MaNan Three Shot - Just One? | Completed - Page 9

Originally posted by: -MKB-

collectove Awww

the defintion of the missing heart more awww ❤️

and the ending the best awww

bas aur awww nahi karna get back to the angst one

I am done with awww and mushiness

but is update ke liye pyaar pyaar pyaar

Originally posted by: Autumn_Hue

This was just amazing the perfect icing on the cake.. I read and re-read and re-read the same part again and again I loved it so much..

Nandini's drunk innocence and their constant banter ohhh it was fun to read.. The last part was the cherry on the cake just how deep and amazing was that Manik's confession about his losing his heart to her and Nandini being selfless even in her drunk mode offering her heart to him so that he won't go around breaking his.. *sigh* it was just brilliant keep writing.. 😳

Originally posted by: Senpoo

Beautiful is THE word ... And it says it all... The last part is very well carved and very much Manik-Nandini ISH... And when it is 'that' how can we resist ourselves relishing in and out to the core...

Originally posted by: loquacious_me

This was so good...
Adi you be the rockstar...⭐️
It's always a bliss reading your works...
👏

Originally posted by: TheShipWeirdo

Dafuq? When did you update? 😡 EFFING RES

Originally posted by: charminggenie

Is it possible to make me cry and smile at the same time, yeah well I guess all it takes is a bit of Flamey Magic - This bit does me in , " So, you take mine because I know, you will never hurt it and will always keep it safe. I trust you with my heart."

^^ This is the thing right , this is why they can never be toxic.

Ah the beauty of your words, the innocence and the depth of emotions. This was just so complete. Peace and happiness , Flamey , just the words I need for the night .

I have never watched the show and still read it. I deserve something 😎