Love Story with Suspese Part 10 PG 24 - Page 6

Originally posted by: THiNKiN OF YOU

very nice job dear
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Thanks Ruhi I am glad you liked it.

Aaww,,, it was mindblowing Ellina!!👏 I really liked the last part!!😳 It was very sweet!!!😛😳

Take Care😍

Anoli😍

xxx😍

Originally posted by: Anoli

Aaww,,, it was mindblowing Ellina!!👏 I really liked the last part!!😳 It was very sweet!!!😛😳

Take Care😍

Anoli😍

xxx😍

Thanks Anoli I am glad you liked it and the last part of the FF was so touche and sweet.

So sweet nice FF please continue!!! 😳
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Originally posted by: india05

So sweet nice FF please continue!!! 😳
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Thanks Shanti I am glad you liked it and lovely comments.

Part 4

Scene 1


So when Dev and Kaajjal went into the house then everybody was asking them questions.

Pana Chaai: where were you guys?

Veer: Where did you guys go?

Dev: We tried to get some proof for Adi's case.

So Dev is tell everyone the whole story. Everyone was shock that Sonia got kidnapped.

Nandian: What happen to your hands Dev?

Kaajjal: Well when Dev was fighting with the goons and the NG he got hit by something.

Pana Chaai: We should find a first aid kit.

Veer called the servant and gave the first aid kit to Pana Chaai.

Then when everybody was helping Dev put the bandage on then Kaajjal and Dev were staring at each other like gazing stars.

There were some flashbacks and a song came

Song

hey hey ey ey ey ey hey hey hey hey......
tumhe pata toh hoga, tumhi pe main fida hoon
tumhe hai jabse chaaha, hawaaon mein udata hoon
tumhi mere har pal mein, tum aaj mein, tum kal mein
hey shona, hey shona, hey shona, hey shona....
tumhe pata toh hoga ke mere dil mein kya hai
chalo kahe deti hoon, kabhi nahi jo kahaan hai
tumhi mere har pal mein, tum aaj mein, tum kal mein
hey shona, hey shona, hey shona, hey shona....

tum jo ghussa bhi karo toh mujhe pyaar lagata hai jaane kyun
main toh jo bhi kahu tumhe ikraar lagata hai jaane kyun
chhodo bhi ye ada, paas aake jara, baat dil ki koi keh do na
hey shona, hey shona, hey shona, hey shona....

saari duniya ko chhodake maine chaaha hai ik tumhe
maine jindagi se maanga hai toh sirf maanga hai ik tumhe
abb isi chaah mein, abb isi raah mein, jindagibhar mere tum ho na
hey shona, hey shona, hey shona, hey shona....
tumhe pata toh hoga, tumhi pe main fida hoon
tumhe hai jabse chaaha, hawaaon mein udata hoon
tumhi mere har pal mein, tum aaj mein, tum kal mein
hey shona, hey shona, hey shona, hey shona....
shona, hey shona, hey shona, hey shona.......
hey hey ey ey ey ey hey hey hey hey......

Scene 2

Next Day

When Dev and Kaajjal got up they were smiling.

Dev: Good morning

Kaajjal: good morning

Kaajjal: Dev hows your hands?

Dev: feeling a little better

Kaajjal you shouldn't drive to work today

Dev: but today we have some party at Radiocity

Kaajjal: ok but some driver will drop you

Dev: Kaajjal do you want to go?

Kaajjal: ok

Dev: Kaajjal where are you going?

Kaajjal: to check on Sonia to see if she is ok

Kaajjal: but Dev don't move out of bed ok you have to rest.

Dev: but Kaajjal

Kaajjal: no buts ok

Dev: ok

Scene 3

When Kaajjal reached to Sonia's house she rang the door bell.

Adi's mom: hi Kaajjal

Kaajjal: hi aunt, how's Sonia?

Adi's mom: She's doing fine, thank you guys for recusing her.

Kaajjal: your welcome.

Adi's mom: won't you come in.

Kaajjal: I can't because Dev's hands go hurt from the fight.

Adi's mom: oh ok bye Kaajjal

Kaajjal: bye aunt.

Then Kaajjal came home and saw Dev sleeping.

so then Kaajjal pulled his blanket and left but when she about to leave something caught on her so she saw Dev was awake and Dev was holding her arm.

then Kaajjal was like letting go but Dev still hold on to her arm and smiled so she smiled back.

end of part 4

hope you guys liked it. 😊

i liked the kissing of the hands scene. 😳 😳 ..it was so sweet...and selling th egoat farm...bhai kaun kareedegaa 😆 ...poor devu...yeh bechaara hai kis musibhat mein phasa...wasntit enuf he had his hands fll rescuing kaju...now he has to look out for goat parivaar as welll.


well done etar...great stuff...keep goin

sammy 😛 😛

Originally posted by: dudleysam

i liked the kissing of the hands scene. 😳 😳 ..it was so sweet...and selling th egoat farm...bhai kaun kareedegaa 😆 ...poor devu...yeh bechaara hai kis musibhat mein phasa...wasntit enuf he had his hands fll rescuing kaju...now he has to look out for goat parivaar as welll.


well done etar...great stuff...keep goin

sammy 😛 😛

Thanks Sammy i am glad you liked it and the kiss the hands scene was one of my favorite parts.

wow...great part hun...it was very sweet and lovely...good job Ellina...do continue your fanfic...keep up the gr8 work.


lots of love
Alishba

Originally posted by: lovelygurl

wow...great part hun...it was very sweet and lovely...good job Ellina...do continue your fanfic...keep up the gr8 work.


lots of love
Alishba

Thanks Alishba lovley comment I am glad you liked it.