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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#431

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Grandma tells the kids the story HBAS as told in Chapter 17.

Grandma: ...So one day, Heera was talking to her friends.. She said that she was very upset because her daddy did not write letter to her..

>>> Look at Heera... stands, I mean sits out here too😆
G'ma:..And she was thinking about her sister.. She was very sad..
Babloo: I know why..becoz some bad guys killed her..

>>>Babloo remembers this v well

Babloo: Did any one give her handkechiff?
G'ma: Yes.. Akbar gave her.. but later..
Baby: Later? when?
G'ma: She was very sad and she went near the river and sat under the tree..
Baby: Was it the same river where she fell down and..
Babloo: Akbar uncle saved her...
G'ma: Yes.. you clever kids.. Do you remember that..?
Baby: ( imagines..)

>>>AMK decided to make a picnic out of their meeting??😆
G'ma:..After sometime Akbar came there with his friends.. He sees her sitting there from a distance..
Babloo: Didn't his friends see her..?
G'ma: Yes.. they also saw her..
Baby: ( imagines..)

>>> How adorable!
G'ma:He goes near her.. He asks her, "Why are you crying?"

Babloo: Did he give her handkachiff?
G'ma: Yes.. She wiped her tears and both talked with each other..

>>> 🤣 Heera became a bit hyper
G'ma:After some time she stopped crying and became happy..
Baby: What did he say to her for her to stop crying?
Babloo: He said "Don't cry.. if you cry you will look ugly..." Mommy will tell me like that when I cry..
G'ma: And then they went back home..
Babloo: His friends?
G'ma: They also went home..because it became dark then..
Baby: They went home to sleep..
Babloo: So they went home to watch TV..(imagines)

>>> How cute.. love this version... 🤗

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#432

Originally posted by: harshu27

yeah lashy 😆 a punctual officer...🤣on duty madam...🤣🤗

Aye Aye 😛

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#433

Oh God no! No school assignments during happy hours on IF . 😛

*Phew*

b. I don't know how I jumped on this bandwagon. I was a long time silent reader of JA FF on IF which we could access without being a member. I used to wonder why certain FF had the Members Only tag and was not able to open them. I also noticed that the 'LIKE'' button was not displayed when on the forum. So to cut a looong story short, I was clicking whatever I could to unravel the mystery when Voila! I discovered that I had to log in as a member to be able to do that and more - so that is how I joined IF Forum. Phew!

*Nice!*

I recognized the emoticon - after all I AM a teacher !!! How DO you find these amazing smileys?👏

*Google*

c. Haiyo - don't you have enough on your plate? A 'Name for Rose contest'? OK from now I am going to be brazen and assume all 'Rose'' comments are for my attention unless stated otherwise.

*Yes* 😳

The happy dance - I am going to steal Chellam's as well. ( Thank you Chellam).

Wow! My first image post. What all you make me do - Lashy dear.😆

*You look good doing the happy dance, don't worry!*😛

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harshal

@harshu27

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Posted: 8 years ago

#434

Originally posted by: lashy

Aye Aye 😛

😉😛

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Kuki715

@Kuki715

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Posted: 8 years ago

#435

Originally posted by: lashy

Edited by Kuki715 - 8 years ago

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#436

Originally posted by: harshu27
😉😛

Btw, recognise this?😆 I just came across this by chance, this morning..

hiii m a silent reader of ur ff and I hav read ur ff atlest 4-5 tmes stil find it new wenevr I read it nxt tme... I really likd d way of ur writing and obviously d charcterisatn of jalal and jodha I mean its really v v diffclt 2 find such a type of guy in reality really hats off 2 u fr writin such a wonderful piece of wrk I really gt addictd 2 ur ff... really hw u gt such gd ideas 2 write its really grt... actuly wntd 2 cmnt long bk but hd net probs bt ws stil readin ur ff thru mobile bt I culdnt reply frm my mobile so hd 2 wait fr my net probs 2 gt clrd...so 2dy finly gt a chnce 2 reply m sooo happy... 😊 hope u continue writin simlir type of ffs wid diff stories I wont mind readin it agn and agn... 😊

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#437

Originally posted by: Kuki715
don't be sad....you know you are the sole reason for our existence on IF.Without you there is no Fab four or Fantastic four🤗

Chalo successfully managed to fish for some compliments with emotional blackmail

This one's super cute!

Edited by lashy - 8 years ago

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roseraja1915

@roseraja1915

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Posted: 8 years ago

#438

Originally posted by: lashy

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harshal

@harshu27

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Posted: 8 years ago

#439

Originally posted by: lashy

Btw, recognise this?😆 I just came across this by chance, this morning..

hiii m a silent reader of ur ff and I hav read ur ff atlest 4-5 tmes stil find it new wenevr I read it nxt tme... I really likd d way of ur writing and obviously d charcterisatn of jalal and jodha I mean its really v v diffclt 2 find such a type of guy in reality really hats off 2 u fr writin such a wonderful piece of wrk I really gt addictd 2 ur ff... really hw u gt such gd ideas 2 write its really grt... actuly wntd 2 cmnt long bk but hd net probs bt ws stil readin ur ff thru mobile bt I culdnt reply frm my mobile so hd 2 wait fr my net probs 2 gt clrd...so 2dy finly gt a chnce 2 reply m sooo happy... 😊 hope u continue writin simlir type of ffs wid diff stories I wont mind readin it agn and agn... 😊

Omg u actually found it 😲dis is my 1st commnt on ur ff njapa i guess😆i still rembr how nervous i was while commnting😆and wen fr a long time u dint reply i was like may b wont reply since m a newbie😆bt alas reading ur respnse i was really happy btw i did keep my promise c nw m hyperactve on ur ff😉and since i wrte sht frms more i recognised its me only who wrte😈

Edited by harshu27 - 8 years ago

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

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Posted: 8 years ago

#440

Originally posted by: harshu27

Omg u actually found it😲dis is my 1st commnt on ur ff njapa i guess😆i still rembr how nervous i was while commnting😆and wen fr a long time u dint reply i was like may b wont reply since m a newbie😆bt alas reading ur respnse i was really happy btw i did keep my promise c nw m hyperactve on ur ff😉and since i wrte sht frms more i recognised its me only who wrte😈

lashy Di is great
IF must pay her
because of her novel NJAPA everybody join forum
that's why NJAPA is still my favorite
and she remember each and every one which I like in her most
and she say memory is not her strong point
lashy Di just be like that only
plz never change

Edited by binduprasad41 - 8 years ago