Unspeakable Love FF NEW PART- 18 PG 19 - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
oh man this is sooooooo GOOD! plse hurry up with the next part.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
Awesome story!! Poor Gauri, she considers herself unworthy because she cannot speak, but what does she know...Silence is Golden 😉 and I'm sure Shiv will accept Gauri as she is, and make her realize her selfworth!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
"The only difference between martyrdom and suicide is press coverage"

My favorite band .... and my favorite song.


Okay Lovlies....due to popular demand, I decided to update today.

Part Six

Gauri was feeling as though someone stabbed her in the stomach. She did not know what to expect. Did not know whether she should grasp for hope.
It was killing her because she did not know.

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Shiv saw her walking down the steps, for the second time within an hour, and yet, he still felt as though he just layed eyes on her. "I don't think I will ever tire of looking at her" Shiv thought to himself.

Baba spoke first.

"Shiv, Maheen, please, do not say a word, just listin to what i have to say."

"Baba--"

"SHIV NOT A WORD!" Baba's loud remark got everybody's attention.

Gauri stood by her Baba's side, her head held high, but her eyes full of fear of what was to come.

"I must tell you something Maheen. I am humbled that you wish to marry my Gauri, however, there is one thing that you must know."

Gauri felt like shrinking into the floor. Never before did her inability bother her, but today, for some reason, she did not want to feel humiliated.

"Mere beti gungi hai" Baba spoke the words.

Time stopped.

No body from Maheens family said anything.

Nikila said in her head: Well, i guess there is something different about the girl. How funny. Bechari gongi hai. Thank god. My son's little infatuation will evaporate.

Shiv opened his mouth to speak.....



Edited by tashmin - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
i think shiv will accept her no matter what

awesome update

continue soon

ck
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
alright! tat was a fast update. if shiv says yes then i'll fall in luv wit him right then and ther...(not tat i dont luv him already 😳 ) cant wait 4 mor.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#26
I will not disappoint you.

Tashi*
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Posted: 18 years ago
#27
it was damn good 👏
just can't wait 4 shiv's answer 😉
continue asap 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz continue soon with the longer update.

love u bye
waiting for the next update
thx
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
I am trying my best babe.
I'm just happy your so excited about it.


I will make it longer....I promise.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
waitnig for ur update ,its really gr8 😊

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