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Posted: 18 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Ananya_A

😆😆 hilarious fanfic priya.. it was really needed to lighten the forum's atmosphere.. instead of karan-ameesha's reincarnation.. why not describe abt their hell yatra 😛😆 they did enough for one janam.. 😡😡
all i can say is please continue 😳 ..

Thanks Anu....I just hope that this FF can cheer up all the Kaajjalians and remove their depression. Karan-Ameesha ko reincarnate karaana hi tha...kyonki kehte haina ke swarg aur narak dono hi earth pe hai. Tho abhi Karan is in hell...because he is not able to do any major shaitaniyan or take revenge on DK...abhi baby jo ban gaya haina aur uske saath ML bhi. Tho cradle main hi leta rehna padega jab tak main chaahoongi.😆

Tho reincarnated Karan aur Ameesha mere kabze main hai...unka jo karna hai..main kar loongi aur achchi tarah se hell ki yatra bhi karvaa loongi.😉😆 Abhi isn't it enough punishment for two villains to be at the mercy of grownups for 20 years and can't even do anything without their help?😆😛

Karan-Ameesha ko cradle se baahar aane main time lagega aur phir bada hona haina? Tab tak tho 20 years ho jaayenge na? So don't worry about that...KA ke milan main abhi time hai na? DK tho tab tak safe rahenge. Abhi Karan-Ameesha ki punarjnam ki shaitaaniyaan shuroo ho chuki hai. Tho aage aage dekhiye hota hai kya.😛

Love,

Priya😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: autumnleaf

Oh my gosh brahmi...I fell off the chair when I read the latter part of the 2nd Part.... 😆 hilarious...Shantabai ... 😆 mother to Karan-reborn... 😆 😆 😆 Great brahmi..mwaa..simply superb...
Loved your way of killing the duo....and why could Kaacon not do this... 😡 Let DK live God dammit...and have a son or daughter..spitting image of Dev or Kaajjal and then fight with a grown up pair of re-incarnated K-A.... and find their respective life partner....

Great 2nd part thanks for making me laugh in such gloom.... 😊

And the third part...ufff. ...lucky you to get DK there at Munnar for 3 months...Awww wish I could come too.....

Beautiful brahmi...and waiting for the phoolwati's drama now....Ahhh Adi there? 😕 But well now that the air is cleared...what the hell...Kaajjal could celebrate a belated Rakhi-day.... 😆

Continue soon...... 👏

Hailaa, last time Mala fell off the chair and this time it is you, Autumn?😆 Shantabai dotes on her shaitaan baby aur bechara Balluram tho poori tarah se phas gaye hai inn dono ke beech. Kaccon could not do this...because she will have to make a comedy serial to show reborn KA and I don't feel she is good at comedy.😆

Don't worry Autumn, DK ko apne saath laake sabhi Kaajjalians se introduce karvaaoongi...kyon theek haina?😳 Adi is needed for now...tho wapas leke aayi hoon. You will come to know why..in next episode.😳

Love,

Priya😛

Edited by ahem_brahmasmi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: dudleysam

hey priya...taking DK to kerala...not fair. 😃 😃 😃 ...pehle...london...yaar..hum kyaa karenge...but brilliant...and chandoo baba taking off the ring. 😆 ..what they say sum things start in the cradle...so next what cradle snatching by amee...from teh cradle..tilting her head and scheming how to snatch the cradle...or snatching the hand that rocked her cradle 😆

😆 sammy 😛

Sammy dear😉

Dev was in London na....soon after his marriage? Tho abhi he thought to take a trip to Munnar with Kaajjal.😉 Saath main mujh se bhi milenge...don't worry I will bring them to IF too.😛

Waise Chandoo is a shaitaan baby...abhi tak tho sirf ring liya hai...aage dekhenge aur kya kya karte hai.😆 Ameesha bechaari abhi bhi cradle main padi hui hai...abhi scheming karne ke liye koi chance nahi kyonki complete ML main hai.😆

Ameesha ka halla machaane ka tareeka kuch different haina? So we will look at that in next part.😉

Love,

Priya😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
😆 😆 😆

👏 wowow Priya, this is such a great FF. Karan/ameesha must be tired by their evil character and needed a break. it feels so good to see them helpless like kids and not being able to do any harm to anyone (theft is an exception though 😆 )and yesssss I love the thought to seeing Dev and Kaju alive and enjoying their honeymoon period in Munnar (Kerala). Hope to see these places with you. 😃

aik farmaayish kar sakti huun?

