Love Story with Suspese Part 10 PG 24 - Page 5

Ellina, congrats girl for your first FF.

Great story line. Hmmm DK are the detectives. 😃 Great going. 😉 😉 😉 I just read all the parts and you are getting better and better with each part. Keep it up. Great work done and do continue soon!!!

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fantacti job
love the the part were kajjal kiss Dev's hand 😆
keep up the good work
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Wow Elline, so far so gud hun!!😊..i'm really enjoying it..Great story!!👏👏
Do continue the next part soon n keep up ur good work!! 😳



Aliza❤️

Originally posted by: autumnleaf

Ellina, congrats girl for your first FF.

Great story line. Hmmm DK are the detectives. 😃 Great going. 😉 😉 😉 I just read all the parts and you are getting better and better with each part. Keep it up. Great work done and do continue soon!!!

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Thanks Autumn lovely comments and it is going to get intersting more in part 4 and thank you so much again.

Originally posted by: cutie cutes

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fantacti job
love the the part were kajjal kiss Dev's hand 😆
keep up the good work
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Thanks Princess and I also loved that part too.

Originally posted by: Aliza*

Wow Elline, so far so gud hun!!😊..i'm really enjoying it..Great story!!👏👏
Do continue the next part soon n keep up ur good work!! 😳



Aliza❤️

thanks aliza I am glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: superstar89

Thanks Princess and I also loved that part too.

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welcome SS😆😆😆

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Ellina,gr88888888 job! Wow!! I was sooo touched when Kajju kissed Devu's hand! Awww.. poor Devu hurt his hand while fighting and after the kiss they both hug and say I love you!!! That's chowwwww chweeeeetttt!!!

very nice job dear
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Originally posted by: gambi

Ellina,gr88888888 job! Wow!! I was sooo touched when Kajju kissed Devu's hand! Awww.. poor Devu hurt his hand while fighting and after the kiss they both hug and say I love you!!! That's chowwwww chweeeeetttt!!!

Thanks Zareen I am glad you liked it and the DK's were the best part.