AKDHA FF ' Fifty shades of Jalal ' Thread one Ch 1-6 - Page 28

Originally posted by: aisha...11110

yup!!! i liked their first meet a lot😃

I'm glad u liked it 😳

it was the longest update of yours 😉

yeah 😆 thanks

just awesome!!👏

update soon😳

🤗

Originally posted by: unishaz

superb.. Thanks for pm..

Originally posted by: radhika7

Hey i have updated my comment on page 30 ...First to Res 😃

Originally posted by: unishaz

superb.. Thanks for pm..

Originally posted by: rima4ever

terrific start mehak

i just loved it

it is just like christian and ana 1st meet

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

You are welcome darling ... I must say u r an amazing writer mehak ... keep up the good job 👏!!! btw ... it'll be interesting to read the further twists n turns ... but according to the novel i dont remember much about it & If my memory serves me right ..it's a tad violent & unfair usage of women ... so thatz why i told you if jalal falls in love in the end it would have been a different twist & epic lovestory ... but anyways letsee how you'll take it further 😳

Originally posted by: SUMESHNI

Awesome superb update

Plz plz continue soon

Tanx for the pm

Originally posted by: taahir004

Wow just wow that was electric stunning

Originally posted by: aanchal_c

"R U GAY MR MOHAMMAD"...that was it..i burst out laughing...it was so so interesting and funny at the same time...hope you will update soon.

Originally posted by: najma123

loved it