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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part-5

She completed making parathas .She was feeling weak and so she made coffee for herself ,drank it and went to take his clothes.She took out a grey T-shirt and matching blazer and a faded jeans.Then she left the room quickly after hearing the sound of washroom door.

She waited at the dining table and served breakfast for him.He was about to finish his breakfast,then she managed to talk.

Nan-Manik...kya mein...kya mein ek baar...papa se baath kar sakthi hoo...bas ek bar..

She stammered with fear.He looked at her making her tremble with fear.

Nan-Plz ek baar..papa mere liye tension le rahe honge..kal se mein ghar nahi gayi na..plzzz...

She pleaded.He washed his hands and kept his hand around her shoulder and made her walk with him.

Ma-Bas itni si baath...ok...talk to him...but on one condition...tum unse wo baath karogi jo mein tumhe bolne ko kahoonga..ok??

Nan-jii

She don't know why she even agreed for this.

Ma-Aur ha...tere dad tere liye koi tension nahi lethe..usko patha hai tum yaha ho..aur usko yeh bhi patha hai ki we are married..officially...

Nandini was shocked and asked "patha hai!!!kaise??"

Ma-wo jo papers tumne sign kiya hai na..wo konsa papers hai??

Nandini was silent because she haven't looked at them not even once before signing.

Ma-tumne dhekha nahi!!?? Kya nandu..bina dhekhe hi sign kar liya..tch tch tch...lo..koi baath nahi...ab dhekho..

Nandini was shocked to see those papers.

Ma-yeh hamari marriage registration forms ki photocopy hai jis par tumne sign kiya...yeh papers legally tumhe meri wife banaa diya...and iski ek aur copy tere dad ke haath pahunch gayi...

Nandini can't even utter a word.

Manik gave his phone to her and she dialed her father's number not knowing what to talk.

Ma-Phone speaker pe dalo.

Nandini kept phn on speaker.

Narendra-Hello..Who is this?

Na-papa.She said slowly.

Nar-nandu...beta..yeh tumne kya kiya beta??tere papa ke bina shaadi kar li...??

Manik whispered something in her ears and she was shocked listening to it.Manik signed her to say them.Now Nandini has tears in her eyes.

Na-papa mein Manik se pyaar karthi hoo..aur issliye shadhi kar li..aapki permission ki koi jaroorat nahi hai mujhe...

She can't continue and she pressed her mouth while crying.Narendra was shocked listening to her little daughter's words.

Nar-meri izzath ki toh care karthi na nandu..bas ek baar mujhse baath kar leti...

Manik again whispered something in her ears by which nandini was shattered and started pleading him silently as her father might hear her cries.

Manik held her arm tightly and started pressing it making it go red.Nandini beared her pain silently and managed to say those words.

Nan-papa mein aapse har rishtha thod rahi hoo...mera pati hi mera sab kuch hai..

She slowly said "sorry papa...I'm helpless"

Saying this she fell on ground weeping while Manik is back with his evil smile.Narendra too was shocked hearing all this.Manik took his phone from her hand and went out leaving behind a shattered Nandini.She ran to her room and was crying very badly.

Manik was trying to call Cabir.

Ma-yeh monkey ka phone kyun nahi lag raha hai..

Cabir just entered and listened to this.

C-kyunki monkey was jumping to reach his buddy.

Ma-oh Cabir..mein thujhe hi phn karne ki khoshish kar raha tha..

C-acha pehle thu yeh bathaa..thu kal se gayab kyun hai??na koi phn ,na koi msg...kya kar raha tha??

Manik gave him the marriage registration forms and by seeing this Cabir was dumbstruck.

C-yeh sab kya hai Manik..tumne Nandini se shaadi kar li..!!!tumne hum ko ek baar bathana bhi zaroori nahi samjha kya??

Ma-Cabir..listen na..aisa koi baath nahi yaar...I was waiting for this chance and chance milthe hi mein ne yeh sab kar liya...ek aur chance miss karna nahi chahtha mein..but I'm sorry yaar...

C-par yeh sab kiya kaise??

