MaNan-The revenge love story(part 50 pg-139)epilogue-140,04/07

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Nandini's POV:
It was dark when I opened my eyes.I couldn't move my hands and legs as they were tied very hard.All I could have is a worst head ache.Suddenly he entered the room opening the door with a thud and an evil smile on his face.That smile makes me shiver even in my sleep.He came up to me and removed a few strands of hair from my face and tucked them behind my ear and gave a bite on my earlobe.I couldn't even hiss in pain as my mouth was plastered.He traced his fingers all over my face and I felt disgusted with his touch.I was struggling with my tied hands and legs.
"Itni bhi kya jaldi hai nandu...Khol dhoonga...once tum meri official biwi ban jao..Then I'll let u free or should I say u won't be free from me..."Manik said with the same evil smile.
I was watching him with full fear and tears in my eyes and listening to the word biwi all I could do was staying shocked.
He pulled me towards him and started smelling me when I am still busy in struggling with my hands and legs.He pecked me on cheeks and pushed me over the bed and said "Take rest baby..u need it...to handle this monster" He winked and went off.
"shaadi aur isse...kaha phas gayi hoo main...god plz save me.."I thought.


LINK to SECOND STORY

MANAN SS-A Delicate love story
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4637158


LINK to THIRD STORY

MANAN TS-Sorry It's my attitude
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4679669


LINK to FOURTH STORY

MANAN FS-Heights of coincidence
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4688620



Part-1: pg 3 Forceful Marriage
Part-2: pg 4 Wicked Plan
Part-3: pg 5 House Arrest
Part-4: pg 6 Flashback-1
Part-5: pg 7 I won't leave u
Part-6A,B: pg 8,9 Flashback-2
Part-7: pg 12 Romance and Bromance
Part-8: pg 14 Flashback-3
Part-9: pg 18 Evil Game
Part-10: pg 20 Flashback-4
Part-11: pg 23 Dirty Attempt
Part-12: pg 25 Some Revelations
Part-13: pg 30 Will U Forgive Me?
Part-14: pg 33 Time For Clarifications
Part-15: pg 38 Cold War
Part-16: pg 40 I Love You
Part-17: pg-44 Did I Deserve This?
Part-18: pg-46 Chota Celebration
Part-19: pg-48 Time For Response
Part-20: pg-49 I Love You Too
Part-21: pg-51 Togetherness
Part-22: pg-53 Nok-Jhok
Part-23: pg-55 I Can't See You Hurt
Part-24: pg-59 Hidden Truth
Part-25: pg-62 You Can't Hurt Me
Part-26: pg-65 I'll Be With You Forever
Part-27: pg-68 Hope Won
Part-28: pg-71 You Changed Me
Part-29: pg-74 Your Friends Are Mine Too
Part-30: pg-77 You Are My Love
Part-31: pg-80 I Can't Risk You
Part-32: pg-83 Compensation
Part-33: pg-85 I Respect Your Feelings
Part-34: pg-89 I Keep My Promise
Part-35: pg-92 Surprise
Part-36: pg-95 I Can't Stay Away From You
Part-37: pg-101 You Are Mine Again
Part-38: pg-103 Together Forever
Part-39: pg-106 Time For Others Happiness
Part-40: pg-109 Your Wish Will Come True
Part-41: pg-112 Honeymoon
Part-42: pg-115 It's Time For Celebrations
Part-43: pg-118 Sorry For Leaving You Alone
Part-44: pg-121 Utmost Happiness
Part-45: pg-124 It's Just A Start
Part-46: pg-127 It's Not Over
Part-47: pg-130 Our Little Bundle Of Joy
Part-48: pg-133 Our Cutie Pie
Part-49: pg-136 Another Little Bundle Of Joy
Part-50: pg-139 Happily Ever after
Epilogue and Thank u note-pg 140

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Ky21 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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pls pls pls do continue. ..
I loved the concept...
update soon...
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Hey dear.. plz continue n pm me if possible
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Seems to be interesting... Nice one..
Continue

Revenge Love would be just awsum😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting
Waiting for the update
Update soon
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Story name n Prologue is realllyy very very interesting...
Plzzz chapters Prologue k badd se hi suru karnaa...

I hope u ll continue n complete the story...plzzz midd m gayab mat honaa..complete karnaa
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It seems interesting... I hope Nandini would be shown mature here with her little cute childish acts
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank u for encouraging me.. It means a lot guys...yes,here comes the characters...