please in places ki pics bhi post kijiye aur kisi tarah un meiN dev/kaajal ko dikha dijiye. it will be good if you can make some new siggies. 😛
please continue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: qusumji

😆 😆 😆

👏 wowow Priya, this is such a great FF. Karan/ameesha must be tired by their evil character and needed a break. it feels so good to see them helpless like kids and not being able to do any harm to anyone (theft is an exception though 😆 )and yesssss I love the thought to seeing Dev and Kaju alive and enjoying their honeymoon period in Munnar (Kerala). Hope to see these places with you. 😃

aik farmaayish kar sakti huun?

please in places ki pics bhi post kijiye aur kisi tarah un meiN dev/kaajal ko dikha dijiye. it will be good if you can make some new siggies. 😛
please continue soon.

Qusumji😛

I am happy that you enjoyed reading it. Karan-Ameesha abhi babies hai...aur cradles main hai, ek doosre se door, in two villages...so that they don't join together and do any scheming against DK..aur is haalat main ek doosre se baat bhi nahi kar sakte.😆

I will surely keep DK alive in my FF and surely take my revenge on KA by making them remain babies and not letting them do much evil activities. Waise I myself am in thrill that DK are coming to Kerala for honeymoon. Its my pleasure to show these places to you and hope the ride will be informative for you too.😳

I will try to take some photos of DK in Kerala....hope they are not surrounded by too many fans, what say? 😉Will try to make some siggies like you suggested though I am not really good at it. Thanks for the suggestion dear..will surely try to fulfill it.😳

Love,

Priya😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#36

My apologies Priya for not being able to reply earlier. Busy schedule sometimes holds me back.

But what an update that was honey ... hahahhahahahahha, u never miss an opportunity to make us all laugh. though the times are sad in the show and hearts are crying, but your FF brought a smile on my lips .... thankyou soo much for cheering me up.

Great Part, well done honey 👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: thesaint148

My apologies Priya for not being able to reply earlier. Busy schedule sometimes holds me back.

But what an update that was honey ... hahahhahahahahha, u never miss an opportunity to make us all laugh. though the times are sad in the show and hearts are crying, but your FF brought a smile on my lips .... thankyou soo much for cheering me up.

Great Part, well done honey 👏

Hey Kashish,

I actually was undergoing some pain in my mind thinking about Apu-Sur soon leaving the show. But surely if I myself will remain depressed how can I cheer you up?😳

I would surely be happy if a smile is on your lips and I am happy that my FF was able to bring that back to you. Surely will try to cheer you up in future too.😳

Love,

Priya😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Priya Madam.......
Not only did it have some good doses of humor.......lady you changed the whole track with those two bhoot K & A coming back again........ 😆
It was entertaining to read this at a time when all around looks so glum....
Atta girl, really enjoyed it!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Iloveapu

Priya Madam.......
Not only did it have some good doses of humor.......lady you changed the whole track with those two bhoot K & A coming back again........ 😆
It was entertaining to read this at a time when all around looks so glum....
Atta girl, really enjoyed it!!

Nupur😛

I am happy that you enjoyed reading it and waise K & A are not roaming around as bhoot...because they had been arrested through reincarnation and put into cradles as babies far away from each other. So I would say that I have jailed them in two villages.😆

Hope to keep entertaining you like this in future too.😉

Love,

Priya😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wowwww Priya..dis is foe u 👏 👏 👏 tht was jus mind=blowin..n sry 4 replyin soo late..sumhow i missed ur post..n dint read it..buh now m finish..kia likha hai yaar.u said if der is ne necessary improvisations needed plzz let u noe.. wah r u talkin bout..tht was da best script eva..wid no Mistakes 😉 at all...kaccoon ko send kerdo..n tell dem thts how da serial shud look lyke 😃 omg it wa sooo sweet wen dev brought a necklace for kaju..awww..n he praised her beauty 😳 😳 soo cute...Btw they r cumin to ur place for da honeymoon..make sure we get al the updates 😆 😆 Continue soon i realli wana read wht happen nex 😃

Lotssa luv:hira 😉

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