AKDHA FF ' Fifty shades of Jalal ' Thread one Ch 1-6 - Page 29

Originally posted by: Indhulovesparii

OMG Mehek dear..🤗 🤗It's just just awesome..👏Jaldi update karna...😛wanna read fastly😃Sach mein bahut maza aaya...😊Liked the questions😆 and I liked how Jalal replied..😆Awesome dear 😃Pls update fast and do pm me😉

Originally posted by: justlovetv

Aww..Mehak!🤗 It was a fantastic update!

Hayee 🤗thanks🤗

Unka first meeting was pretty embarrassing for Jo😳 but Jallu finds her pretty intriguing I guess!😳

Ur guess is right 😳

Jallu was pretty frank in giving all the answers! But the last was really funny!😆 He starts asking Jo the ques!😆

yeah 😆

I know it will take some time but jaldi GM wala update dena! This is really awesome!😃

its fifty shades 😃

BTW you have based this in the US like the original right?😉

yeah .. u r right 😳

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

update kar nautankibaaz

Originally posted by: monalisa123

Love love love this

Update please

Originally posted by: Anushka8722

haww

itta delay!!

Not fair di!😡😭

last update 29th ko tha.. ab jaldi se ek bada waala updste do naa pls!!!😃

Originally posted by: rishbala3018

I unresd on page 33

Originally posted by: rishbala3018

Res for chap 1 comment

U forgot to send me pm for the first chapter 😡
Just read it and its awesome 👏 👏
U r an awesome writer yaar!! The way u write and describe its just awesome!!
Very interesting begining, update soon!!

Originally posted by: ---Mehak---

really😳i'm sorry then di😳

Hayeee ☺️ Thank u so much ..

i'm glad u liked it😳