MaNan Three Shot - Just One? | Completed

Aparajita

@apardh_ba

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

No one
has ever looked at me with that
worry, concern, care, love. As
tenderly as she held up my face, did
she spoke those words which made
me realize as to why am I so fiercely
possessive about her and would do
anything to keep her in my life.

Yes I cn feel d sm. Dat love, care, intensity and passion. God how did u manage to write smthng like this. Its magic. keep writing. Its always a treat to read ur writings.

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Mrinal Krishna

@Sexpot

Voyager

19

Posted: 10 years ago

#62

"Because, my dear Professor Nandu, in all this time, you have gracefully managed to capture my heart and keep it safely with you. So that other heart, that you are feeling, is mine and here I am left without any, trying to live somehow. You see, you've left me heartless."

This was so cute ADITI I was planning to read it in the evening but just couldn't resist it...our Manik as a helpless, heart"less" love struck ,hormonal fool is really adorable. These two have sizzling chemistry on paper as well. In my head a complete picture emerges. Very nice Aditi I liked my gift ever so much.

Luv

M

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Aditi u r d best😎

Be it mushy or angst ur write-ups r jus amazingg

Hats off🤗👍🏼

Now coming to d update

Aww such a cutee updateee❤️

"Because, my dear Professor Nandu, in all this time, you have gracefully managed to capture my heart and keep it safely with you. So that other heart, that you are feeling, is mine and here I am left without any, trying to live somehow. You see, you've left me heartless."

i soo lovedd these lines❤️

Really? Did I do that to you? I am sorry. You know, you do one thing. You... take my heart. Yes, you do that. I am not returning you yours because you are this complete idiot who loves breaking himself just to assure that people around you are happy. So, you take mine because I know, you will never hurt it and will always keep it safe. I trust you with my heart."

and this one too our sweet,cute,innocent and drunk nandu❤️

this reminds me of dat moment I'll shine for u

fantastic endingg👏

All d best for ur boards 👍🏼

come back wit a bang soon😊

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kriti094

@kriti094

Voyager

19

Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Simply amazing
i totally loved all the 3 parts
u r an amazing writer

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Shreya

@-MKB-

Inactive

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

collectove Awww

the defintion of the missing heart more awww ❤️

and the ending the best awww

bas aur awww nahi karna get back to the angst one

I am done with awww and mushiness

but is update ke liye pyaar pyaar pyaar

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

30

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

This was just amazing the perfect icing on the cake.. I read and re-read and re-read the same part again and again I loved it so much..

Nandini's drunk innocence and their constant banter ohhh it was fun to read.. The last part was the cherry on the cake just how deep and amazing was that Manik's confession about his losing his heart to her and Nandini being selfless even in her drunk mode offering her heart to him so that he won't go around breaking his.. *sigh* it was just brilliant keep writing.. 😳

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PooraiPaagol

@PooraiPaagol

Beginner

3

Posted: 10 years ago

#67

This was so freaking CUTE!gah!my heart's become a chocolaty goo!

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Senpoo

@Senpoo

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Beautiful is THE word ... And it says it all... The last part is very well carved and very much Manik-Nandini ISH... And when it is 'that' how can we resist ourselves relishing in and out to the core...

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