Love Story with Suspese Part 10 PG 24 - Page 9

Originally posted by: lovelygurl

wow..wonderful part Ellina 👏 👏...gr8 work...aw it was so sweet how dev didn't drink cuz kaju told him not to...looking forward to the next part...do continue soon...good job once again.


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Alishba

Thanks Alishaba I am glad you like it yea the scene where Dev didn't drink because Kaajjal told him not to I agree it was sweet and thank you once again and with your lovely comments.

Originally posted by: hmala

woow. that's great,
Dev is really a hero,he is not just a loveboy,
continue soon

Thanks Hmala yup Dev is the hero for the FF and thanks again with your nice comments.

Dear .. wonderful FF . Just read all 5 of them now .. enjoyed it a lot . You have filled DK lovestory with Adi's case solving mystery too ! Good work .

Loved the hand kissing part , dance ( you have chosen the right song too dear ) . So our sweet heart Dev proves to be real good at detective work too ( besides his romance for Kajjal & Radio city ) 👏 . that was a great idea of recording the conversation . wow !

Do continue soon . Your posts are small & sweet . so it was very easy for me to read all 5 of them at one go ... thank you so much dear 😳

Hope Shreya people will also solve Adi mystery very quickly on screen .. and then show only DK honeymoon packages 😳

Great work dear ... pls write soon .
Love, Roopa

Originally posted by: roopa_s

Dear .. wonderful FF . Just read all 5 of them now .. enjoyed it a lot . You have filled DK lovestory with Adi's case solving mystery too ! Good work .

Loved the hand kissing part , dance ( you have chosen the right song too dear ) . So our sweet heart Dev proves to be real good at detective work too ( besides his romance for Kajjal & Radio city ) 👏 . that was a great idea of recording the conversation . wow !

Do continue soon . Your posts are small & sweet . so it was very easy for me to read all 5 of them at one go ... thank you so much dear 😳

Hope Shreya people will also solve Adi mystery very quickly on screen .. and then show only DK honeymoon packages 😳

Great work dear ... pls write soon .
Love, Roopa

Thanks Roopa I am glad you liked it lovley comments and your welcome

tomorrow part 6 will be posted.

Hey Ellina wonderful narration dear 👏 ,...just loved the way Kaajjal asks dev not to drink 😳 ...its a typical wife speaking 😳 and then both holding hands in the court never to b separated again was soo sweetttt 😳 ...lovely piece of work ellina 😳

Do continue soon Ellina 😳

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Hey Ellina wonderful narration dear 👏 ,...just loved the way Kaajjal asks dev not to drink 😳 ...its a typical wife speaking 😳 and then both holding hands in the court never to b separated again was soo sweetttt 😳 ...lovely piece of work ellina 😳

Do continue soon Ellina 😳

Aww Jyoti I am glad you liked it so much thanks for the wondeful comments yes the scene where they hold hands in court it means their jodi will never be aprat and they will hold their relationship together and never break up.

Thanks Ellina for the dedication, i am touched. And a very good update too. Of course we all know DPS is very smart. Real good thinking Ellina on DPS's part. Continue soon. 😊

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amazing job loved it
keep up the good work
love the end where they were holding hands only for good luck not to sperate 😆
nice job
can't wait for the next part

Wow... wonderful... 👏 👏
Keep it up...!! 👏

Originally posted by: autumnleaf

Thanks Ellina for the dedication, i am touched. And a very good update too. Of course we all know DPS is very smart. Real good thinking Ellina on DPS's part. Continue soon. 😊

Your welcome for the dedication thank you so much I am glad you liked it.