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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ok friends, so I am back with my next part of the Reincarnation story. Hope it will help you relieve the pain of DK death and help you feel better.
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Recap: At the Ardhanareeshwar temple, Nandini and Veer save DK from Karan and his goondas who come with the intention of making Dev sign the property papers. In the encounter that followed Ameesha and Karan are shot. Karan dies vowing to take rebirth and return with Ameesha to take revenge on DK. Dev fills Kaajjal's maang with sindoor and they both start their life afresh without any villains in life. Nandini takes the injured Veer to hospital. After a gap of two days, Karan is reborn as Chander, the son of Balluram and Shantabai in Bhadrapur and Ameesha is born as Phoolwanthi, the daughter of Sunderlal and Lajwanthi.

Ab padhiye aage. 😛

Time is slowly passing by and now its 6 months since the incident of Karan and Ameesha's death. Dev and Kaajjal had to deal with all the legal formalities. Veer and Nandini stood by them and gave them support. It was also proven in court by the circumstantial evidences and statements of the witnesses including Veer and the policemen that Nandini Bhabhi's killing Karan was purely to save DK from getting killed. The court therefore found Nandini innocent and let her free. So now there is a small celebration at the house on the occasion of Nandini Bhabhi getting released after months of court case. 😳

Scene 1: Singh Mansion

Preparations are going on for the small party..that Panna Chachi arranged for. Panna Chachi is ordering the servants on making arrangements for decorating the house. Kaajjal is in her room...getting ready for the party. She is clad in a deep red saree and is in front of the mirror and selecting the ornaments to be worn. She finally choses a simple pearl necklace. Dev comes into the room and gazes at her with love-filled eyes seeing her preparing to wear the pearl necklace.

Dev comes from behind and stands right behind her and gazing at her beautiful face.

Kaajjal: Dev, kaisa hai ye necklace? Kya main isse party ke liye pehnoon?

Dev bends low and rests his chin on her shoulder..his face close to hers..his cheeks touching hers and continues to look at her face in the mirror. Kaajjal to looks at Dev in the mirror.

Dev: Iss khoobsoorati ko nikhaarne ke liye..ye motiyon ki maala ki bhi koi zaroorat nahi hai. Magar iss husn ke saamne motiyon ki maala pheeki pad jaati hai.

Kaajjal blushes beet red..hearing Dev's compliment and smiles shyly. Dev suddenly places a diamond necklace on her neck. Kaajjal is shocked and at the same time enthralled by the gift.

Kaajjal: Dev..ye tho bahut keemti lagti hai. Mere liye itni keemti haar kharidne ki kya zaroorat thi?

Dev: Kaajjal, tumse keemti mere liye kuch bhi nahi hai. Iss haar ka mol tho tumhaare saamne kuch bhi nahi hai. Tum ne iss haar ko apne aap se lagaa ke iski keemat badhaa di hai. 😛

Kaajjal gets more shy...as Dev slowly removes the hair from behind her and gently hooks the necklace.

Dev slowly makes Kaajjal stand up and turns her towards him...enjoying the beauty of his bride. 😳

Dev: Jaanti ho, Kaajjal..ye haar maine tumhaare liye khaas banvaaya hai. London se aate hi..main tumhe kuch dena chahta tha...apni shaadi ke baad main tumhe kuch nahi de paaya tha.

Kaajjal: Dev, tumhe mujhe kuch dene ki kya zaroorat hai? Main khud jaanti hoon na..ke tumhaare dil main mere liye kitna pyaar hai?

Dev: Kaajjal, jo pyaar main mehsoos karta hoon..usse izhaar karna bhi zaroori hai. Jab pyaar ka izhaar hota hai..tho pyaar ki khoobsurati aur bhi badh jaati hai

Kaajjal(naughtily): Achcha, tho Dev sir...main aapko kab se pyaar karti hoon. Maine tho kabhi apne pyaar ka izhaar kisi gifts se nahi kiya hai. Tho phir aap kyon karenge?😉

Dev: Kaajjal, jab bhi tum Radio City main mere office main aati thi..tab main tumhaari aankhon main hi mere liye pyaar dekhta tha. Main pehle se hi jaanta tha..ke tum mujhse pyaar karti ho. Tumhaari aankhein tumhaare pyaar ka izhaar karti hai.

Kaajjal looks at Dev and right now her eyes are totally mesmerized by his loving and intense eyes. Her eyes seems to have become prisoners to his eyes and she is unable to take her eyes off his. Dev and Kaajjal continue to keep looking at each other..lost in each other...when Nandini Bhabhi comes there.

She seems Dev and Kaajjal lost in each other and once again feels pain..as she never got so much of love from Karan when he was alive. Dev suddenly notices that Nandini Bhabhi came into the room and he gets all aware of the surroundings. 😆

Nandini Bhabhi(with a naughty smile): Dev...main ye poochne ke liye aayi thi..ke tumne Kaajjal woh gift diye ke nahi...jo maine tum dono ke liye arrange kiya hai? 😳

Kaajjal(perplexed): Kaunsa gift, bhabhi? 😕

Dev: Oh Bhabhi..woh tho main Kaajjal ko dena hi bhool gaya.

