏 !!!its soo intersting really wanna know wat shiv says i think he"ll accept her n will agree to marry her.Plz plz plz continue soon

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mad

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Posted: 18 years ago

#32

wow..that was gr8
thanx for 2 updates 😃
continue sooooooon
btw..is shiv going to say yes??? 😃

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prab_rockinn

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Posted: 18 years ago

#33

wow jus read the last three parts.....
what can i say..... i'm speechless.....
it's toooo goooooooood......
👏
waitin for more......

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Aditi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#34

hey c'mon wwe are waiting for the updates yaar its bin a long time

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Rupa

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Posted: 18 years ago

#35

hey, your fanfic is amazing...atleast the start seems very original... do carry on

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nerdynerd

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Posted: 18 years ago

#36

yaii shiv will still accept her...yippie..i'm sure about that...in yo face nikhila 😆

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LoveStruck21

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Posted: 18 years ago

#37

Thankz for enjoying it.....
here you go lovlies...

Part Seven

"You're what?"

At that moment, Gauri wanted the earth to open up...just so she could fall in, away from Shiv's shocked gaze.
It was killing her.

Baba spoke- "Shiv, I know you understand what I told you, now, you either accept her, or get out of my house!"

"Well, of course I accept her."

Nikhila almost choked again, and this time, Palak had to shove water down her throat.

Maheen looked at Shiv's face.

"Beta, I am proud of you"

Shiv had never heard his father ever utter a complement, let alone to him.

Wow.

Amazing.

Maheen Kapoor, proud of him.

Shiv looked at Gauri.

"Let me tell you something, loud and clear Gauri. Your inability to talk doesn't bother me, because it is nothing but a small flaw, and believe me, we all have them. When I saw you walking down those stairs, I knew I wanted to spend the rest of my life with you, and a small obstacle like that, pshh, no big deal"

Gauri stood there, never did she have such a strong desire to say something, as she did right now. Her mind wanted her mouth to scream "Thank You!", but she couldn't.
She let tears trickle down her face instead.

Baba made a stern face.

"Shiv, beta, let me tell you something, your gallant attitude is very endearing, however, you are making a very big decision, are you sure? This is mere beti ki zindagi we are speaking of. She is a very simple girl, but I do not want her dreams to become suppressed. You will give her all the happiness she deserves. I will see to it."

"On my honor sir." Shiv looked at Gauri. "I will give her all the happyness in the world, and then some"

Gauri stood there, unable to do anything. She decided to flee instead.

She ran to the roof, where the sun was shinning down upon her. She stood their in its glow, her own tears of happiness, and smile creating light upon her face.

A hand was placed upon her shoulder, she knew it was Baba, she quickly turned and burried her face in his chest.

To late, did she realize, her Baba never wore silk. It was to expensive.

Gauri jumped back, embarressment in her eyes.

She looked up.

There stood Shiv, with a smug look on his face.

"Why did you move away? I can actually manage crying women very well. You see, that's what usually happens, women start crying when I tell them I don't care about them."

Gauri's eyes became large, a smile touched her face.
What a funny man, Gauri thought.
If only she could tell him so.

"But, on a more serious note." Shiv walked towards her, and held her hand in his, "will you marry me, Gauri, please?"

Shiv got down on his knees. His eyes looked up at her, pleading.

Gauri looked down into his eyes.

They looked so sincere.

She nodded her yes.

Edited by tashmin - 18 years ago

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$imr@n

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Posted: 18 years ago

#38

hey that was soooooooooo cute
plz plz plz cont as soon as possible
me waiting 4 the next part........

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nerdynerd

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Posted: 18 years ago

#39

aww sho cute 😳 hopefully he'll treat her rite..he better!!great part 👏

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LoveStruck21

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Posted: 18 years ago

#40

Okay...I just had an epiphany.
So I will just update again.
Even tho I just did like ten minz ago.
Hopefully, nobody will mind.

Part Eight

Before Shiv knew what he was doing, he shot to his feet, and brought Gauri into the shelter of his arms.
He buried his face in the crook of her neck, and inhaled her sweet scent.

Gauri, on the other hand, had no clue what to do.
Her arms, hesitant, slowly creeped up against Shiv's broad back.
No one had ever hugged her like this. Yes, her father, her sister, her buah, they hugged her, however, this embrace from Shiv was different,
It was a lovers embrace.

It was so new.

Shiv held on to Gauri, until he heard a soft cough in the distance.

He placed a small kiss on her shoulder, and stepped away from her.

Buah smiled at the both of them.

"My goodness kids, you have not even married, tum dono, and you are here, mingling. Tis, tis."

Shiv scratched the back of his head, while looking at the floor.

Gauri didn't know where to look.

"Come on now, you two, everyone is waiting down stairs"

*

Nikhila did not believe what was happening.
She must have heard wrong.
Shiv was willing to marry that, that, that, GONGI!

'What the hell is wrong with that boy', she thought.
Her SON! Her handsome, vital, young, wealthy, Kapoor son, was consenting to marry that, down market, simplistic, not wealthy, gongi, Chaterji daughter.

Nikhila wanted to vomit.

She picked up her phone.

*

"Hello"

The women who picked up was fair, her large green eyes, outlined lightly with khol.
Her long black hair was unbound, falling down her back.
Her venomous voice did not deter Nikhila.

"We have a problem" Nikhila spoke from the other end of the line.

"What is it?"

"Shiv, he is going to marry."

"WHAT! NO HE CANNOT!"

"I know, but there is something even worse. The girl is mute."

"Really?"

"Yes."

"Well, then. That is not bad. Then my job has become very easy. Thank You"

"No problem, laykin please, my son is not to marry that gongi, down market flea. "

"No problem aunti. Shiv is mine."

Ipshita hung up the phone.

Edited by tashmin - 18 years ago

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