Love Story with Suspese Part 10 PG 24 - Page 8

Originally posted by: jyoti06

hey Ellina even u started writing FFs 😛 ...sorry yaar in replying to your FF so late 😳 ...I was on my vacation and just came online 😳 ...but simply outstanding and mindblowing 👏 👏 ...your FF has all the masala of a great script 😉 ...great combination of romance and suspense 👏 👏 👏 ..just loved the way Kaajjal was soo worried about Dev going to the Radio city sinse he had hurt his hands 😳 ...I hope Kaajjal also accompanies dev to the radio city 😳 ...soniya can take care of herself 😉 ..
do continue soon Ellina 😳

Thanks Jyoti I am glad you liked it your not too late to reply in my FF's lovey comments the FF's does sound intersting with suspense and romance with its charm and I might post part 5 during the evening.😊

Originally posted by: cool_rashi

Superstar89 aka Ellina ur g888! 👏I never got to comment on ur part 3! but i read it rtie now! And i love the part 4 so many good scnes! I can just imagine them! 😍I cant wait to read about the party at radiocity! 😛 Keep up the god wrk! 👏 👏 😳 And do continue it, afterall i am waiting very impatiently! 😳

Thanks Rashi I am glad you got a chance to read both parts the scenes are great yes the party will happen in part 5 and I might write part 5 durning the evening and lovely comments thanks once again.

Originally posted by: autumnleaf

Ellinaaaaaaa I am waiting for the next part girl, continue soon...... 😳

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Autumn, part 5 is coming maybe during the evening so you can read it today or tomorrow.

Originally posted by: gambi

I am waiting like crazzy!!! Continue soon.

Love,
Zareen.

Zareen part 5 might come during the evening so you can read it today or tomorrow.

Originally posted by: ruwaniplk

heyyyy elinaaa🤗i jus red d hole thn n its juss fab yaarr👏
congoooooooo on ur 1st FF😃keeppp itt uppp jaann👏
do continu soonn😳😃😃

Hey Ruwaniplk thanks I am glad you liked it and lovely comments but thank you so much again😊

The is deciated to Sammy,Kashish,Jyoti, Autumn and Zareen

Part 5

So when Kaajjal opened all the wraps that was on Dev he felt better his hands are not red anymore.

Then Dev and Kaajjal got ready for the party

Dev was wearing a black suit with a red tie.

Kaajjal was wearing a red slawar kamiz suit.

Dev: Kaajjal you are looking beautiful tonight.

Kaajjal: Thanks, you are handsome.

Dev: thanks

So Dev and Kaajjal looked into each others eyes like sparkles went to the light.

Then Dev and Kaajjal came down stairs and everybody was ready.

they are came to Radio City and went into the disco.

So they came and greet everyone at the Radio city disco.

then music came

Pana Chaai: you two should dance

So Dev and Kaajjal went to the dance floor and danced

Song

woh ajnabee woh woh woh woh ajanabee, woh ajanabee.......
(aisa koi mujhko mil gaya hai saathiya
jise dekhakar main bhulu saari duniya) - 2
(woh woh woh ajanabee, woh ajanabee jo dekhe dur se
dekhu main usako hi, ho usako hi, abb sab kuchh bhul ke) - 2
dhadkan dhadkan ya saanson mein
raatein raatein ya khaabon mein
sab mein sab mein wahi toh hai, ke bata doon main use
shaame shaame ya subaho mein
shaamil shaamil woh har pal mein
har dum har dum woh baaton mein, mere rahi hai kahin woh woh woh...
woh ajnabee, woh ajnabee, woh ajnabee, woh ajnabee
woh woh woh ajnabee, woh ajnabee, woh ajnabee........

(abb usase aisa jud gaya hai silsila
wohi woh nazar aaye mujhko har jagah) - 2
yeh yeh yeh jindagi roshan huyi hai usake noor se
dil ko sachchi khushi haasil huyi hai usake ishq se
mujhko abb har ghadi, woh har ghadi, usakaa hi suroor hai
de de woh usako haan usako hi aankhen??? majboor hai
dhadkan dhadkan ya saanson mein
raatein raatein ya khaabon mein
sab mein sab mein wahi toh hai, ke bata doon main use
shaame shaame ya subaho mein
shaamil shaamil woh har pal mein
har dum har dum woh baaton mein, mere rahi hai kahin woh woh woh...
woh ajnabee, woh ajnabee, woh ajnabee, woh ajnabee
woh woh woh ajnabee, woh ajnabee, woh ajnabee........

