KA: Reincarnation track main phasi-5: p16

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Kaajjalians,

There had been many requests to write a new FF and some of the members asked me to continue this track as an FF. So I am continuing my story of the reincarnation track of Karan and Ameesha as Chander and Phoolwanthi.

Inorder to save DK...maine KA ko maarke reincarnation track main phasaa diya...abhi aage dekhenge ki woh iss track se baahar nikalte hai..ya phir Shreya serials ke tarah ek track se doosre track main phaste hi jaayenge.(yaa phir inke reincarnation track likhte likhte main khud ML main phas jaaoongi)😆

I hope that this new reincarnation track will be able to atleast make you feel that DK wont be killed...even if Shreyas would kill them off in their serial.😭

This is my attempt of doing a minor reincarnation FF. Hope you will enjoy reading it and I will try as much as possible to continue it as a serial and not to axe it off like Sony may in future axe off the serial. Magar dekhte hai ki how many parts I can make of this new FF.😆

The first part of this FF...is actually in another post...which I wrote as the death climax...and those who haven't read it can go to that page..by clicking on this link:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kaajjal-sabbki-aankhon-mein-basi/721016/death-climax

Now I am continuing with the reincarnation part...

So here is a brief Recap of what happened in the previous episode. 😛

Recap: Dev and Kaajjal are in the ardhanareeshwar mandir and are praying for each other's long life, while Karan does a brief talk with Ameesha over the phone of making DK sign the property papers.😕

DK take pheras of the mandir and Karan lands up there with goondas...there is a brief arguement between Karan and Dev and Karan threatens to shoot Kaajjal to force Dev to sign the property papers while Ameesha too reaches there. Before Karan could shoot Kaajjal, Veer saves her and Ameesha gets shot by one of the goondas following a fight between Veer and Ameesha for Karan's revolver.😆

Veer too gets shot in his hand and Karan tries to shoot Kaajjal again..but Nandini Bhabhi who was hidden behind a tree shoots Karan and saves Kaajjal. Nandini Bhabhi tells DK about KA's scheme to snatch the property papers. Nandini Bhabhi takes the hurt Veer to hospital while DK goes to mandir to thank god for saving them. Karan nearing his death vows to reincarnate again along with Ameesha.. to take revenge on DK(if ML track doesn't create problems) and dies.😛

Ab padhiye aage....😆

Scene 1: DK still in the Ardhanareeshwar temple

Dev and Kaajjal are together in the temple once again and praying to god.

Dev: Hei Eashwar...aaj aapne mere Kaajjal ko phir se wapas mujhe lautakar aap par mere vishwas ko aur bhi badhaa diya hai. Main Kaajjal ko hamesha sambhaalke rakhoonga aur phirse uski aankhon main ek aansoon bhi aane nahi doonga.😳

Kaajjal: Aaj mujhe ehsaas hua hai ke main apne Dev se kitna pyaar karti hoon. Ab tho uske bina ek pal ke liye bhi jeena mujhe manzoor nahi hai. Agar aaj meri jaan bhi jaati tho bhi mujhe khushi hoti ki maine apne Dev ke liye khud ko qurbaan kar di. Magar aaj mujhe uss sadhu ke baaton par vishwas aa gaya hai aur ab mujhe yakeen hai ki Dev ki zindagi main ab aur koi sankat nahi hoga.😳

Kaajjal opens her eyes suddenly as Dev touches her on her shoulder and that feeling of his touch has once again brought back her trust in love and strengthened her mind more. Dev takes the dabba of sindoor that is kept in front of god and takes a pinch of sindoor and fills her maang. Kaajjal blushes at the feeling of the touch of his fingers on her maang and the thought of the sindoor on her forehead and it being once again filled by her Dev brought an immense joy into her mind and she gently closed her eyes in the bliss of the moment.😳

Dev: Kaajjal, chalo hum phir se apni nayi zindagi ek saath shuroo karte hai. Aage se koi sankat humhaari zindagi main nahi aayega aur koi bhi humhaare beech nahi aayega.😳

Kaajjal(looking with love filled eyes): Dev, ab kabhi main tumhe khud se door nahi rakhoongi. Pichle kuch dinon main mere door rehne se...jo humhaare beech main doori hui thi..usse hum mitaa denge. Phirse main tumhaare mann main shaq hone nahi doongi. Dev main hamesha tumhaari thi..tumhaari hoon aur tumhaari hi rahoongi.😳

Dev gives his cute dimpled smile and gently holds her hand

Dev: Kaajjal, aaj bhi main khud ko tumse bahut chota mahsoos karta hoon..jab bhi main woh saari baatein sochta hoon. Kis tarah se main Shivansh ki baaton main aakar tumpe shaq karne laga tha.

