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Posted: 18 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: hira_786


I noe priya..der was no scne bout da necklace..waise tumhari ff kuch kum thori hai..it was almost lyke everythin is happening on da screen..n m havin a gr8 tyme watchin it..chalo kacoon per to koi faraq nahi perta..per hum pe perta hai 😆 😆 or han bout da updtes..wo to tum pal pal ki khabar dogi..Dk ki honeymoon ki 😉 😆 can't wait to read

lotssa luv:hira 😉

Hira darling😉

I am happy that you loved watching the necklace scene through my FF. Waise updates ki khabar deti rahoongi DK honeymoon ki..bas aap padhthi jaaiye😛

Love,

Priya😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: thesaint148

absolutely Nups 😊 isnt ishe amazing 😊

Well done Priya. u rock girl 👏

Surely Kashish...I rock the cradle in which Chander and Phoolwanthi are lying.😆 Waise...I am really happy that you are liking my FF. Your encouragement is the secret of my FF.😆

Love,

Priya😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Aliza*

Aww..that was jus beautiful!! 😳 😳..hats off to u dii! 👏..U seriously made me feel much much better. While reading ur mindblowing FF, i was picturing it all happening. Brialliant job done hun..really amazing!! 😳..I really enjoyed reading it. I luv ur storyline..it's very entertaining. I'm wondering how i missed this.😕 I wasn't active much on IF cuz my school started a couple of days ago...i hardly get time to hit the Kaajjal section. But now i read it and am EAGERLY waiting to read more. I wona thnk you for keeping the DK romance alive. 😳. It makes us feel like they're still here...n makes us feel a lottt better. 😊....ahhh..how i wish some miracle happens and Kaccoon changes her mind..i know it's not very possible anymore but..i jus can't beleive all this crap is actually true! ...
Anyways, Kashish, autumn, Sammy and all the other FF writers of the Kaajjal section should welcome u to their club..Aik aur heera mil gaya hai..😳...Itna talent itni dair chhupa ke kyun rakha aap ne?? 😃...u r a fab writer hun! 😉..i really enjoyed reading it.

Waise, DK ko apne place pe honeymoon ke liya le jaana..Kerala mein, achha idea hai. I guess iss bahaane hum bhi Kerala ki sair kar lenge 😉...."kyun sahi kaha na".. 😉😃..lol..anyways di, continue ur fab work...im waiting ta read more!! 😊


Aliza❤️


Aliza dear😉

I know that you are really busy now-a-days because of the school and inspite of that..you took out time and read this FF...and I am really happy that you are giving me so much of encouragement. Actually your encouragement is what makes me go on. DK romance ko zinda rakhna tho mere liye bahut important hai...kyonki that is the heart of the whole story and the serial began as a lovestory of DK.😳

Hailaa, mujhe heera bulaa diya?😆 I am blushing beet red...after hearing such big compliments. Abhi bina plane ke hawa main ud rahi hoon.😉

DK surely will enjoy their trip to Kerala and its a beautiful land and surely along with DK...we all will together feel Kerala and hope I can be a good guide to DK as well as to all my Kaajjalians and hope we all will have a great time together with DK romancing in Kerala. Waise as soon as they land up here...I will surely bring them to you and introduce them to you too..😛😳

Love,

Priya😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Hasnain

oh, wow great fanfic, i really enjoyed reading ur fanfic, great work, continue soon.

Hey Hasnain,

Thanks a lot for going through my fanfic and I hope you will enjoy reading the coming episodes too.😳

Love,

Priya😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: forevercharmed

wow priya!! i love this new FF!!! 👏 well done!!!! it has romance in it--which is the best 😳 and its funny!!! 😆 keep it up!!! 👏

love,
Avanti

Hey Avanti,

I am happy that you loved this FF and will surely keep the romance and reincarnation track going on.😆

Love,

Priya😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: moonwind

hi priya,it was nice reading this all....really u did a g8 job,keep it up 👏 👏 👏 ....but kash yea saab such may hota tu or bhi maza aata... 😭 v all mis dk... mis ya 4ever....
anyhow thanks 4 such a g8 storyline of urzz,....tc

sumera.

