Unspeakable Love FF NEW PART- 18 PG 19

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harpreet sekhon

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Posted: 18 years ago

#51

wow, but a love.
plz continue sooooooooooon
thx

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LoveStruck21

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Posted: 18 years ago

#52

thanks.
you guys wanna know sumthing funni.
the last line on part nine...
it was
"before she could scream, a rock sailed in through her window"

then as i went back to read it i was like....oops...she's gongi, she cant talk.
Lol.

how dumb wud that have been.

Edited by tashmin - 18 years ago

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mad

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Posted: 18 years ago

#53

WOW....that was soooo cute
mayb u can do sumthing n make her talk later.. 😃
continue soon
n thanx for posting this update on sat.. 😊

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jiya imdad

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Posted: 18 years ago

#54

the update was really great 👏
shiv is really protective towards gauri 😳 he fought with ipshita for gauri that's soo sweet of him 😳 😳 😳
ur ff is fab 👏 do continue soon

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Jenna Dutt

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Posted: 18 years ago

#55

great update......keep it up pls.

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JCluvs srk

@JCluvs srk

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Posted: 18 years ago

#56

oh the last part was so touching. 'tear tear'....shiv is just soooo sweet....i hope tat its shiv who threw the rock

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Yasmin

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Posted: 18 years ago

#57

love it, ur story is soooo different from everyone else's!!!!

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LoveStruck21

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Posted: 18 years ago

#58

Part Ten Lovliez.

It hit her on the head.

Gauri felt a sharp pain, as the rock struck her forehead, she slowly fell to the floor.

*

Shiv wanted to call Gauri again.
Hell. He didn't no why.
Maybe he could ask her if she wanted to meet him somewhere.
Hmmm.
That might be a possibility.
Shiv dialed.

*

Gauri herd the phone ring.
It sounded like it was very ,very far away.
Her head was bleeding.
Her body didn't want to move.
She had to get to the phone.
She held her head in one hand, as she slowly got up and walked towards the phone.
Please, keep ringing until i get there, Gauri thought.
She picked up the phone.

"Hello Gauri, this is me again. I just wanted to no ---"

Before he could keep on talking, Gauri stared to bang her vase on the table near the phones mouthpiece.

"What the hell? Gauri, what the hell are you doing?"

Shiv's confused voice asked from the other end.

Gauri then started pressing random buttons on the phone, and right then, another rock was hurled in through the window.

"WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON OVER THERE!"

Shiv was angry. He did not no what was going on, but he heard glass shattering, and that was not good.

The rock hit Gauri in the back, hard.

She crumbled to the floor.

*

"Did you do it?"

"Yes, we did."

"Good. Hopefully, she slipped into a coma or something."

"We went right for her head mem sahib. And we threw another one for precaution."

"Good."

Ipshita hung up the phone.

Shiv was hers. No matter what. She was going to get him.

*

Shiv pulled over in Gauri's drive way.

"What the......."

Shiv looked up towards Gauri's bedroom.
She had no window.
There were shards of glass littered around his feet.

Shiv ran to her door. It was locked.
Damn it.

He grabbed a rock, and bashed in the glass panes on the door, and opened the door from the inside.

He ran up to her room.

The sight before him made him furious, heartbroken, and scared at the same time.

There lay Gauri, amidst brocken glass.

Her lithe body lying motionless on the floor.

Blood trickling down the left side of her face.

Shiv wanted to kill the son of a b***ch who did this to her.

But for now, he must put on a calm facade.

Shiv ran to her, and gently brushed away her hair.

She was so pale.

Her deep chocolate colored skin, looked light, and pale.

"Gauri, baby, come on. Keep breathing."

He knelt his head down to her chest, he heard her faint heart.

Thank God.

He picked up the phone, and dialed the police.

Gently, he picked her up within his arms, brushing his lips upon her head, which now was cradled on his shoulder.

*

"She will be alright."

Shiv almost fainted with relief.

Ipshita picked up her phone.

"She is quite week, however. Please make sure she gets rest, eats correctly, and drinks lots of liquids."

Baba, Kaya, and Buah came bursting in.

"What has happened? My god, Shiv, we all just came home a about thirty minuets ago. We found your note. Will she be okay? How did this all happen?" Baba's frantic eyes searched Shiv's for answers.

"I do not know how all this happened. She will be alright. And as to who did this, I will find out."

"That is not for you to find out sir."

A mean looking police officer made his way down the hospital hallway.

"I will take her bayan first. And we will solve this matter."

Everybody looked at the police officer, Shiv's face turned bloody furious.

"Sir, if you had done your homework before hand, you would no, that Garui bezubaan hai. So please, do not humiliate her."

The officer looked shocked.

"Fine, she will have to write everything down"

"She cannot even move without pain, so if you want what you desire. You wait"

The police officer gave Shiv a "you better watch out" type of look and walked away.

Shiv needed to marry Gauri fast.

If he didn't, who would protect her.

*

"No one will be able to protect you from me Gauri" Ipshita thought.
"Just you wait. You might have survived this attempt of mine, but there is a lot more to come"

Ipshita pulled the glycerin out of her purse, and dabbed a little under her eyes.

She made her way towards Shiv.

"Everything will be alright Shiv. Don't worry"

Edited by tashmin - 18 years ago

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suni

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Posted: 18 years ago

#59

wow very nice ,thasu u predicted real ippi which we will see in kaa in forthcomming episodes. 👏 .

shiv is very protective about gauri very nice i wish in kaa also shiv protect gauri like this only from evil ippi 😡