MaNan-The revenge love story(part 50 pg-139)epilogue-140,04/07 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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do cont soon...pm me also plz
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Part-4

FLASHBACK

It was the first day of college for Nandini.She was in hurry as she was already late.She was running and suddenly dashed a person and her things were fallen on the ground.She continuously said sorry without watching at the person and started collecting her things.He too helped her in picking up the things and they both finally gathered everything.

Nan-I'm sorry..I was late and so I was in a hurry.By d way I'm Nandini Murthy.

She forwarded her hand introducing herself.

"Dhruv...Dhruv Vedant" he said and shook his hand with hers.

She smiled and said "Nice meeting u Dhruv.Will catch u later.Bye"

She left the place saying this.

"How innocent she looks...pretty girl..." Dhruv thought.

Dhruv went to the jam room where FAB4 were waiting.

D-sorry guys...I'm late again

Cabir-teri toh aadhath bann gayi na logon ko intezaar karvaane kaa...

He said with a smile seeing Aliya.

D-Aisi koi baath nahi yaar...

He can't understand what to say indirectly.

Ma-Buddy..what is this hanging over ur shirt??

It's a bracelet hanging on a button of his shirt.Dhruv took it and was trying to figure out to whom it may belong to and he suddenly remembered Nandini.

D-ha yeh...shaayadh usski hogi..

Dhruv said with a smile.

C-usski??mathlab kiski??

D-nandini...aathe waqt steps par takaraa gayi thi..shaayad galthi se lag gayi hogi.

All FAB4 was keenly observing his expressions while talking about Nandini,and Aliya was watching with a bit of insecurity.

C-Nandini...!!!fresher hogi...

D-haa...cabir she looks so innocent and pretty...

Listening to this Aliya's insecurity turned to jealous.Dhruv observed this and thought of teasing her.He started to praise Nandini's complexion,her touch etc.

C-agar itni beautiful hai toh ek baar dhekhna padega...wat say guys??

Muk-Ha yaar...Dhruv for the first time talking about a girl...have to see her...

All headed to M.A music first year class and Mukthi dragged Aliya who was lost in her thoughts.

D-woh first bench par byti hai na..blue kurti wali,,wo hai Nandini Murthy.

He stressed her name and looked at Aliya who turned her head with jealous.But she is the one who noticed and examined Nandini without anyone's notice.

"Ladki hai ya cuteness ki dhukaan...yar she is sooo beautiful man..." Manik thought seeing the mesmerizing beauty and smile of Nandini.

C-she looks pretty man...

Muk-iss liye toh hamara Dhruv itna bol raha hai iske baare mein...cute...hai na Aliya??

Aliya just gave a weak smile and asked "Can we leave for practice now??"

Manik came into his senses and they all left for practice.

Manik was lost in his thoughts and the only face he could see is Nandini.

Cabir hit him on his head and asked "abe kahaa kho gaya hai thu...nandini ke bhooth chada hai kya tere ko bhi??"FAB 3 were busy in discussing something.

Manik cursed Cabir as he could easily study him.."Yeh saala kaisi patha kar letha hai ki mere mann mein chal kya raha hai.." He thought.

M-Nahi yaar..lyrics ke baare mein soch raha hoo..bas.

C-ooo...likeee thaaattt...ok...

D-Guys mein yeh bracelet usko wapas dhe kar aatha hoo...bechari doond rahi hogi..

C,Muk-ooo Dhruv...bechariii haaa...jao beta jao...

Dhruv smiled seeing jealous Aliya.

Manik,who is desperate to see Nandini again got a chance now.

M-Dhruv mein bhi aaonga tere saath...waise canteen bhi jana hai...guys kuch chahiye aap logon ko??

He asked FAB3 and they gave their respective orders.They both went and Aliya was disappointed with Dhruv's behavior.

Dhruv and Manik went upto her class and there they found Nandini searching for something.

D-thum isse doond rahi ho??