Kaajjal: Dev tum un baaton ko bhool jaao.😳

Dev: Nahi, Kaajjal..main kabhi nahi bhoolna chaahonga ki maine tumpe bewajah shaq kiya tha..kyonki main apne galti se seekhkar aage badhna chahta hoon. Kaajjal... ab main tumpe khud se zyaada vishwas karta hoon aur ab kabhi bhi koi bhi mere mann main shaq ka beej nahi bo sakega...aur main aisa hone nahi doonga. Main aaj woh pehlewaala Dev nahi hoon...main khud ko badal raha hoon...taaki main ek achche pati ke saath saath...tumhaara ek achcha dost bhi ban sakoon.

Kaajjal is overwhelmed by the words and tears slowly fill her eyes. Dev gently wipes off the tears...

Dev: Kaajjal, tum ro rahi ho?

Kaajjal: Dev, ye tho khushi ke aansoon hai..ki mujhe parameshwar jaisa pati mila hai...main sach main bahut hi khush kismat hoon.😳

Kaajjal gently bends to touch Dev's feet. Dev immediately catches her shoulder and pulls her into a passionate tight hug as love fills both hearts and they unite forgetting the world around and melt in each other.😳

Scene 2: Veer and Nandini are in the car

Nandini bhabhi is in the verge of tears thinking about all that happened and Veer has called up Panna Chachi and told her what has happened. Panna Chachi assured that she will do whatever is necessary to remove legal hassles.

Veer: Please Nandini bhabhi...aap mat roiye. Main jaanta hoon aapke dil par kya beet rahi hai..magar humhe abhi rone se kuch nahi haasil hoga

Nandini: Main apne kismat pe ro rahi hoon, Veer. Ab main khud ko kanoon ke hawaale karke...koi sazaa lena chahti hoon. Main ab marr jaana chahti hoon..kyonki maine ek aise insaan se shaadi kiya...jisne mere saath saath kayi zindagi barbaad ki hai.

Veer: Please aap ab inn sabke baare main mat sochiye. Aapki ismein koi galti nahi hai....galti tho mera tha ki maine hamesha Karan aur Ameesha par itna vishwas kiya hai.

Veer clutches his hand in anger and pain and his hand starts bleeding and Nandini quickly takes a towel and covers Veer's wound with it. Veer and Nandini reach the hospital and Veer gets admitted for treatment.😛 .

Two days later(Two days Karan-Ameesha ki aatmaayen were in an evil scheming as to what to do when they are reborn to harm DK and snatch property papers)😆

Miles away....two new babies are born.😛

Scene 3: Bhadrapur😛

Karan's is reborn in Bhadrapur. His this birth parents are two villagers: Balluram and shantabai.😳

The parents are overjoyed and all the relatives are gathered around the new born baby lying in the cradle who is looking at the ceiling and also at the many faces looking at him and wondering where am I?😆 (Shreyas ne bechare Karan ko hi ML main phasa diya...tho Ameesha ka kya hoga...Kaaliya?)😆

Balluram: Kishan chacha..mera laal aa gaya hai aur dekho woh kitna pyaara aur masoom hai na? (Bechare ne uski pichli janam ki leelayein kaha dekhi hai? Shreyas ko immediately contact karo aur ek cd Bhadrapur bhejne ko kaho)😆

Kishan Chacha: Haan Ballu...bachcha kitna pyaara hai..lagta hai sabke dil ka dulaara ban jaayega. Tho tune iske liye kuch naam socha ke nahi?😉

Balluram: Kishan Chacha, maine aur Shanta ne tho pehle se hi soch rakha tha ke agar ladki hogi tho uski naam hogi Chandni aur agar ladka hoga tho uska naam hoga Chander😛

Kishan Chacha: Wah Ballu beta...bada pyaara naam hai...Chander.

Kishan Chacha looks at the cradle and calls 'Chander beta..dekho yahan'. Chander is looking at the old man with his innocent baby eyes and then suddenly starts crying😭 All wonder what happened to the baby and they finally find out the reason...that the cradle is all wet.😆 (su su kar diya hai)😛

Scene 4: Sitapur village

Ameesha is reborn into the Sitapur Village as the daughter of Sunderlal and Lajwanthi

Lajwanthi: Dekho ji...maine tho ek bete ke liye mannat maangi thi aur mujhe beti mil gayi.😭 (No use crying over split milk..because reincarnation tho hona hi tha tho Ameesha ko kisi ghar main tho paida hona hi tha)😆

Sunderlal: Dekh Lajo...ro mat. Mujhe tho ek beti ki chaahat thi aur ab tho ghar main lakshmi aa gayi hai aur humhaare ghar main bahaar laayi hai. Tho hum iska naam Phoolwanthi rakhenge.😳

Lajwanthi: Haye ji...bahut hi pyaara naam hai. Hum isko phoolon main nehlaayenge😛

