MaNan-The revenge love story(part 50 pg-139)epilogue-140,04/07 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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awsmmm update

loved it

cont soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice flashback... Feel bad for both
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Part-6B

Dhruv came running to Nandini to share what he saw.

Nan-Arey tum itni tension mein kyun ho??

D-Nandini...She started the same trick on me...He said in a childish manner.

Nan-Arey baba...saaf saaf bolo kya hua??

Dhruv explained everything.

Nan-ohh..ab patha chala na??toh yeh sab drama katham karo jaldi..aur uska naam kya hai??

D-Aryaman Khurana...uska lib ID pe dhekha mein ne.Mujh se bhi zyada smart hai...

Nandini laughed seeing a child in Dhruv and thought of talking to Aryaman.

In the jam room,Manik was still playing his guitar furiously,while cabir entered and clearly understood something is wrong with him.

C-Manik...thu theek hai na??

He didn't answer.So Cabir removed the plug of guitar.By now Manik came into his senses.

C-kya hua??pareshaan ho??

Ma-Nahi...I got my closure..He said in a low voice.

C-closure??mathlab??

Ma-I came to know about my feelings for Nandini.

C-wow bro..par iss baath ke liye devdas ka build-up kyun dhe raha hai??

Cabir asked in a funny manner and realized it is not funny.

C-seedha bol na...kya hua??

Ma-Dhruv and Nandini are together.

He managed to talk those words.Cabir understood his situation and he also understood that Manik will never express his feelings to her after this.

C-thumhe kaise patha??

Ma-I overheard their conversation.Dhruv proposed her and she accepted.

C-Ab kya karega??

He asked Manik though he knows he will sacrifice his feelings for Dhruv.

Ma-Buddy ki khushi se bad kar kuch nahi yaar...yeh hota rehtha hai..I will be fine..

He said but Cabir knew it is not so easy for him to b alright.Their convo was interrupted when Dhruv entered jam room with a sad face.

C-abe kya hua??tera muh aisa atka hua kyun hai??

D-uss aryaman ka taange thod dhoonga mein...He said to himself but came out of his mouth.

C-Aryaman??ab yeh kaun hai??aur kya kiya usne??

D-nahi kuch nahi..mein abhi aya..

He left the room making an excuse and cursed himself for slipping his mouth.

"yaar dhruv..thode din chup rehthe na..ek bar aliya accept kar lethe na thab ja kar sab ko bathaa dhenge na..." He said to himself.

Ma-kuch toh hua yaar..yeh pareshan lag raha hai.chal patha karthe hai..

Manik and cabir went to see what's happening.

Nandini went to meet Aryaman at the same time.

Nan-Hi,I'm Nandini Murthy..Aap Aryaman??

Arya-oh Hi...yes...I'm Aryaman Khurana...

Nan-Aap tabla play karthe ho??

She asked seeing him with tabla.

Arya-yes...Classical tabla...and I also play drums.u??

Nan-mein veena play karthi hu...waise mujhe aap se baath karni hai...

Arya-par pehle will u stop this AAP and all...plz..

Nan-ha...They both started laughing while Manik and Cabir reached them.

Ma-ab mujhe patha chala ki dhruv upset kyun hai...isko mein chodunga nahi...

Manik was about to go when Cabir stopped him.Nandini and Aryaman started walking in the corridor side by side.

Nan-waise aryaman..mujhe teri help chahiye..

Arya-help??ha bolo na...

Nandini explained tom n jerry behavior of Aliya and Dhruv by which Aryaman started laughing.

Nan-Ab mere pagal friend ko aur push karne ke liye tumhe dho theen baar Aliya se baath karni hogi jab Dhruv is around..u understood na??

Arya-ha haa I understand...mission started hi samjho..

They both shook hands.Manik's blood was boiling with anger seeing them like that.But he hasn't heard what they were talking.They both bid bye to each other and Nandini was walking alone in the corridor.She was shocked when someone pulled suddenly by her arms into an empty room.

FB ends...

Nandini woke up with a jerk.She shivered a lot and looked at Manik wiping her sweat.Manik was still asleep.It was 8 in the morning.She took a deep breath and went to freshen up...


Done...Comment whatever u feel...It means a lot...plz...keep supporting and encouraging...thank u all..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Thank u soo much for the update


sorryy m coment nehi kar rahi thi bcoz mujhe laga ki prologue k badd kuch update hua nehi hogaa..

But ajj mene heading read kia fir sare updates read kiaaa

Its Amazing

its suuuppeerrrbb

mindblowing
realyyy luv it
want more present track

n hope Manik Nandu ko mar pit thoraa kam kareee its shocking k usne Nandu k finger hot coffe m dal diyaa jan bujh k contineousllyy usk hurted hand ko wounded banaa diaaa kuch serious ho jata to????
Itnaaa torture karegaaa to koi v uss monster daregaa...
But luv it luv this greyyy shaded Manik
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Thank u soo much for the update


sorryy m coment nehi kar rahi thi bcoz mujhe laga ki prologue k badd kuch update hua nehi hogaa..

But ajj mene heading read kia fir sare updates read kiaaa

Its Amazing

its suuuppeerrrbb

mindblowing
realyyy luv it
want more present track

n hope Manik Nandu ko mar pit thoraa kam kareee its shocking k usne Nandu k finger hot coffe m dal diyaa jan bujh k contineousllyy usk hurted hand ko wounded banaa diaaa kuch serious ho jata to????
Itnaaa torture karegaaa to koi v uss monster daregaa...
But luv it luv this greyyy shaded Manik


reallyy luv ur updates n desperatellyy waiting for further parts wid more n nore n full of Manan...itss goood to see horrified Nandu...n Mani to usko pyar karta tha naaa to it ll b a trit to watch ll b his reaction when he ll come to know that his love one is horified...n coz is he himselff
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46



Wow very very beautiful and different story. ..

Read all parts in a go...

Amazingly written chapters. ..

Looking forward to seeing more. .

Thanks for sharing this amazing story.

Stay blessed dear.




Thanks.




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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazingg
Superbbb update
kitna kch ho gea...itni saari misundrstndngg...bss sb theek ho jaye...lovd it...continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
I am just crying... Written so well
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Awesome update
Everyone was misunderstanding each other
Poor Nandu
She got trapped in Manik's misunderstanding
Hope he will get the truth soon
Cont soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Manan ke problems ka kaaran - Dhruv, Alya aur Aryaman.( Kaaran means reason) 😆😆 Kaahani kuch clear hua. Update soon.

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