(usako paake paaya maine saara jahaan
rab usako karana na kabhi bhi juda) - 2
woh woh abb bandagi shaamil huyi, hai meri ?? mein
dil ko sachchi khushi haasil huyi hai usake ishq se
mujhko abb har ghadi, woh har ghadi, usakaa hi suroor hai
de de woh usako ho usako hi aankhen?? majboor hai
dhadkan dhadkan ya saanson mein
raatein raatein ya khaabon mein
sab mein sab mein wahi toh hai, ke bata doon main use
shaame shaame ya subaho mein
shaamil shaamil woh har pal mein
har dum har dum woh baaton mein, mere rahi hai kahin woh woh woh...
woh ajnabee, woh ajnabee, woh ajnabee, woh ajnabee
woh woh woh ajnabee, woh ajnabee, woh ajnabee........

woh ajnabee, woh ajnabee, woh ajnabee, woh ajnabee


So they were done dancing and Dev was at the drink place.

Kaajjal: Dev please don't drink

Dev: but Kaajjal

Kaajjal: please...

Dev: ok

So then it was cake time and Dev cut the cake a gave the first piece to Kaajjal and then they all ate the cake.

So then Dev's family went back home

Dev and Kaajjal were in the car and talking having fun

so Dev turn on the radio and a song came up

and DK were remebering the golden memories

Song:
(dhaage tod laao chaanadani se noor ke
ghoonghat hi bana lo roshani se noor ke) - 2
sharm aa gayi toh aaghosh mein lo
ho saanson se ulajhi rahein meri saansein
(bol na halke halke, bol na halke halke
honth se halke halke, bol na halke) - 2

aa nind ka sauda karein, ik khwaab de, ik khwaab le
ik khwaab toh aankhon mein hai, ik chaand ke takiye talein
kitane dino se yeh aasamaan bhi soya nahi hai, isako sula de
(bol na halke halke, bol na halke halke
honth se halke halke, bol na halke) - 2

umarein lagi kehate huve, do labj the ik baat thi
woh ik din sau saal ka, sau saal ki woh raat thi
kaisa lage jo chup chaap dono, ho pal pal mein puri sadiyaan bitaayein
bol

bol na halke halke, bol na halke halke
honth se halke halke
o dhaage tod laao chaanadani se noor ke
o ghoonghat hi bana lo roshani se noor ke
sharm aa gayi toh aaghosh mein lo
ho saanson se ulajhi rahein meri saansein
(bol na halke halke, bol na halke halke
honth se halke halke, bol na halke) - 2

DK came home and went to bed.

The next day it was morning

Kaajjal: Dev what proof are we going to give for Adi's case?

Dev: well I actually have proof for the case.

Kaajjal: but how ?

Dev: I actully had a tape recoder in my pocket on that day so I press on it was on so it ape everything of what the NG said.

Kaajjal: wow thats great.

So when they went to court everyone sat down and listened.

Judge: The court session is being.

So then when DK sat down they were holding hand for good luck and not to be seperated.

Hope you guys liked it

~ Ellina Khan

awww ellina, that was a smart move. devu baby actually recorded everything .. WOw, i ecpect this only from our chocolate baby.

great story and loved the party scene. keep going girl ... great work . 👏👏

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Originally posted by: thesaint148

awww ellina, that was a smart move. devu baby actually recorded everything .. WOw, i ecpect this only from our chocolate baby.

great story and loved the party scene. keep going girl ... great work . 👏👏

Thanks Kashish I am glad you liked it it was great idea of Dev to keep a tape recoder in his pocket😆 and the party scene was great too

Thanks Kashish and deciated this part to you,sammy,autumn,jyoti, and zareen.

wow..wonderful part Ellina 👏 👏...gr8 work...aw it was so sweet how dev didn't drink cuz kaju told him not to...looking forward to the next part...do continue soon...good job once again.


love
Alishba