MaNan Three Shot - Just One? | Completed - Page 8

Originally posted by: MaybeSomeday...

reserves.🤣

EDITING.


OH GOD
IDE
HOW
I CAN'T.
THIS
LIKE
Kameeni i've no idea what to say <33 AHH AKASKSLMCM HOW ADORABLE WAS THIS? HOWWW? Like im so out of words and so emotional cos of the last lines and sooo.. <33 BUDHEE THIS WAS LOVE. BAS. This was pure pure love and i loved every bit of it. How adorable was our nandu here? like really. she's so so cute and your writing and description is so so perff bae. i fall in love everytime man. every single time <33 the way you describe manik's pov, be lovee! how cute was nandu though? such a highlight of this OS. Her famous glare🤣 lmao! and he took her to his room. *tharki mode be on*☺️🤣 Eee, I be soaring high. Now give me intense stuff man. Jaldi ☺️ I switched on Tharki mode, you act on it.
and eee their banter was so sooo cute. the way she was pointing at him and my baba be glaring so much. and that how will i reply part was so cute. and she was poking at his chest :$
tumble to bed. tharki mode deepens. Awww, thank you. This is probably the first time I had to think so much for writing it and being in character at the same time. Pshhh, Mush is tiring 🤣

BUT OMFG IDK IDK That last part? Gosh it was so so deep :$ how can someone have two hearts? Cos she has his heart. like idek like i ca't even. that was so thoughtful and so deep and so so beautiful, and a drunk nandu saying that, with her head in the crook of his neck and she in his arms and they on the bed. Gosh so so beautiful my babies :')) my manik be so in love. :'))The only part I didn't thought much about 🤣

I LOVED THOSE LAST LINES MAN. THEY BE SOO SOO LOVE AND DEEP. and she fell asleep. AHH. WHAT A PERFECT PERFECT BEAUTIFUL ENDING. I CAN'T EVEN <33
This is why i love you kameeni. you adorable writer I ADORE SO MUCH..Eee, I be so khush. Thank you 🤗

This was such a beautiful three shot. from cabir to manik and the humor and soft element so beautiful and that end took the cake. aahh!

Originally posted by: apardh_ba

No one
has ever looked at me with that
worry, concern, care, love. As
tenderly as she held up my face, did
she spoke those words which made
me realize as to why am I so fiercely
possessive about her and would do
anything to keep her in my life.

Yes I cn feel d sm. Dat love, care, intensity and passion. God how did u manage to write smthng like this. Its magic. keep writing. Its always a treat to read ur writings.

Originally posted by: annboleyn

"Because, my dear Professor Nandu, in all this time, you have gracefully managed to capture my heart and keep it safely with you. So that other heart, that you are feeling, is mine and here I am left without any, trying to live somehow. You see, you've left me heartless."

This was so cute ADITI I was planning to read it in the evening but just couldn't resist it...our Manik as a helpless, heart"less" love struck ,hormonal fool is really adorable. These two have sizzling chemistry on paper as well. In my head a complete picture emerges. Very nice Aditi I liked my gift ever so much.

Luv

M

Originally posted by: aishu3003

Aditi u r d best😎

Be it mushy or angst ur write-ups r jus amazingg

Hats off🤗👍🏼

Now coming to d update

Aww such a cutee updateee❤️

"Because, my dear Professor Nandu, in all this time, you have gracefully managed to capture my heart and keep it safely with you. So that other heart, that you are feeling, is mine and here I am left without any, trying to live somehow. You see, you've left me heartless."

i soo lovedd these lines❤️

Really? Did I do that to you? I am sorry. You know, you do one thing. You... take my heart. Yes, you do that. I am not returning you yours because you are this complete idiot who loves breaking himself just to assure that people around you are happy. So, you take mine because I know, you will never hurt it and will always keep it safe. I trust you with my heart."

and this one too our sweet,cute,innocent and drunk nandu❤️

this reminds me of dat moment I'll shine for u

fantastic endingg👏

All d best for ur boards 👍🏼

come back wit a bang soon😊

Originally posted by: kriti094

Simply amazing
i totally loved all the 3 parts
u r an amazing writer