Manik explained everything,how he married her forcefully,how he blackmailed her to stay there,everything and Cabir was just silent not knowing what to say.

C-yaar...Manik..I know ki tumhe usse badla lena hai..par yeh koi tareeka hai badhla lene ka??shaadhi karke??kya karoge shaaadhi karke??

Manik wa silent now.

C-dude..usse patha bhi nahi ki usse kis cheez ki saza mil rahi hai??This is too much for her to handle..

Ma-haa toh kya karoo mein??Cabir thu kaise bhool saktha hai ki wo mujhse...humse...humse hamari Dhruv cheen liya hai...and now u r asking me to explain her what she has done to us??

Manik raised his voice in anger and grief.

C-mein kuch nahi bhoola hoo Manik..Par thum..

Cabir was interrupted by Manik.

Ma-par var kuch nahi Cabir...Mujhe achi tarah patha hai usse kaise deal karna hai..mein usko itna torture karoonga ki...

C-ki tum yeh bhi bhool jayega ki U LOVE HER..hai na??

Manik was silent by the words of Cabir.

C-hai na Manik??bolo..

Ma-haa mein bhool jaunga ki I LOVE HER...bcz mere dosth se bad kar mujhe kuch nahi hai..samjhaaa??

He was at his peaks of anger.Not knowing what to do,Cabir just hugged him.

C-haa mein jaaantha hoo bro...I'm just saying ki don't be too harsh on her...Handle nahi kar payegi..

Manik just nodded and said "thu jaa...mein abhi aayi.."

Manik went to his room and was shocked at the scene.Nandini was about to cut her wrist with a knife.Manik ran to her and tried to snatch the knife but Nandini held it tighter and was not leaving it.

Ma-Nandini...yeh kya kar rahi ho tum?? Chodo usseee...listen...

Nan-chodiye mujhe...

Nandini was not leaving the knife and Manik lost his temper and slapped her harder by which she fell on bed and knife on ground.

He held her by her arms,pinned her to the wall,both hands in his hands and was struggling to let her free.

Manik pressed his lips on hers.Nandini was shocked by this attack and was struggling even more than before..The more she struggled,the more he kissed harder.He bit her lower lip and she moaned in pain which made him way to enter her mouth.Tears were rolling down continuously from her eyes.

Both were in lack of oxygen but Manik was not ready to leave her.It was very harsh kiss a girl would never expect in her life and lasted for 4 long mins.Finally he left her lips making them shiver and blood oozing from lower lip of hers.

Ma-tumhare body ke ek ek inch par haq mera hai...sirf mera...so aisi harkath karne se pehle iske baare mein yaadh karna.

He moved his thumb on her shivering lips and said with anger.

Ma-Agli baar khudh ko hurt karne ki khoshish bhi ki naa,,toh I swear u can't even imagine the consequences after that...samjhi??

Now a small cut on her hand turned to wound because of his constant pressing.He noticed it and made her sit on the bed.She was not able to come into her senses.Manik took the first aid box and started dressing the wound.She pulled her hand by his touch coming into normality.But he again grabbed her hand this time more tighter and dressed it.

Ma-This is a small punishment...next time and next step...u can't handle it...so take care.

He tied her hands at her back to the edge of bed and stood to leave.

Manik stood at the door and said "Waise honey...this is awesome...and u r lovely" He said while rubbing his lips with a wink.

Nandini turned her head with a disgusted face.He left with his evil smile.

By the time Manik returned home,Nandini was sleeping at the position where he tied in the morning.Listening to the door sound she opened her swollen eyes.He came upto her,pecked her,,this time on lips.

Ma-Hey honey...how r u feeling now??

He released her hands and caressed the wrists which were red due to rope and the wound.

Nandini was just shivering and was silent.

Ma-tum kuch bol kyun nahi rahe ho??ohhoo...I'm sorry honey...tumne subah se kuch khaya nahi na...u might be weak..let me get u something to eat.

He left for kitchen and made some pasta and took to the room.

He took a spoon full of pasta and asked her to have it from his hands.

Ma-khao na..dhekh kya rahi ho??

