JODHA-AKBAR my version,ff,part 24 updated - Page 27

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Posted: 11 years ago
Really a very beautiful love story...I just loved it...I read all the chapters once.because...as usual.this story also skipped my eyes...😡😡...fantastic updates...👏👏...continue it soon...now I am eagerly waiting for JJ meeting...😳😳
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Eagarly waiting for ja n jo first meeting

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lovely update dear... continue soon...
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lovely...finally jodha ki talash shuru...ab bani h more interesting...jaldi se milao na unhe ...
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res... Vow Aanchal U back... ab jaldi jaldi update dena iss FF ka...
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part 20
After resting for a few hours Jalal and Abdul wandered off into the jungle looking for AMBE MAA's temple and Shaguni bai...they had not carried a lot of food and water supplies with them hence had to depend on hunting...

ABDUL-JALAL BAHUT BHOOK LAG RAHI HAI,KYA KEHTE HO,SHIKAR KAR LIYA JAYE..

JALAL-HAAN ABDUL,AB TOH SHIKAR KARNA HI PADEGA,ITNA LAMBA RASTA TAYE KARNE KE BAAD KUCH ACCHA KHANA CAHIYE HUMEIN,AUR WOH SIRF SHIKAR SE HE MILEGA...

both abdul and jalal started looking for their prey...not too far off they found some disturbance in the bushes...taking an aim abdul shot his arrow and it hit their prey on its leg...the deer let out a violent scream and tried to limp its way back to its mother...jalal and abdul quietly followed it back to the herd and saw the deer lying down on the ground almost dead with its family hovering nearby...after seeing the 2 killers the deer herd started running away for their lives just one deer was left near the dying prey..the mother could not leave the child and sat next to it with tears in her eyes...jalal had never felt so guilty in his entire life as he felt that very second...he knew he could have had something else to quench his hunger but he decided to kill an innocent...he decided to leave the kid and the mother alone,he knew the kid was almost dead,there was nothing that he could do to save it...the moment he and abdul turned to leave,a knife came out of nowhere and hit abdul in his leg...abdul gave a cry and fell down from his horse...jalal was flabbergasted ..who could have hit his friend thus...he got down from his horse and went to abdul,placing his head on his lap...

JALAL-ABDUL,THEEK TOH HO TUM...

ABDUL-LAGTA HAI KUDRAT NE HUMEIN HAMARE JURM KI SAZA DEDI JALAL...

JALAL-AAISI BAATEIN MAT KARO...(shouting)KISS NAMURAD KI KARISTANI HAI YEH...KISNE HAMARE DOST PAR HUMLA KIYA HAI...

a hooded figure came out from the nearby trees and stood before jalal...dresses in overalls and having the face covered by a huge scarf with only the amber eyes being highlighted the figure addressed jalal.

"HUMNE KIYA HAI YEH...EK MASOOM KO MARNE KI SAZA HAI"

JALAL-GUSTAKH HIMMAT KAISE HUI TUMHARI...MANTE HAIN KI ISS HIRAN KO NAHI MARNA CAHIYE THA,MAGAR GALTI HO GAYI...KYA GALTI KI AAISI SAZA HOTI HAI"

"HAAN...TUMNE KABHI SUNA NAHI KYA,KHOON KE BADLE KHOON,AUR JEEVAN KE BADLE JEEVAN"

JALAL-TUMHE PATA BHI HAI TUM KISS SE MUKHATIB HO...HUM CHAEIN TO...

"CHAHEIN TOH KYA,HAMARA SAR KALAM KARVA SAKTE HAIN...PEHLE APNE DOST KO TO BACHAEYE...USSE KHUSH HONA CAHIYE KI HUMNE USKI JAAN BAKSH DI HAI...

the figure goes to the kid deer lying nearby and very gently takes out the arrow...jalal is surprised to see that the mother is not scared of the hooded figure and is even letting the person treat the kid...after bandaging the kids leg the figure turns to jalal and abdul

addressing abdul"AAJ KE BAAD TUM DUBARA APNI BHOOK MITANE KE LIYE AAISA KADAM NAHI UTHAOGE,HUMEIN ISS BAAT KA YAKEEN HAI...JO AGAR UTHANE KA SOCHA BHI TOH HUMEIN YAAD KAR LENA,KADAM APNE AAP PEECHE HAT JAYENGE"

the hooded figure is about to go leaving jalal and abdul there when jalal holds its hands and brings him near himself...

JALAL-HAMARE DOST KO AAISE ZAKHMI KARKE TUMHE LAGTA HAI HUM TUMHE JANE DENGE...TUMHE ISSKI SAZA MILEGE...

just when jalal is about to open the scarf off the face the person bites jalal's hand and pushes him back with a force and runs away from there...

