AKDHA FF ' Fifty shades of Jalal ' Thread one Ch 1-6

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Mrs.KimJongin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: oshinchaudhary
Ohh loved their first meeting...
Poor jo 😆 ...
Plz plz plz update soon...no not soon... verryyy soon

i'm glad u liked it 🤗thank you so much ..

i'll try to write 😳

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bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#262

terrific start mehak

i just loved it

it is just like christian and ana 1st meet

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Mrs.KimJongin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: J2lover
omg miss. mehek...its amazing!!!!!😃😃

You can call me Mrs.Grey 🤣
i was waiting from yday for ur update...after its my FIFTY SHADES OF GREY version!!!!😳😳
Hmmm..i know right !

n i must say...u nailed it...😉😉 n the bstest PART OF your STORY...YOU ARE WRITING IN FIRST PERSON!!!😳😳

Yeah .. i thought it would be good if i liked it like that only 😳
it makes it more realistic...knowing the story thrugh my jodhu's pov...wow...nthng can be more blissful!!!!😉 loved that nervousness the young student was feeling!!!😆😆 i cauld imagine myself in her place...😉😉 i wish i could be!!!!☺️❤️

Yeah , i too love this way of writing and this time i got the opportunity
oh god 😆

...n THE HIGHLIGHT of the day is surely MY PRINCE...☺️☺️ i was imagining him throughout the update...relating him to my chris...but jallu is jallu...he's one of his kind!!!☺️☺️ n to pinpoint the blooper...😆😆 THAT GAY QUESTION!!!😆😆 OMG...IT WAS SOO SUDDEN!!!!!!😆😆😆 poor jo...she was in complete mess at that moment!!!!😆😆...all in all..i loved it dea...ur doing great!!!😃...update soon!!!!!😉

Over all , thank you so much yaar 🤗

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PBDcrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: ---Mehak---

Of course , this chappy was one of a laugh riot ...
Yeah .. he's a hotty man 😳
it'll be more interesting ... keep reading 😃
and yeah thank you so much 🤗

You are welcome darling ... I must say u r an amazing writer mehak ... keep up the good job 👏!!! btw ... it'll be interesting to read the further twists n turns ... but according to the novel i dont remember much about it & If my memory serves me right ..it's a tad violent & unfair usage of women ... so thatz why i told you if jalal falls in love in the end it would have been a different twist & epic lovestory ... but anyways letsee how you'll take it further 😳

Edited by varshaakulkarni - 11 years ago

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SUMESHNI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#265

Awesome superb update

Plz plz continue soon

Tanx for the pm

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Taahir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#266

Wow just wow that was electric stunning

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aanchal_c

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Posted: 11 years ago

#267

"R U GAY MR MOHAMMAD"...that was it..i burst out laughing...it was so so interesting and funny at the same time...hope you will update soon.

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Indhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#268

OMG Mehek dear..🤗 🤗It's just just awesome..👏Jaldi update karna...😛wanna read fastly😃Sach mein bahut maza aaya...😊Liked the questions😆 and I liked how Jalal replied..😆Awesome dear 😃Pls update fast and do pm me😉

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Samanika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#269

Aww..Mehak!🤗 It was a fantastic update!

Unka first meeting was pretty embarrassing for Jo😳 but Jallu finds her pretty intriguing I guess!😳

Jallu was pretty frank in giving all the answers! But the last was really funny!😆 He starts asking Jo the ques!😆

I know it will take some time but jaldi GM wala update dena! This is really awesome!😃

BTW you have based this in the US like the original right?😉

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Mrs.KimJongin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#270

Originally posted by: -aady-
Mehkuuu, it wa superb! 😆
Thanks 🤗
I swear to god epic first chapter, I was smiling throughout! 😳
i knw right 😆
And I love you for making my Mr.Jalal so perfect! I love the way he keeps rubbing his lower lip, the way he speaks, the way he makes fun of her! ☺️
after all he's my Jalal 😳

I am in love with my Mr.Jalal 😆
😡what the