Lajo takes the baby girl from the cradle and gives her a kiss on her forehead. The baby girl is looking at her face perplexed and also with very innocent eyes(abhi Karan ML main phasa hai tho...Shreyas Ameesha ko kaise chod sakte hai?)😆

The episode ends with the screen divided into two parts: On one side is Chander in the cradle confused and in the other part Phoolwanthi is in the hands of Lajo looking all perplexed. Screen freezes.😆

Preview: Dev..Kaajjal aur khud ke honeymoon ke liye tickets book karva rahe hai. Ballu ke angootti ki chori ho gayi aur sab milke poore ghar dhoond rahe hai.😆

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Dear Friends, abhi hope you won't get bugged up by this new reincarnation track that I created. If anybody gets bored please do inform me..I will handover this FF to Kaccon Sethi who will continue dragging it with a fresh new character entry.😆😛

Friends,

For those who are reading this FF first time.. the first part is the death climax ...the link of which I have given above. The second part...is given above.😛

I would also be updating the pages of the latest parts which I add to the FF. The latest part and its page will be updated below.

Latest Addition to the FF.

Part 3 of the FF- Reincarnation of KA-Part2- check : pg 3

Part 4 of the FF- Reincarnation of KA-Part3-check : pg 8

Part 5 of the FF- Reincarnation of KA-Part4-check: pg 13

Part 6 of the FF- Reincarnation of KA-Part5-check: pg 16

Love,

Priya😳

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gambi thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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That was quite funny and interesting!!! 😆 😛 Continue soon. 😊

Zareen.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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its really good ..........plz continue 😊

kitty 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow priya thts jus SUPERBBBB 👏 👏 👏 i realli enjoyed readin it.. m happi tht u start writin FF..ur posts r always wonderful..n now the FF...... tht was gr8.. continue soon priya 😛 can't wait to read moe 😳

Lotssa luv: Hira 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Haii Priya this is one of the best hilarious FFs I hv ever come across 👏 ...So karan and Ameesha r finally reborn 😆 😆 ..chalo now unki prem kahani bhi shuru kar do 😉 😛 ...At least DK can now hv their tabela sessions with lots of shanti in their life 😉 😳 ...and karan and ameesha toh abhi bachhe honge ,so theres still time before they can plan their revenge on DK 😛 ..chalo priya jaldi continue karo 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oooohhhhh.....gaawwwwdddd...priya...u are going to kill me now with laughter.... 😆 and...i am tryin to keep calm here...workin on a projtec...jeez...u are...a riot....dangerous to the goat species....

su su kar diya....poor chander...what a start, dampener ....

i hope the trps do start goin down from first epi.....

it will hold i feel for 2 weeks outta sheer curiousity...as long as the new pair are the cutie choco box types it will go on...and kacon will pat her non existent head...and tell herself it is working....

then her poor staff will come and complain....that all their neighbours are complaining now....they are tired of watchin tghis crap for raising trps ...they want to quit....kacon is dejected....she sits alone in the office....sheel comes and consoles her....dejectedly he says if it is any consolation - my 120 staff has resgined...pronto after sur and APu did...they said...it was out of sheer relief....

so dont worry they say things get only better...and he started to bawwwlll...like a baby 😭 and kacon will join him 😭 and call the new soap

kaacon hi kaacon abh sheel ke aankhon mein phassi 😃

brilliant FF priya....keep it up 😃

sammy 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: gambi

That was quite funny and interesting!!! 😆 😛 Continue soon. 😊

Zareen.

Zareen jaanu😛

Will try to continue keeping it interesting.😉 Waise aajkal you stopped dreaming or stopped sleeping?😆 So jaa rajkumaariii...sojaa..meethe meethe sapnon main kho jaa..😳

Love,

Priya😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: nasartaurus

its really good ..........plz continue 😊

kitty 😊

Hey Kitty,

Thanks and surely will continue.😳

Love,

Priya 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awww Priya, i am sooo glad u continued with your reincarnation story .. KA reincarnated ... u know the very thought of this gives me laughter fits ... hahahahhahahaha i cant stop laughing with the thought of KA reborn ... and wah wah wah kya naam dhoonda hai ameesha kay liyay, Phoolwanti ... hahahhahahahahahahahahhaha

but loved the entire thing .. very interesting ... keep going honey, and welcome to the world of writing FFs. 😊

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Originally posted by: hira_786

Wow priya thts jus SUPERBBBB 👏 👏 👏 i realli enjoyed readin it.. m happi tht u start writin FF..ur posts r always wonderful..n now the FF...... tht was gr8.. continue soon priya 😛 can't wait to read moe 😳

Lotssa luv: Hira 😉

Hey Hira, I am happy that you enjoyed reading it and its just my attempt to start an FF...let's see how it takes off.😆 Will return with the next part soon😳

Love,

Priya😛

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