Dhruv stood behind her and asked her showing the bracelet.Nandini looked around to find Dhruv holding her bracelet.Seeing the bracelet ,she jumped with joy and hugged Dhruv.Manik was shocked with this act and so was Dhruv.

Nan-Thank u so much Dhruv...this means a lot to me...Thank u so much..u know this is my mom's last memory..And ek pal thak mujhe laga ki mein isko kho diya...par yeh kaha mila thumhe??

D-meri shirt par atak gayi thi..And ha..this is my best buddy Manik...Manik Malhotra...

Dhruv introduced Manik to Nandini and Manik just glared at her.They both shook hands after a while.

"yeh ladka hai ya hotness ka dhukaan...Oh my god...how handsome he is...dammnnn he is too hot to handle...ab tak mein isko kaise notice nahi kiya"She thought looking at Manik.

Manik was dumbstruck with the touch..."She looks like a doll...milky skin...daammmnnn she is too cute.."He thought.

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Manik's phone started buzzing disturbing his thoughts...He slowly opened his eyes...The first thing he saw is Nandini sleeping like a baby in the couch...

"Yaar..itni messed up situation mein bhi yeh kitna cute lag rahi hai...Her cheeks,her milky skin...her..."Manik stopped himself and thought again "Manik..yeh kya ho gaya thujhe...kya soch raha hai yaar...thu kaise bhool saktha hai ki isne tere saath kya kiya...".He tapped himself on his head.

"Yeh itni aaram se soo nahi sakthi..isko disturb kaise karoo..."He thought again and went to bring black coffee.

He brought 2 mugs of black coffee to lesser the hangover.He sipped from one mug and took another mug near Nandini's hand.He dipped her index finger in the mug and she suddenly woke up by this.She sat looking at the finger and Manik with fear.

M-kya hua??jal gayi kya??...Nahi ...ek finger hi toh hai..poora haath isme daaloo toh thab patha chalega jalan kya hai.

Saying this he tried to pull her hand but Nandini struggled not to give her hand.He stopped after a little struggle and said "Kaisi patni ho tum..itni dher tak soo rahi ho??Ab jao ja kar apni pati ke liye breakfast banao"

Seeing Nandini holding her head,he gave the mug of coffee and asked her to have it.She finished it,got fresh and about to leave for kitchen and then stopped.

Nan-Kya banao breakfast mein??...She asked childishly.

M-Aloo paratha..aur ha..uske baadh aa kar mere kapde nikaal kar rakhna..

Nan-Jii

He went to washroom to freshen up without looking at her nod.

Done for today guys...tell me what u feel by ur comments...thank u...aap log jitna desperately wait karthe ho na update ke liye,waise hi mein bhi aapki comments ki wait karoongi...and those who wants me to pm,,add me to ur buddy list...bye..

Edited by keerthupranu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 3...
Manik to full evil Nikla hai.. like seriously thori si bhi care nai...
and oska wound to dress kr de...
Don't know what's the story behind
let's see what is coming up next..
Unressed on pg 4
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
college days were nice..
both were lost in each other...
they look cute together.. but the current situtation😭
still in thoughts what led to these situation...
Manik have feelings for her.. but how this love story will proceed... waiting for it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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You can change the subject when u update...
edit the first post on this thread... and edit it's subject... it will be done..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Amazing update...
Flashback was superb...
Luved it...
Why is manik behaving this way???
Thnx 4 d pm...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Missed Chapter 1...
Just read it now...

character sketch was awsum...
Shadi bhi ho gai? like seriously itni jaldi and MANIK... poor Nandini. what she must be going through
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
read 4 part 1go...but what was happened on their past??? hope you reveal soon... waiting for next part... update sooonnn plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update



Superb update



Fab update




Loved it



Loved the update




Waiting for the next part




Plz Plz Plz update the next part soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Read the 4 parts in one go😃
Manik married her 2 take his revenge
But what Nandu did with Manik?
Loved the flashback
I think there must be some misunderstanding
Plz pm me

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