Love Story with Suspese Part 10 PG 24 - Page 7

awww ellina, great piece. hmmm the hand kissing scene was very sweet. beautiful ....

keep going girl .... 👏

Originally posted by: thesaint148

awww ellina, great piece. hmmm the hand kissing scene was very sweet. beautiful ....

keep going girl .... 👏

Thanks Kashish i like you comments and the hand kissing is the best scene.

OMG Ellina!What a wonderful episode that was! Tussi to great ho ji! I like your dialogues.They are great! I loved the DK gazing part and the background song and also when Devu pulled her arm ina naughty way!!! oooohhh!!!! This scene is still giving me goosebumps! 😳 Excellent! Keep up the gr88888 work. Don't forget to continue soon, cause we will be waiting impatiently!

Love,
Zareen. 😃

Originally posted by: gambi

OMG Ellina!What a wonderful episode that was! Tussi to great ho ji! I like your dialogues.They are great! I loved the DK gazing part and the background song and also when Devu pulled her arm ina naughty way!!! oooohhh!!!! This scene is still giving me goosebumps! 😳 Excellent! Keep up the gr88888 work. Don't forget to continue soon, cause we will be waiting impatiently!

Love,
Zareen. 😃

Thank Zareen you liked it a lot thats great the scenes today were a little more DK and will continue and I might probably deciate the next one to you, sammy, and autumn.

Originally posted by: hira_786

Awww Elina 😛...Tht was realli sweeet man 😃...i loved the hand kissin scene the best 👍🏼...Loved readin it.. keep up da gr8 wrk.. n wen u write more plzz pm to lemme no..alrii hun
Lotsssa Luv: Hira 😉

Thanks Hira I am glad you like it I guess the kissing hands was the most favorite scenes and I will definalty pm my FF's to you and everyone.

hey Ellina even u started writing FFs 😛 ...sorry yaar in replying to your FF so late 😳 ...I was on my vacation and just came online 😳 ...but simply outstanding and mindblowing 👏 👏 ...your FF has all the masala of a great script 😉 ...great combination of romance and suspense 👏 👏 👏 ..just loved the way Kaajjal was soo worried about Dev going to the Radio city sinse he had hurt his hands 😳 ...I hope Kaajjal also accompanies dev to the radio city 😳 ...soniya can take care of herself 😉 ..
do continue soon Ellina 😳

Superstar89 aka Ellina ur g888! 👏I never got to comment on ur part 3! but i read it rtie now! And i love the part 4 so many good scnes! I can just imagine them! 😍I cant wait to read about the party at radiocity! 😛 Keep up the god wrk! 👏 👏 😳 And do continue it, afterall i am waiting very impatiently! 😳

Ellinaaaaaaa I am waiting for the next part girl, continue soon...... 😳

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I am waiting like crazzy!!! Continue soon.

Love,
Zareen.