Manik Malhotra- 25yrs old handsome,rich spoilt brat...the one and only heir of Malhotra's and apne parents ka ladla...He has nvr evr taken a NO as an answer...feelings express karne ka tareeka alag hai iss munda ka...The only emotion he expresses perfectly is his anger..he is certified for his torturing skills...he is the lead singer of FAB5 and he is doing M.A music in SPACE..also sometimes tackles business in his father's absence.
Nandini Murthy-23yrs old seedhi saadhi ladki hai..she just joined SPACE academy to start her first yr M.A music...junior to our hero...the first day in college is a different experience for her..Till now she is a very bold person..modern hai par traditional bhi hai...But the only thing she fears and shivers is MANIK...bahut suni hai uske baare mein aur uske gusse ke baare mein...little did she know she once becomes the victim of his tortures..
Nyonika Malhotra and Raj Malhotra- Parents of Manik Malhotra..Apne bete ki aankhon mein khushi dekhne ke liye kuch bhi karenge yeh dono..a prime reason for his spoilt behaviour...
Dhruv Vedant-Best buddy of Manik..jaan bhi de deta hai Manik iss ke liye...Member of FAB5...secretly has his feelings on Alia...but haven't exposed not even to Manik..
Alia Saxena-Member of FAB5..fashion freak...wanted to study Masters in Fashion designing...looking for it..She too has feelings for dhruv bt nvr expresses..
Cabir Dhawan-other best buddy of Manik...his stomach is full of pranks and pathetic jokes..straight guy(here)...the only person who knows Manik internally too..
Mukti Vardhan-Member of FAB5..loves riding...bahut bold hai yeh ladki...poora ka poora mardh hai only appears as a girl...in short tomboy hai yeh...

Remaining characters will be portrayed in the story..

Part-1

Nan-Yeh kahan phas gaya hoon mein..god pls save mefrom this monster...aakhir chaahtha kya hain yeh mujhse shaadi karke..

In the meanwhile she heard footsteps towards her room and for her fear its him.

Manik-Hi honey..how are u feeling now?? Better??So ready for marriage??

He said while keeping strands of hair behind her.

Nandini was shocked to listen to the word marriage.He was wearing a red sherwani.

M-kya??look kya de rahi ho? Chale shaadi karne?

Saying this he covered her head with a duppatta ,not freeing her from tied hands and legs,,not even mouth.And jst lifted her in his arms.

Nandini's eyes were flowing continuously with fear.The scene she saw outside the room made her tremble in fear.There was a small mandap for marriage and pandit was chanting mantras.Seeing the bride in that position he just stood up in fear and confusion.Manik placed nandini on a chair and she was as usual struggling with her hands.

Pandit-Beta,yeh aap kya kar rahe ho??Aisa jabardasthi shaadi karna paap hai beta...chodo unko..

Manik-Thumhara suggestion maanga kya maine??apne kaam se kaam rakh..mujhse bas 10 mins shaadi cmplt honi chahiye.

Saying this he threw some money bundles at his face.Pandit can't even say a word and just continued his mantras.

Pandit-Beta phera lena hai..vadhu ke saath,,aap...!!!!!

He can't complete the sentence seeing nandini at that position.

Manik took nandini again in his arms and started taking pheras

1: I promise ki mein teri aankhon mein aansoon ke sivaa kuch nahi aane dhoonga

2: I promise ki mein teri saari khushiyan dhoor kar dhoonga

3: I promise ki mein hi teri dhuniya banoonga aur baahar ki dhuniya ke toh bhulwa dhoonga

4: I promise ki mein teri saari apnon ko tumse ek ek karke cheenunga

5: I promise ki mein teri sapnon ko crash karoonga

6: I promise ki mein tumhe itna torture karoonga ki tum maut ki beek maangogi

7: I promise ki mein tumhe woh saari suvidhaye dhoonga par u can't enjoy them

By this he completed taking pheras with struggling nandini in his arms.

Pandit gave him sindoor and mangalsutra to Manik.Nandini ki toh jaan nikal gayi usko dekh kar..But she can't do anything except crying.

Manik kept mangalsutra around her neck and held her face his cheeks and kept sindhoor on her maang forcefully.

Pandit-Ab aap dono pati patni ban gaye hai.

Manik asked him to leave.Nandini was dumbstruck and also stopped struggling with her hands anymore.

Manik-So Miss Nandini Murthy...Oops!!! Mrs.Nandini Manik Malhotra..congratulations.

He had his evil smile and opened her mouth's plaster with a jerk.He pulled her towards him and pecked on her cheeks.

M-kuch bologi nahi Mrs.Malhotra.

He smiled devilishly.He lifted her in his arms and took her to his room and thrown her on the bed.

M-So nandu..get ready for suhaag raat.

He winked and said.She hasn't recovered from marriage shock and soon she got another shock SUHAAGRAAT.

Nan-Plz mujhe chod dhijiye.plz I beg u

M-tch tch tch..kaash Nandu mein tumhe chod paata..par mujhe tumse bahut kaam hai..so for now take rest and keep on dreaming about our suhaagrat.He winked.

Saying this he again plastered her mouth and pushed her on the bed and went and locked the door.

Nan-God...yeh kya ho raha hai mere saath...mein dad ko kya bataungi and he will be fully shattered knowing about this marriage.But I should get out from here first.I can't allow this monster to spoil my life even more than this.

Thinking about this she tried to free herself.

Guys done with part-1...Hope u will like it...will try to update regularly..thank u once again for encouraging me...love u all..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superbbb!!!!!!!! story is really interesting. I love this kind of story.
Plz update soon
If possible today
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can't u update the second part today??...its really interesting...i love it..

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