AKDHA FF ' Fifty shades of Jalal ' Thread one Ch 1-6

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chembi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#251

Wow nice story i read many ffs there they first expressed jalal hesitation and admiration about jo.But totally diferent in ur story.I loved this story continue soon😊

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harshita singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#252

Ohh loved their first meeting...
Poor jo 😆 ...
Plz plz plz update soon...no not soon... verryyy soon

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J2lover

@J2lover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#253

omg miss. mehek...its amazing!!!!!😃😃 i was waiting from yday for ur update...after its my FIFTY SHADES OF GREY version!!!!😳😳 n i must say...u nailed it...😉😉 n the bstest PART OF your STORY...YOU ARE WRITING IN FIRST PERSON!!!😳😳 it makes it more realistic...knowing the story thrugh my jodhu's pov...wow...nthng can be more blissful!!!!😉 loved that nervousness the young student was feeling!!!😆😆 i cauld imagine myself in her place...😉😉 i wish i could be!!!!☺️❤️...n THE HIGHLIGHT of the day is surely MY PRINCE...☺️☺️ i was imagining him throughout the update...relating him to my chris...but jallu is jallu...he's one of his kind!!!☺️☺️ n to pinpoint the blooper...😆😆 THAT GAY QUESTION!!!😆😆 OMG...IT WAS SOO SUDDEN!!!!!!😆😆😆 poor jo...she was in complete mess at that moment!!!!😆😆...all in all..i loved it dea...ur doing great!!!😃...update soon!!!!!😉

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Aadhya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#254

Mehkuuu, it wa superb! 😆

I swear to god epic first chapter, I was smiling throughout! 😳

And I love you for making my Mr.Jalal so perfect! I love the way he keeps rubbing his lower lip, the way he speaks, the way he makes fun of her! ☺️

I am in love with my Mr.Jalal 😆

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Mrs.KimJongin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#255

Originally posted by: -ambrosia-
Meri to hasi hi nahi ruk rahi🤣

pani pee le 🤣

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Mrs.KimJongin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#256

Originally posted by: RKholic
Amazing start👍🏼

thank you so so so much 🤗

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Mrs.KimJongin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: chembi
Wow nice story i read many ffs there they first expressed jalal hesitation and admiration about jo.But totally diferent in ur story.I loved this story continue soon😊

I'm so glad and feeling proudy that you liked my story and you felt that its different from others 😳🤗