Dev takes out two tickets from his pocket and hands over it to Kaajjal. Kaajjal's eyes expand with thrill and excitement and a smile passes over her face.

Nandini Bhabhi: Kaajjal, maine khaas tumhaare liye tickets arrange karvaayi hai..for a beautiful stay in Munnar in Kerala. 😉 (Hailaa, DK would soon be coming to my place) 😆

Kaajjal: Bhabhi...Munnar..that sounds great.

Dev: Kaajjal, Nandini bhabhi ye gift humhein honeymoon trip ke liye de rahi hai..three months stay in Kerala. Tho hum woh jagah bhi dekh lenge. 😛(Aap log bhi mere saath dekhiye) 😉

Nandini Bhabhi goes from there and Kaajjal is all excited and is full of thrill and can't even breathe properly out of excitement on going with Dev. 😛

Dev: Tho Kaajjal Madamji 😉 Abhi aapko bahut saari taiyaari karni hai ji. Hum dono milkar udke jaanewaale haiji. Wahan pe main rahoonga aapka..humsafar..humdum aur saathi. Tho enjoy with Raju Rangeela ji. 😛

Kaajjal laughs and starts to hit him and he runs and Kaajjal chases him and she hits him with the pillow lying on the bed and Dev catches hold of the pillow and falls down on the bed and pulls her into a hug. Both of them are giggling and laughing like newly wed couples. Kaajjal suddenly feels all aware of the surroundings and she slowly tries to get off. But Dev pulls her back into his arms...and says 'Kaajjal...I love you'. 😳

Scene 2: Bhadrapur

While our love-birds DK are busy romancing...our nanha munna Karan is still lying in the cradle. (Poor fellow is bored because of lying in the cradle for so long and he just wants to do something really active. So he is continuing to stamp on the cradle with his legs). 😆

Shantabai: Chandu betaa, aa main tujhe dhoodh pilaati hoon. Mera chunnu munnu..abhi dhoodh peene ka time ho gaya hai. 😛

Shantabai starts feeding Chander from a feeding bottle and he continues to suck up the milk from the bottle looking with confused eyes at his mother.(Poor fellow is not liking the taste of it and also this drinking from the bottle stuff...magar kya karen Shreyas ke liye feeding bottle se dhoodh bhi peena padega) 😆

Balluram: Shantaa, main jaake dekhke aata hoon ki kheton main kaam kaise chal raha hai.

Chander's father Balluram is a zamindaar and he is having much landed property (Abhi ardhanareeshwar ne socha ke DK ke jaan ko bachaane ke liye Chander ko ek rich family main paida kar diya jaaye..tho behtar hoga) 😆

Balluram is about to get outside..when he happened to look at his hand and the ring on his little finger is missing. The ring is quite lucky for him and that is what the village astrologer has said. So he enters the house once again.

Balluram(calls out): Shantaa, idhar aao

Shantaa(replies): Aati hooooooon.

Shanta murmurs something and places the baby back in the cradle and reaches the central hall of the house..where Balluram is looking everywhere for the ring. Now they can't find it anywhere and the servants also join in searching for the ring.

The search everywhere but couldn't find it anywhere. They finally start searching their bedroom and Chander is disturbed by the sound of cupboard opening and the shuffling of things. So Chander starts crying out loudly.

Balluram: Shantaa, zara isse chup karaao

Shanta runs to the cradle and lifts the baby and something falls down from the baby's hand and its the ring which was missing. (Abhi se hi shuroo kar diya hai...abhi anjaane se chori kar diya...bade ho jaane do...apni shaitaniyan khud hi saamne aa jaayega)😆

Balluram: Hey ram, ye kab Chandu ke haath main aa gaya? Isne mere ungli se ye aangootti nikaal di..aur mujhe pata hi nahi chala.

Shanta(laughing): Dekha na..mera raja kitna hoshiyaar hai...usne aapko bhi chakma de diya. Aap se hi isne angootti churaa liya😆

Poor Balluram is looking at a perplexed and idiotic face at Shanta while she continues laughing at what had happened. 😆

The episode ends on the innocent face of Chander who is looking so innocent...as if he didn't even know that the ring was with him. 😆


Preview: Party is going on in Dev's house and Adi enters the house..and Dev turn to look at him. Phoolwanthi is causing havoc in the house..why? We will see in the next episode. 😆
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Hope you liked this episode and eagerly awaiting for comments and suggestions from my dear Kaajjalians here. Do reply and make necessary improvisations in the track...because I don't want to be like Kaccoon. 😆

Love,
Priya 😳







Edited by ahem_brahmasmi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
That was marvellous! I luuuved the way you explained Karruu's shaitaani!!!! 😆 Balluram gets fooled!!!!!! 😆

Zareen.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: gambi

That was marvellous! I luuuved the way you explained Karruu's shaitaani!!!! 😆 Balluram gets fooled!!!!!! 😆

Zareen.