Sumera,

Thanks a lot aur waise...sach main hi tho ye sab ho raha hai...kyonki if you are able to imagine all this happening..then it will appear as if it is happening. Just imagine Apu and Sur in these scenes...then you will surely feel the presence of DK.

Love,

Priya😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: ploye

OMG priya that was just great I loved it!!!!!!! 😉 😉 the DK scene was sooo good. I actually got emotional thinking of yesterday's epi! I am missing DK badly already!!!!!! 😭 😭
please do continue ur FF ssooooooonnnnn it's gonna cheer us up with the romance and humour!! 😆 😆 ur great!

😉 koko 😉

Koko😉

I am happy that you loved the DK scene and surely in our hearts..DK continues to remain alive. DK ko miss mat karo kyonki maine unhe marne nahi diya and Karan-Ameesha ko reincarnation track main abhi phasa diya hai. Kaccoon Sethi bhi inn dono ko nikaal nahi paayenge iss reincarnation track se.😉

Love,

Priya😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: jyoti06

😆 😆 😆 Haila Priya tumhari yeh Karan-Ameesha reincarnation track ne toh dhamaal macha diya hai 😆 😆 😆 too good 👏 👏 👏 just loved all those love-dovey dialogues between DK 😳 😳 and I m sure this karan-ameesha will grow into comedians this time and we will hv some good laugh 😉 😆 😛 ..between Priya u continue with some more tabela stuffs between DK till those karan-ameesha kids grow up 😆 😆 😛

Jyo darling😉

Karan-Ameesha abhi comedians hai...magar badaa hoke kya banega..ye sirf raam jaane.😆 Waise romance ko tho zinda rakhenge hi aur will try to bring in some tabelas too. Aajkal sabhi tabelas booked hai...magar zaroor koshish karoongi to hire one tabela for DK scene.😳

Love,

Priya😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: addsb

😆 Oh wow Karan as Chander and Ameesha as Phoolwanti.. Great work Priya 👏 .. and yeah as jyoti said..plz do continue with some tabela stuff as well 😳

Yes surely, I will try to continue with some tabela scenes as suggested.😳

Love,

Priya😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Darlings, I am back with my next part of the Reincarnation FF. I have got immense encouragement from you all and that is what is making me go on and on.....Hope you will continue to read my FF so here comes my next part. Usse pehle..ek chota sa recap😛

Recap: Karan-Ameesha's attempts to kill Dev and Kaajjal at the Ardhanareeshwar are foiled by Veer and Nandini who save the lives of DK from Karan and his goondas. In the turn of
events, Karan and Ameesha are shot to death. Karan before dying vows to be reborn along with Ameesha to take revenge on DK. Karan is reborn as Chander, the son of Balluram and
Shantabai in Bhadrapur and Ameesha is born as Phoolwanthi, the daughter of Sunderlal and Lajwanthi in Sitapur Village. A court case goes on, following which Nandini is saved by the statements of witnesses and circumstantial evidences. On the occasion of the acquittal of Nandini Bhabhi, there is a small party at Singh Mansion and before the party Dev gifts Kaajjal with a diamond necklace and Nandini Bhabhi gifts DK with tickets for a honeymoon trip to Munnar in Kerala. Balluram meanwhile loses his ring and finally Shantabai finds it in the hands of Chander. Our nanhe munhe reborn Karan has already started his shaitaaniyan in his punarjanam as Chander and now its Ameesha's turn.😆

Ab padhiye aage.

Scene 1: Dev's bedroom

Panna Chachi comes into the bedroom to find Dev and Kaajjal romancing with each other and she suddenly blushes and gives a naughty smile. DK are on the bed still romancing with each other.Seeing Panna Chachi Kaajjal gets up from the bed and Dev also suddenly blushes..

