PBD: The Journey Through Utopia - It's 2 years!! Payal's OS Updated! - Page 29

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

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ok , so only jalal realized . i wonder how he will divulge same to jodha & what would be the level of naughtiness...😉

like u i also want him to confess first...😳

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

patience , my dear di patience because its the only remedy...😛

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

what a beautiful os dear

>>> Thankyou dear😊

like lashy di said it was hard to differentiate between your and jhanvi Di writing

>>>God😲😛

you write so beautifully that I was thinking I was reading PBD chapter

>>> Really..?? ☺️☺️

you write exactly that things which I want to read in PBD,

>>> Me too😆

like jodha wearing that sari, Goa incident, and most important thing is three magical words which jalal said to jodha,
I know in main story they don't need proper confession but I really want them to confess their feeling,
which you describe so beautifully in this os ,

>>> Thanks dear🤗

you describe jodha in that sari, and jalal eagerly waiting for Jo to come and wish him so well,
love the way jalal hold jodha hand and cut the cake, you know this is something so special things for any girl,

>>> Yes... 😃For me too

and jodha wish and jalal reply this is something so special in PBD jalal and jodha which you write so perfectly,
and much awaited scene Goa incident which you bring perfectly like same song Jo singing in front of jalal,

>>> Thankyou so so much❤️

jalal recognize jodha but I really want you to write further about jodha reaction,

>>> That's jhanvi di's job..😆

in short perfect os for 2 anniversary of pbd which write by perfect writer,

>>> how sweet of you bindu.. Thankyou 🤗

payal dear you write in the beginning of os that this is not your 100%, if this is not your 100% I afraid what is your 100% this is just perfectly written you know,

>>> I am glad u liked this os dear.. but there are some parts where I wasn't satisfied while reading.

I am shock to see in you lack of confident what happen to that girl who write so perfectly mature concept and write stories in which jodha was so different from any story like grey shade of jodha which we see in your story which I really appreciate .

>>> You know I am smiling like an idiot reading this.. Thankyou for reading and liking my stories re..😭

I write this thing because I read your comments somewhere that you don't feel to write in forum , please pardon me if I hurt you. I really like your writing dear.

>>>> Yes.. many people have stopped reading my stories dear.. and not getting much response on updates so... 😵

It's been more than a month that I write something new.. the updates I posted.. I wrote them in my diary..

that's why took more time than usual to update this os..

and thanks you for PM

Originally posted by: mama17

Hey Payal! loved the OS 😊