Zareen dear,

Abhi Karan ek baby ban jaaye tho shaitaani tho karenge hi na? Waise earlier he was good at scheming...abhi chori karne lage hai. Aage aage dekhiye hota hai kya😆

Balluram is quite an innocent fellow and poor man got such a kid who is going to show more of shaitaaniyaan. Aage bhi dekhenge Karan ki shaitaaniyaan.😉 Just wait and watch😛

Love,

Priya😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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VERY WELL DONE 👏 👏 ........ dearest priya 😊 😊

plz do contd..... 😳 cuz this is the only way to keep our DK,,,,,,,alive forever 😳 😳 APU 😳 SUR 😳

kitty 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Oh my Priya Darling 😆 ,

Very well written 👏 👏 👏 !!!!!!! I loved it 😳 !!! And thank u for mentioning about RadioCity 😳 !!! ahhh...those lovely office moments 😳 😳 ...

And I loved the way u descibed abotu Karan's shaitaani too 😆 !!! Hey karan...chup chap apna dhoodh pi 😡 !!! Nahi toh 😡 😆 😆 ...!!!

Continue soon priya...i really liked it 😳 ...this is the only way we can keep DK alive in our hearts 😳 !!!

~Mona 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆😆 hilarious fanfic priya.. it was really needed to lighten the forum's atmosphere.. instead of karan-ameesha's reincarnation.. why not describe abt their hell yatra 😛😆 they did enough for one janam.. 😡😡
all i can say is please continue 😳 ..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Oh my gosh brahmi...I fell off the chair when I read the latter part of the 2nd Part.... 😆 hilarious...Shantabai ... 😆 mother to Karan-reborn... 😆 😆 😆 Great brahmi..mwaa..simply superb...
Loved your way of killing the duo....and why could Kaacon not do this... 😡 Let DK live God dammit...and have a son or daughter..spitting image of Dev or Kaajjal and then fight with a grown up pair of re-incarnated K-A.... and find their respective life partner....

Great 2nd part thanks for making me laugh in such gloom.... 😊

And the third part...ufff. ...lucky you to get DK there at Munnar for 3 months...Awww wish I could come too.....

Beautiful brahmi...and waiting for the phoolwati's drama now....Ahhh Adi there? 😕 But well now that the air is cleared...what the hell...Kaajjal could celebrate a belated Rakhi-day.... 😆

Continue soon...... 👏
Edited by autumnleaf - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey priya...taking DK to kerala...not fair. 😃 😃 😃 ...pehle...london...yaar..hum kyaa karenge...but brilliant...and chandoo baba taking off the ring. 😆 ..what they say sum things start in the cradle...so next what cradle snatching by amee...from teh cradle..tilting her head and scheming how to snatch the cradle...or snatching the hand that rocked her cradle 😆

😆 sammy 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: nasartaurus

VERY WELL DONE 👏 👏 ........ dearest priya 😊 😊

plz do contd..... 😳 cuz this is the only way to keep our DK,,,,,,,alive forever 😳 😳 APU 😳 SUR 😳

kitty 😛

Hey Kitty😛

Will surely keep DK alive through this FF...because I won't let DK be killed by any Kaccoon or Karan.😆 For all my Kaajjalians here...I will continue to take revenge to KA by keeping them as babies and not being able to be together to do evil scheming.😆

Love,

Priya😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: mona18

Oh my Priya Darling 😆 ,

Very well written 👏 👏 👏 !!!!!!! I loved it 😳 !!! And thank u for mentioning about RadioCity 😳 !!! ahhh...those lovely office moments 😳 😳 ...

And I loved the way u descibed abotu Karan's shaitaani too 😆 !!! Hey karan...chup chap apna dhoodh pi 😡 !!! Nahi toh 😡 😆 😆 ...!!!

Continue soon priya...i really liked it 😳 ...this is the only way we can keep DK alive in our hearts 😳 !!!

~Mona 😛

Mona darling😛

I still cannot take off memories of DK in radio city and their office romancing from my mind. They remain fresh in my mind and will always remain as the sweetest memories of DK's love story.😳

Waise Karan chup chaap dhoodh peekar hi saari shaitaaniyaan karte hai. Dikhne main tho bada bhola bhaala hai..magar karte sab shaitaniyaan hai..hai ki nahi? 😆

Waise Mona darling...I loved the way you said 😆 "chup chap apna dhoodh pi 😡 !!! Nahi toh 😡 😆 😆 ...!!!" Now shall I send you to Bhadrapur in the next episode..so that you can teach Karan some manners?😉

We all will surely keep DK alive in our minds and no Kaccoon can come and kill Apu-Sur as DK from our minds.😳

Love,

Priya😳

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