Panna Chachi(with a matter of fact attitude): Kaajjal, taiyaar hoke jaldi se neeche aa jaao. Abhi party ke liye kuch aur arrangements karne hai. Tho tumhaari thodi si madadh chaahiye aur Dev..tum ab bhi inn kapdon main? Jaldi se
party ke liye maine jo suit specially mangvaaye hai..usse pehenke aao...aur haan apne baal bhi katvaa lena. Iss tarah se kitne dinon se ghoom rahe ho. Kaajjal mere saath abhi aao.😳

Kaajjal: Ji, chachi main aa rahi hoon.

Dev(gently passing his fingers through his hair like an embarassed chota bachcha): Ji chachi, baal katvaa loonga.😛

Panna chachi(with a sweet smile): Aur Kaajjal, ye necklace tumpe bahut achcha lag raha hai. Tum bahut sundar lag rahi ho ismein. Achcha tho tum mere saath aa jaao.😳

Panna Chachi turns around and leaves the room. Kaajjal is about to follow her out of the room, when Dev catches hold of her hand from behind.

Kaajjal: Dev, Chachi ne mujhe bulaaya hai...aur mujhe abhi jaana hai. Mera haath chodo na..😳

Dev(starts singing naughtily):

Abhi na jaao chodkar...ke dil abhi bharaa nahi...

abhi na jaao chod kar...ke dil abhi bharaa nahi..

abhi abhi tho aayi ho, bahaar banke chaayi ho,

hawaa zaraa mehak tho le, nazar zaraa behak tho le,

ye shaam dhal tho le zara, ye dil sambhal tho le zara,

main thodi der jee tho loon, nashe ke ghoont pi tho loon,

abhi tho kuch kahaa nahi, abhi tho kuch sunaa nahin

abhi na jaao chod kar...ke dil abhi bharaa nahi...

Kaajjal turns around and looks with eyes full of love at him and comes really close to him. Dev too feels her closeness and their breaths are almost touching and Kaajjal closes her eyes and Dev comes closer to her and is about to kiss her.
Kaajjal suddenly opens her eyes with a naughty smile and a naughty twinkle in eyes her and touches his nose playfully and runs towards the door and turns back at the entrance and looks at Dev naughtily with a smile.

Kaajjal(sings back naughtily):

sitaare jhimilaa uthe, sitaare jhilmilaa uthe,

charaag jagmagaa uthe,bas ab na mujhko tokna..

na badhaake raah rokna, agar main ruk gayi abhi...tho jaa na paaoongi kabhi,

yahi kahoge tum sadaa... ke dil abhi nahi bharaa,

jo khatm ho kisi jagah ye aisa silsilaa nahi😉

Dev looks at her with a fake gussa and Kaajjal smiling naughtily and gives him a wink and leaves the room.

Dev: Kaajjal, abhi nahi tho koi baat nahi, bahut jald kahi pe tho pakad hi loonga(and smiles naughtily).


Scene 2: Sitapur Village

Lajwanthi is bathing Phoolwanthi and poor baby...she doesn't like to take bath and her mother is pouring water all over her and she is not liking it at all.😭
So she is crying out so loud that even the neighbours are looking at wonder after hearing the noise. She is roaring and is stamping her feet on the ground and trying to free herself from the hands of Lajwanthi. But Lajwanthi won't let go and she is putting soap all over Phoolwanthi.😆

Lajwanthi: Phoolo, zara chup ho jaa, ri...tu aise na chillaa...abhi poore mohallewaale aa jaayenge...tho zara chup baith...

Phoolo is not stopping her loud crying(aakhir pichle janam main Ameesha jo thi...kisi ne pichle janam main tho zip nahi dalaa tha uske muh par...tho iss janam main kaun woh kar paayenge?)

