Love Story with Suspese Part 10 PG 24

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guys it is my first FF so I hope you like it because I am getting nervous and I would deciated to Rashi who help me out talking me into making this FF and to other people on the Kaajjal parivaar.

Adi: Oh kaajjal and Dev did you find any proof that I am innocent and not gulity.

Kajjal and Dev are standing and they say that we didn't find any proof but we are still searching

Adi: Oh guys I need to get out because I need to proof that I am not a drug addict but i wanted to tell people that it wasn't me but it was my friend ( the new guy) who set up this trap for me to get in jail.

Kaajjal: Aditya don't worry everything will be fine and your laywer will fight for your case and you will win for sure.

Dev: Adi take care and we find proof as fast as we can.

Then Dev and Kaajjal leave the police staution .

Dev and Kaajjal get back from the police station and arrived home.

Pana Chaai: Dev is everything fine and how is Adi?

Dev: Well Adi said that he want to find the proof and get out of jail and punish the person who got him in this mess.

The new guy is worried and thinks.

Pana Chaai: Well we pray that Adi will come out of jail really fast and don't worry you guys will defiantly find some proof.

Dev: say thank Chaai.

Pana Chaai : your welcome.

Then Dev and Kaajjal went into their room.

Kaajjal: Dev I hope we get some proof for Adi for his case.

Dev: we will

Kaajjal crys and is worry

Dev: why are you crying?

Kaajjal: says because now there bad things coming again and I thought it was over but I guess its not.

Dev: don't worry Kajjal everything and the bad thing will go away and no one will come between us Kaajjal.

Then Dev gives Kaajjal a hug and kiss her on the fore head.

I hope you liked it and I might contiune soon.

and if you didn't like its ok but idk myself.

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Sharmii thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awww...its very nice.Just read it!!

😛
Anoli thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ellina that was superb!😛 It was short & simple & cute just like u!🤗

& yeah, Congratulations for ur first FF!👏😃

Take Care

Anoli

xxx

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey ellina... 😳 thnax a lot for sharing this....you are doin well there. 😳 ..and it always hardest when you start 😳 ...like a river...is always a trickle on th emountain stop...but when it starts flowin you cant staop it...so go for it and we will all support you.....
so heres ahug... 🤗 for my sweet sis...on her FF track...moon mein ghee shakar... 😳
shooroo ho jaa 😃
sammy 😛


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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sharmii

Awww...its very nice.Just read it!!

😛

Thanks Sharmii 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anoli

Ellina that was superb!😛 It was short & simple & cute just like u!🤗

& yeah, Congratulations for ur first FF!👏😃

Take Care

Anoli

xxx

Thanks Anoli and thanks and I loved your wonderful comments.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ellina G88 job!!! 👏 And u delicated it to me! 😳 Cant believe this! 😳 Feeling so speacial!!! 😳 😳 😳 G8 job! G8 ideas! 👏 👏 😉 I coudl imgine all the scenes happening!😍I will pm u sum more ideas! 😉 😳 Hope there r sum more Romantic scenes of DK, 😉 😳 Just wondering wht gona happen next 😍!Once again G88888 job! awesum FF! And it is ur first one! 👏 Once again it is g88! and i cant believe it u still delicated it to me! 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Good job Ellina!!! I loved it when Devu gave Kajju a hug and a kiss!!! Awwwww.... that part was soo emotional and romantic! I want you to continue as soon as possible. Luuved your FF. It's great! 😊

Zareen. 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: dudleysam

hey ellina... 😳 thnax a lot for sharing this....you are doin well there. 😳 ..and it always hardest when you start 😳 ...like a river...is always a trickle on th emountain stop...but when it starts flowin you cant staop it...so go for it and we will all support you.....
so heres ahug... 🤗 for my sweet sis...on her FF track...moon mein ghee shakar... 😳
shooroo ho jaa 😃
sammy 😛


Thanks Sammy your comments are so sweet and nice and thank you for all the support 🤗

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: cool_rashi

Ellina G88 job!!! 👏 And u delicated it to me! 😳 Cant believe this! 😳 Feeling so speacial!!! 😳 😳 😳 G8 job! G8 ideas! 👏 👏 😉 I coudl imgine all the scenes happening!😍I will pm u sum more ideas! 😉 😳 Hope there r sum more Romantic scenes of DK, 😉 😳 Just wondering wht gona happen next 😍!Once again G88888 job! awesum FF! And it is ur first one! 👏 Once again it is g88! and i cant believe it u still delicated it to me! 😳 😳 😳

Your so welcome Rashi and thank you so much I loved your comments😳

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