MaNan Three Shot - Just One? | Completed - Page 6

Author's Note:

Wow Adi that was beautiful. Sorry running out of time but will come back and comment later. Hehe the sadist in me wanted to be the first one to read it and tell you how much I loved it. ❤️

reserves.🤣

EDITING.


OH GOD
IDE
HOW
I CAN'T.
THIS
LIKE
Kameeni i've no idea what to say <33 AHH AKASKSLMCM HOW ADORABLE WAS THIS? HOWWW? Like im so out of words and so emotional cos of the last lines and sooo.. <33 BUDHEE THIS WAS LOVE. BAS. This was pure pure love and i loved every bit of it. How adorable was our nandu here? like really. she's so so cute and your writing and description is so so perff bae. i fall in love everytime man. every single time <33 the way you describe manik's pov, be lovee! how cute was nandu though? such a highlight of this OS. Her famous glare🤣 lmao! and he took her to his room. *tharki mode be on*☺️🤣
and eee their banter was so sooo cute. the way she was pointing at him and my baba be glaring so much. and that how will i reply part was so cute. and she was poking at his chest :$
tumble to bed. tharki mode deepens.

BUT OMFG IDK IDK That last part? Gosh it was so so deep :$ how can someone have two hearts? Cos she has his heart. like idek like i ca't even. that was so thoughtful and so deep and so so beautiful, and a drunk nandu saying that, with her head in the crook of his neck and she in his arms and they on the bed. Gosh so so beautiful my babies :')) my manik be so in love. :'))

I LOVED THOSE LAST LINES MAN. THEY BE SOO SOO LOVE AND DEEP. and she fell asleep. AHH. WHAT A PERFECT PERFECT BEAUTIFUL ENDING. I CAN'T EVEN <33
This is why i love you kameeni. you adorable writer I ADORE SO MUCH..

This was such a beautiful three shot. from cabir to manik and the humor and soft element so beautiful and that end took the cake. aahh!

This was beautiful:):)
You write really well:) Be it angst or mushy stuff:):)

Fabulous TS 👏

Originally posted by: Srujana7.MaNan

Wow Adi that was beautiful. Sorry running out of time but will come back and comment later. Hehe the sadist in me wanted to be the first one to read it and tell you how much I loved it. ❤️

Originally posted by: PrincessAshVik

This was beautiful:):)
You write really well:) Be it angst or mushy stuff:):)

Originally posted by: punya25

How adorable was this

This TS is amazing!

"Really? Did I do that to you? I am sorry. You know, you do one thing. You... take my heart. Yes, you do that. I am not returning you yours because you are this complete idiot who loves breaking himself just to assure that people around you are happy. So, you take mine because I know, you will never hurt it and will always keep it safe. I trust you with my heart."

^This made me sigh and go all mushy 😳

Loved it

Originally posted by: sonia_1

Fabulous TS 👏

Loved it ! especially the end

TFS