NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~Thread 12- Chapter 17 - Page 113

Originally posted by: lashy

Blush ☺️ 10000 times

OMG... so sweet the messages (and Periyamma you're such a star... just seeing a line 'miss Lashy 😔---> made my day!)...

Yes I was busy writing... lol... I'll definitely put the update up tonight... racing to put it up before 12 India time...

Because it's someone special's birthday today!

Sojji Begum (Baubles) Happy Birthday darling.. 🥳

Lashy di, are you still writing?

Originally posted by: luvuyuvi

Lashy di, are you still writing?

Akka,

This is a peach of a tale. 👏You are really gifted at spinning out, from airy nothing, such charming, cotton candy confections of childlike, comic capers. Good Lord, Akka, just see the alliteration - seven in a row! It must be your inspiration being contagious!😉

Shyamala

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Baby Sarasa writes the next chapter for Lashy'kka's story HBAS.

( Baby Sarasa brings her note pad and pen and sits to write something. Babloo as usual is curious as to what his Baby'kka is up to.)

Babloo:. Baby'kka, are you going to write story for Harshu'kka?

Baby:No... I am going to help Lashy'kka..

Babloo: Can I also help her.?

Baby:She didn't ask for your help..

Babloo: What if? My teacher told me I should help people even if they don't ask me for help.

Quite right, my little man. This is what is called obligatory helpfulness. 😆 Never give up, but keep trying to get your foot in the door. Your Baby'kka is just being cantankerous - that means she does not like anything you do and does not want to let you anywhere near her precious story!

Baby: Lashy'kka said she has to take care of Rithi kutty and she doesn't have time to write her story now. So, I am going to write the story for her..

Babloo: Baby'kka, she writes for big people only.. Can you write for big people?

Baby: Yes.. big people were also small once?

Babloo: Is it?😲 I didn't know.. then what were we then.?

When, Babloo? When the big people were small? Why, you were not here at all. You were with God in heaven, waiting to make your grand entry, and make Baby'kka's life tough!😆

Baby: Shh, Babloo, be quiet.. I must write 100 hundred lines today..

Babloo: HUNDRED lines! That is more than TEN! Even I can't write like that..
I am proud of you, Babloo kanna! Just look at the casual insouciance of Even I can't write like that! Yes, yes, Grandma will tell you what insouciance means!

Baby: I know you can't.. That's why I am asking you to keep quiet..

Babloo: 'kka, don't worry. I have got grandma's laptop .. I'll find words for you..
Good Lord! As if your selecting pictures was not enough, now words as well? 😕

Baby: I don't need your help.. I have Shyamala aunty's list of hard words.. grandma has written them in a note book.. I will use it if I want..

Babloo: Baby'kka do you want pictures? Last time I s'lected pictures for your story..

Baby: No.. Lashy'kka doesn't put many pictures.. She puts only one..She will do that..
Especially if you choose the pictures, Babloo my poppet. Your selections are too original for Lashy'kka's story!😉😉

Babloo: OK.. you write the story.. I 'll help you with 'felling..
Now this is a new one!😆 Yes, of course, Babloo darling, but if you start with your 'fellings, your Baby'kka will start tearing her hair, and you don't want that, do you, my sweet?

Baby:BABLOO..! Will you stop talking and 'llow me to write?

Babloo: Okay'kka..I won't talk..

Baby: ( writes, repeating the words) ..".So one day Heera wanted to learn sword fight from Akbar and she goes to see him..He is giving food to his horse.."

Babloo: 'kka...is it Bahadur?

Baby: Yes.. who else?.. " She asks him, " Can you teach me how to fight with sword?"

Babloo: And what does Akbar say?

Baby: ( writes).." Akbar says, Hey girl, I don't know sword fight , but I will teach you how to throw a knife.."
If Lashy'kka saw Akbar addressing Heera as Hey girl!,she would faint out of sheer shock!😆

Babloo: ( listens interestingly, sucking his thumb) mm..then?

Baby: ( continues writing)..".. But Heera doesn't want to learn knife throwing.. She says, "I want to learn only sword fight, because, Jodha akka and another akka in Chandra serial fight with sword..' Akbar then asks her, " Where did they learn?"She says, "From Jalal uncle"

Babloo: ( suddenly looking cheerful): What? Is Akbar uncle going to learn sword fight from Jalal uncle?
At last, a familiar name!

Baby: ( concentrating on her story)..." Can Jalal teach me sword fight?" he asks Heera. She replies " Yes " and he asks " Can you take me to him?"

Babloo: Oooh...I too want to go..

Baby: Babloo, he won't teach sword fight to kids..

Babloo: I am not a kid.. I fought with you yesterday with a sword...

Baby: That was made of cardboard..okay, let me finish my story.." Heera tells him, ' I don't know him, but Baby'kka is his friend, and I will ask her to take us to him..."

Babloo: 'kka, write, "Heera says, ' we 'll go by magic carpet..!😃"
No you can't! The magic carpets are all booked solid till after Deepavali!

( Lashy'kka comes there)

Baby and Babloo: Lashy'kka ...we are going to see Jalal uncle with Akbar uncle and Heera'kka!!!

Karkuzhali.

Originally posted by: sashashyam

Akka,

This is a peach of a tale. 👏You are really gifted at spinning out, from airy nothing, such chaming,cotton candy confections of childlike, comic capers. Good Lord, Akka, just see the alliteration - seven in a row! It must be your inspiration being contagious!😉

Shyamala

It's just wow di
Both r trying hard to control their feelings but can't
Akbar want his men to away from his matters so they don't get into trouble
Harka is so right in her judgement as now she is sure that letters r not delivereing but poor she don't that there r not Some but any letter delivered
Akbar and harka both shared their pain both found stranger to share it ya they r strangers
Then that touch moment was wow
Harkas youth and heart both want to go with flow but her sensible part stopping her
Harka keeps on thinking about that encounter
Then akbar too felt good thinking about harkas touch
That line when he say in next life was really romantic and touching
Oh no Akbar got clue from harkas childhood poem hope he don't find the farmaan I don't want that
Really can't wait to read more
Thanks for pm
Love you