Sunderlal has returned from his shop after business and he hears the loud crying sound of Phoolwanthi and is getting irritated. He closes his ears shut with both his hands..but the sound is so sharp that...it is penetrating his hand and hitting on his ear drum.

Sunderlal(irritated): Lajoooo....ari lajooo, idhar aa😡

Lajwanthi: Ji aati hoon ji...phoolo tu yahan leti reh...main abhi aati hoon.

Lajwanthi dries up Phoolo with a towel and makes her lie down on a cloth and runs to check out why her husband has called her.

Sunderlal: Lajo.. ye kya halla ho raha hai? Ye Phoolo itni zor se kyon chilllaa rahi hai?😡

Lajwanthi: Woh Phoolo ko nahaana bilkul achcha nahi lagta aur main usse nehlaa rahi thi. Tho woh bahut zor se ro rahi thi.😕

Sunderlal: Achcha Lajo...tu jaake usko idhar laa, main uske liye naya kapda laaya hoon. Usse pehnaake dekhenge ki uspar jachtha hai ke nahi...😳

Lajwanthi runs back to where Phoolo has been laid down...but she cannot find her. Lajo looks around but she is nowhere to be found. Lajo runs back to the house and runs back to her husband all worried and tensed up😕

Lajwanthi: Aji suniye tho...Phoolo kahi dikhaayi nahi pad rahi hai...abhi wahan pe letaake aayi thi..aur abhi dikhaayi nahi pad rahi hai.

Sunderlal: Tu theek se dekh wahan pe kahi hogi.

Lajwanthi: Wahan sabhi jagah dekh liye hai...kahi bhi dikhaayi nahi pad rahi hai..😕

Sunderlal runs into the room and from the room runs into the backyard and he is not able to see Phoolwanthi anywhere.

Sunderlal: Phoolooooooo, beti Phoolooooo

Lajwanthi starts crying. 😭

Sunderlal: Tu ro mat..main abhi jaake dekh ke aata hoon.

Sunderlal runs into the tabela and searches amongst cows and buffaloes to find if Phoolo is somewhere there. Finally Sunderlal turns around and has a shocked expression on his face.

Scene 3: Back to Singh Mansion

The party has begun and many important guests are arriving. Kaajjal clad in her red saree and with her diamond necklace and matching red colour earrings is looking really stunning. She
is welcoming all the guests at the entrance. The guests include staff of Radiocity like receptionist Jenny, Nikki and Paris etc and also from Mussourie Satya along with Bua and Hottie Shortie have already arrived there and enjoying the party. 😳

Kaajjal is welcoming the guests but her eyes are roaming all the time up the stairs waiting for her Dev to appear. Nandini Bhabhi
also arrives there and Veer too comes there and joins in entertaining the guests at the party. All eyes turns towards the top of the stairs as Dev appears on the top of the stairs in his black suit and is dressed in style and with cut hair and shaven face and looking smashing. He looks like the king of the house and with the same attitude comes down the stairs and Kaajjal's eyes are full of love and pride at seeing her prince charming coming down the stairs. As soon as Dev reaches downstairs, Bua and Satya goes towards him.😳


Bua: Dev beta, tujhe mile kitne din hue hai. Main teri aur Kaajjal ki shaadi pe bhi nahi aa paayi thi..kyonki meri behan bahut bimaar thi...(Bua says in an apologetic voice)😕

Dev(with love): Bua, aap kyon aise keh rahi ho...kya aapko mere chehre se aisa laga ki mujhe aapse koi shikaayat hai? Aap ne tho mere liye itna kuch kiya hai..tho aap please mujhse maafi mat maangiye..bas aap humhaare saath rahiye. Abhi aayi ho..tho kuch dinon ke baad hi aapko jaane doonga.😳

Satya: Dev beta, Pauwa kahi dikhaayi nahi pad raha hai. Woh wapas Rajgani chala gaya hai kya?