"issko kaise samjhoo mein..kabhi gussa karte hai,,kabhi torture kathe hai aur kabhi care kartha hai...kaisa munda hai yeh..." She thought.

Ma-kyaa soch rahi ho??Split personality nahi hai mujhe...ab khao...agar tum aisi weak pad gayi toh mujhe kaise tolerate karogi ha??iss liye khila raha hoo..

She started eating by his hands as she was hungry and he fed her.After finishing he stood with the empty plate.

Ma-u have to be strong enough to bare all my tortures...Bcz I'm not done with u yet...

He said before leaving.

He came back and got fresh,changed into his night tracks.He saw an uncomfortable Nandini and asked..

Ma-Kya hua??kis soch mein ho??

Nan-wo..wo...actually...wo...mein...mujhe...

Ma-ab iske aaage kuch bologi ki nahi??

Nan-mere pass kapde nahi hai..

Manik looked at her and took her to a closet and Nandini was shocked to see the closet.

It consists of salwar suits,kurthis and all accessories...all exactly of her taste...

Ma-ab change kar lo

Nan-yeh sab...aapne kab arrange kiya??

Ma-tumhe kapde chahiye ya answer chahiye??

Nan-kapde

Ma-Now change.

He left and fell on the bed waiting for Nandini to come out.Nandini was looking at all the dresses and can't understand how he managed all those.

She came after changing into night dress and was about to sleep on couch.

Ma-yeh kya kar rahi ho tum??waha kyun soo rahi ho?? Aao bed pe soo jao..biwi ho meri...aao..

Nandini's heart came to her throat listening to this and remembering the morning incident.

Ma-kya soch rahi ho...aaj kuch aur karne ka mann nahi mujhe...Morning one is enough for today...so come n sleep.

Nandini slowly walked upto the bed and slept sidewards at the edge of bed.

"How come he manage to shock me all the time...!!! And how does he manage to know all my tastes..All the dresses are of my kind and accessories are of my brand...how??" She was thinking and turned to the other side.Manik was in deep sleep by now.

"kitna cute aur shaanth hai yeh...hot and handsome toh iska initials hai..." She admired her so called husband's physique and hotness and slowly drifted to sleep seeing him...


Done...managed to write a long one...hope u will like it...do suggest what u want me to change or have in this story...keep supporting...thank u...

Edited by keerthupranu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Nandani. K wajha say Dhruv ko kya Hua hai jiski punishment Manik usko de raha hai I'm sure koi misunderstanding hogai hogi ...continue soon waiting eagerly take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Do not change anything. The story is awesome 😃. Just reveal why Manik is angry with Nandini. Dhruv🤢 has something to do with it 😡. Update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Manik is too harsh with nandu...does he really loves her .how can he behave so badly ...really want to know reason behind it..Loved the concept ..waiting for next update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome



Mind blowing




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Lovely




Rocking shocking





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Sorry for late bcz my exams going on



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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Amazing update...
Manik is such a monster...but caring at d same too...
Luved it...
How nandini's responsible 4 tkng dhruv away 4m fab5???
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Nice update.
But this mystery is killing me.
I think dhruv liked nandini ...
Or
He did acting with her to make aliya jealous.
Bohot kuch ho sakta hai

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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
what did happen with druv?? and nandu how was she related??? update next part soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Awesome update
Now what happened 2 Dhruv?
And Nandu was responsible 4 that😲
Plz cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40

Part-6A

FLASHBACK

It's been a month since Manik started following every step of Nandini without anyone's notice.He liked her tastes,her simplicity,her cute antics.He noted every single thing in his mind about her ...her likes..her dislikes...They both were still stealing glances without anyone's notice.The only one who understood Manik's feelings is Cabir.Though Cabir asked him to reveal what he feels for Nandini,Manik refused as he was not sure about his feelings.

Meanwhile Dhruv and Nandini became good friends.They used to share everything from small chats to their feelings.Even Nandini is the first one to open up about what she felt for Manik by seeing him for the first time.Dhruv too told her about her feelings for Aliya and how he is teasing by making her jealous.Little did they know,there were two people who misunderstood this closeness...Aliya and Manik...