ABDUL-JALAL AAP THEEK TOH HAI...

JALAL-HAAN ABDUL HUM BILKUL THEEK HAIN,PAR SHAYAD JO ABHI YAHAN THA USSE PEHCHANNE MEIN HUMNE GALTI KARDI..

ABDUL-MATLAB

JALAL-HUMEIN AAISA KYUN LAGTA HAI KI WOH AUR LADKI THI ABDUL.

ABDUL-NAHI JALAL USKA NISHANA KITNA TEZ HAI,EK LADKI KA NISHANA AAISA HONA, HUMEIN YAKEEN NAHI HOTA...

JALAL-WOH JO BHI HO ABDUL,MAGAR AB PEHLE TUMHE EK HAKIM KI ZAROORAT HAI...

jalal then decides to take abdul into the city in search of bairaam khan,the only hakim he knew in malwa...

...

A hooded figure moves stealthily inside the house ,it was late afternoon and the inhabitants were sleeping without a care of the world or so the figure thought ...moving carelessly towards her room Jamaima collided into a pot kept nearby and it crashed to the ground waking up bairam khan and salima...both ran out of their room and found jamaima standing there in overalls minus the scarf(she only had time to remove the scarf)

B.K-YEH KYA HUA...JAMAIMA AAP THEEK TOH HAIN NA...KAHAN THI AAP PURA DIN...BOL KE GAYI THI ABHI AATI HOON AUR KITNI DER LAGA DI...

JAMAIMA-WOH ABBU..HUM WOH

B.K-YEH KYA PEHNA HAI APNE...AAPKE KAPDE KAHAN HAIN...

JAMAIMA-YAHIN HAIN ABBU,DEKHIYE(she removes her overalls to show her clothes to her utterly outraged parents)

SALIMA-TOH YEH SAB KYA HAI,AB KYA KARISTANI KI HAI APNE...

JAMAIMA-KUCH BHI TOH NAHI AMMI JAAN...HUM TOH BAS...

SALIMA-HUM APKO ACCHE SE JANTE HAIN...KYA KIYA HAI SACH SACH BATAEYE...

JAMAIMA(with her head lowered)-BAS NAZNEEN KO DARANE GAYE THEE AMMI,USSNE HUMEIN BAHUT TANG KIYA THA NA...ISSLIYE...HUMEIN MUAFF KAR DIJEYE...

salima was outraged and bairam khan after a few minutes couldn't stop himself from laughing out loud...seeing him even jamaima started laughing...

B.K-AAP NAZNEEN KO DARANE GAYI THI...

JAMAIMA-HAAN ABBU...

B.K-TOH DARI KE NAHI...

SALIMA--YA ALLAH,KYA KAREIN HUM INN BAAP BETI KA...SUNIYE JI AAPKO SHARAM NAHI AATI,BETI JAWAAN HO GAYI HAI...AUR AAISE HARKATON PAR USSE DAANTNE KE LIYE AAP HASS RAHE HAIN...USSE BADHAVA DE RAHE HAIN...

B.K trying to control himself-KYA KAREIN BEGUM,YEH KAAM HE AAISE KARTI HAIN KI HUMEIN HASI AA JATI HAI...AB JANE BHI DIJEYE...BACCHI HAI...

SALIMA-NAHI AAJ ISS HUM SAZA ZAROOR DENGE(hold jamaima's ears and takes her to her room)-AAJ AAP APNE HOJRE MAIN HI RAHENGI...AB KAHIN NAHI JAYENGI,SAMJHI AAP...AUR KAL BHI...

JAMAIMA-KYA!!!!!!!!!KAL BHI AMMI...MAGAR AMMIJAAN

SALIMA-BAS CHUP AB...DEKHIYE JI HUM KEH DETE HAIN...JALDI SE EK ACCHA LADKA DHOONDIYE ISKE LIYE VARNA YEH HAMARE HAATON SE NIKAL JAYEGI...

B.K-AREY BEGUM,AAP...

SALIMA-BAS KEH DIYA NA...AB HUM ISSKE HAATH PEELE KARVA KAR HI CHODENGE...

JAMAIMA-AMMIJAAN...

SALIMA-NAHI AB EK AUR LAFZ NAHI...JO HUMNE KEH DIYA SO KEH DIYA...

salima goes from there and bairam khan and jamaima burst out laughing...


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Ja n jo 's first meeting..

Lovely update...
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First meeting was interesting.. continue soon dear...do pm
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Lovely update...

Ja-Jo first meeting...
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wonderful update... finally tumne akdha ki short meeting actually kahe toh blind date kara hi di...

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