Dev: Ji nahi, uski padhaayi ke liye maine Mumbai main ek achchi si school main admission karvaa di hai..aur woh ab yahi rahega.

Kaajjal comes back and joins them and starts chatting with them and all are smiling and talking to each other and enjoying the moments. Suddenly, Kaajjal turns and looks towards the door and all eyes follow. Adi comes at the door and Dev's smile suddenly goes off his face.

Scene 4: Back to Sitapur Village

The shocked Sunderlal sees Phoolwanthi playing with the gobar in the tabela and she is in the middle of two cows and is with her hands hitting the gobar and she is completely covered with gobar and is looking all messy. Lajwanthi comes running into the tabela after her husband and she too looks with shock at the scene in front of her. Phoolwanthi is having fun and is totally looking messed up in gobar..her whole body covered with gobar and dirt. 🤢

Lajwanthi runs forward and lifts Phoolwanthi up and looks with an angry face at Sunderlal

Lajwanthi: Jaisa baap, waisi beti. Dekho tho kitni gandi ho gayi hai. Abhi isko phir se nehlaana padega.🤢

Sunderlal starts laughing seeing the expressions on Lajwanthi's face.😆

Sunderlal: Lajo, aakhir beti kiski hai? Teri kuch tho gunn ismein hogi na? Abhi tu hi kehti thi na, ke bachpan main tune bhi aisa kuch kiya tha...tho Phoolo bhi kuch kam hogi kya?😉

Lajwanthi makes a face at Sunderlal in anger and takes Phoolwanthi back to bathe her once again (Lots of work for Lajwanthi, hai ke nahi?)😆


Scene 5: Singh Mansion

Adi comes into the house and Kaajjal runs forward to greet him and Dev too follows her...

Dev(extending his hand): Aao Adi, mujhe darr tha ke kahi tum nahi aaoge. Jo kuch bhi hua tha...uske baad tum tho mujhse milna hi chod doge..aisa maine socha tha

Adi: Dev, aisa kuch bhi nahi hai...kuch galti meri bhi thi, mujhe ye bhi sochna chahiye tha ki aap dono nayi shaadi shuda hai...aur maine anjaane main aapke beech main aakar...😕

Kaajjal: Adi please woh sab kuch bhool jaao...main aur Dev bhi ye sab kuch ab bhool chuki hoon.😳

Adi: Kaajjal, main yahan pe aake aap logon se ye bhi kehna chahta tha ke main London jaa raha hoon. Wahan pe mere mom ka business main sabhaalnewaala hoon.

Dev: Adi, kahi ye sab kuch meri wajah se tho nahi haina?

Adi: Bilkul nahi Dev..main pehle bhi jaana chahta tha..magar Shivansh waali case ki wajah se main abroad nahi jaa saka tha. Magar abhi permission mil gayi hai court ki taraf se..tho abhi main jald se jald wahan jaake business sambhaalna chahta hoon. Mom bhi yahi chahti hai...😳

Kaajjal: Tho Adi, tum phir kabhi wapas nahi aaoge..India?

Adi: Nahi, aisi koi baat nahi...main wapas aaoonga..jab wahan ka business kuch establish ho jaayenge uske baad. Phir main woh business Sonia ko sop ke wapas aaoonga.😳

Dev: Ye tho bahut khushi ki baat hai..aur Aditya tumhe meri koi bhi madadh chahiye tho zaroor kehna.

Adi: Madhadh mujhe chahiye Dev...aur main woh tumse aur Kaajjal se kehna chahta tha..mere mann main ek baat hai..jo main tum dono ko bataana chahta tha

Dev and Kaajjal looks with perplexed faces at each other and back at Adi. The screen freezes on the questioning faces of Dev and Kaajjal.😛


Preview: Next episode main...aap Adi ki mann ki baat jaan paayenge. So just wait till the next episode comes up and along with that more Bhadrapur and Sitapur news.

Love,

Priya😛



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