It was an usual day while Nandini was going to meet Dhruv.While Dhruv was coming from the other end of corridor he suddenly dashed Aliya.He caught hold of her not letting her to fall down.

D-tum theek ho na??

A-haa...dhyan kaha hai tera??dhekhe nahi chal saktha??

She noticed Nandini.

A-ooo...ab samjhiii...jaan waha hai toh dhyan yaha kyun hogi...!!!

D-yeh kya bol rahi ho tum??

A-leave me...go...ur Nanduuu is waiting.

She said sarcastically and went.Dhruv laughed very hard seeing her like that.Nandini who saw the entire scene came to Dhruv.

Nan-yeh galath baath hai Dhruv...tum usko kyun tangg kar rahe ho??

D-sach mein Nandini...I like when she gets irritated yaar...Aur rahi baath jealous ki...wo dhekh kar toh mujhe bahut khushi ho rahi hai...kitna pyar chupa ke rakha hai usne...mein toh kahtha hu ki tum bhi yeh trick try kar lo manik par..

Nan-Manik par...nahi nahi...

D-kyun nahi...What do u think of Manik??

Nan-manik...wo toh ...tumhara dosth hai...

D-mera nahi...tera kya hai??

She wanted to change the topic.

Nan-acha meri baath chodo na Dhruv...tum yeh bolo ki tum Aliya ko kab propose karoge??ithna intezaar karvana bhi theek nahi hai Dhruv..

D-yeah..I know...I'm planning to propose her after our album launch...2 days ke baad...But I'm still nervous..

Nan-nervous??aur wo kyun??

D-Nandini...Aliya meri best friend hai...ab ja kar mein usse propose karne wala hu..tension toh hogi na uski reaction ko le kar..

Nan-ooo Dhruv...tension ki koi baath nahi hai...tum ek baar practice kar lo..

D-practice??

Nan-ha..acha tum yeh batao ki tum Aliya ko kya bologe??

Just then Manik was coming and stopped seeing these two.He wanted to listen what they were talking but found himself funny for that and was about to leave.

D-Jab se tumhe dhekha hu,,thab se I've fallen for u...par kisi ko bhi yeh baath nahi bataya...not even to my buddy..ab tak tum meri best friend ho..ab mein uss relation ko next step par lena chahtha hu...I will always b there for u...I love u...

He said with full of emotion imagining Aliya.Manik was dumbstruck to listen those words.If it is not Dhruv,he would have punched him to death.He wanted to leave from there but just thought of seeing Nandini's reaction.Nandini who was fully impressed with Dhruv's way of proposal stood there with a huge smile.

Nan-wow Dhruv...Koi kisi se itna pyaar kaise kar saktha hai...I can see that love in ur eyes...I'm impressed Dhruv...I loved it...

Listening to this,Manik's mind exploded.Just then he realized he love her and now he lost her.He came to jam room and started playing guitar with an angry face and tears in his eyes remembering the convo between Dhruv and Nandini.

Nan-theek aise hi propose karna...I'm telling u she will definitely come running towards u...

Dhruv smiled and bid bye to her and left.

Aliya was going to library with frustration thinking about Dhruv.

"Excuse me" said a random person.Aliya turned around to see a guy wearing blue jacket and faded jeans.

"Can u please tell me the way to library??" he asked

A-come with me..I'm going to lib too.

"Thanks...I'm Aryaman..Aryamann Khurana.." He introduced himself forwarding his hand.

A-Aliya...Aliya Saxena..She shook hands with him.

They were walking towards library and were talking about each other.Dhruv on his way noticed this.Aliya also noticed him and started her over-acting with Aryaman as she was irritated with him and Nandini.

Aryaman-I was born and brought up in UK.I think India is the best place to learn music.And so I came here.

A-How sweet...She smiled though it is unnecessary.

They reached library followed by Dhruv.Now it was Dhruv's turn to be jealous and Aliya started enjoying it. "Mujhe pareshaan karke rakha hai na..toh ab mein dikhathi hu pareshaani kya hoti hai.."She thought.

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