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Wow intersting
finaly jodha jalal r nw cme face to face
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Chapter 19

I love Jalal's attitude JO HAMARA HAI HUM USSE PA KAR RAHTE HAIN...
Oh my god Rukaiya is so kamini... so hateful... so mean... so dirty...😡 poor man got killed... Finally Shaguni bai...
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vow... Superb!!! Jo and Ja finally first meeting... Aww so cute... I love the part when Jalal feel pain of deer.. and feel sorry for what they did... poor Abdul... and Poor Jalal... she bite him and run away... Can't wait for next part... when Jalal and Abdul get to BK... Superb👏👏👏
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part 21
jalal and abdul were wandering on their horses in the city,stopping to ask for directions to the hakim's house...

JALAL-BAS AB THODI DER AUR ABDUL,HUM JALD HI BAIRAM KHAN KE GHAR PAR HONGE...
(some more time abdul,we will reach bairam khans place soon)
ABDUL-HUM JANTE HAI JALAL,BAS YEH DARD AB ZAYADA BADH GAYA HAI...
(i know jalal just that this pain has increased now)

JALAL-CHINTA MAT KARO ABDUL...HUM TUMHE KUCH NAHI HONE DENGE...
(don't worry abdul,i won't let anything happen to you)

just then a sermon was being announced in the city of malwa...

GUARD-"NAGAR VASIYON KO TAKEET KI JATI HAI KI SHEHZADI RUQAIYYA KI SAWARI YAHAN SE GUZAR ,SAB APNE APNE GHARON MAIN CHALEIN JAYEIN...KOI BHI APNE GHARON SE JHANKNE KI GUSTAKHI NA KARE...GUSTAKHI KARNE WALE KO SAKHT SE SAKHT SAZA MILEGI..."
(people of the city are informed to go back to their houses,leaving all the work they r doing,bcoz the convoy of princess ruqaiyya is on its way..anyone who dares to take a glimpse of the princess will be punished)

all the people started running back to their homes...those who couldn't,shut down their shops and ran away to hide somewhere...

JALAL-LAGTA HAI YAHAN SE NIKALNA CAHIYE ABDUL...HUM NAHI CAHTE KI ADHAM KHAN KO HAMARE YAHAN HONE KA PATA CHALE...AGAR HUM PAKDE GAYE TOH BAHUT BADI MUSEEBAT HO SAKTI HAI SHEHZADI JODHA KO DHOONDNE MAIN...
(i think we should also go from here abdul,i don't want to get caught by adham khan.it would become very difficult for me to look for princess jodha)

ADBUL-CHALIYE JALAL,HUM BHI KAHIN CHAL KAR CHUP JATE HAIN...
(yes,jalal lets go from here)

but before they could ride their horses to a decent hideout,RUQAIYYA had spotted the,handsome stranger...ruqaiyya was passing by the street when her eyes landed on the handsome physique of a stranger...i've never seen this man in my life...such an awesome physique...what arms...how would it feel to be encaged in them...to have his lips on my body...for him to be inside me...RUQAIYYA had lusted after many a young men but today this stranger was taking her lust to a new high...I HAVE TO HAVE THIS MAN,NO MATTER WHAT...she knew what she had to do...and was ready to do anything...


after ruqaiyya's convoy had passed all the people again came out and went about their daily work...jalal had finally found the way to bairam khans house...he reached B.K's house and knocked on the door...

SALIMA-AB KAUN AA GAYA...KAHIN NAZNEEN KE AMMI ABBA TOH NAHI...AGAR JAMAIMA KI SHIKAYAT LE KAR AAYE HONGE,TOH ACCHA SABAK SIKHAONGI MAIN JAMAIMA KO...
(who is it,if its nazneen's parents come to complain about jamaima,i won't spare jamaima)

salima went to open the door and found 2 young men standing there...one had an injury on his leg and the other was supporting him...

JALAL-JI HUM HAKIM SAHIB,BAIRAM KHAN SE MILNE AAYE HAIN...
(we have come to meet bairam khan please)

SALIMA-AREY ANDAR AAEYE...HUM ABHI UNHE BULA DETE HAIN...
(please come in,ill let him know you are here)

salima went inside to tell B.K about the two men who had come to meet him,and that one of them was injured...B.K quickly came out to see who it was and was shocked to see the prince of the mughal sultanate there...

B.K-SHEHZADE AAP...AADAB...AUR YEH KYA...INKE PAIR PAR TOH BAHUT CHOT AAYI HAI...
(your highness,oh my god, and abdul...what happened to you...you are injured)

JALAL-JI...HUM INKA ILAAJ KARVANE AAYE HAIN...
(i have come here to get him treated)

jalal made abdul lie on the makeshift bed and B.K put all the necessary ointments on the injury after cleaning it...

B.K-INHE AB BAS KUCH DIN AARAM KI ZAROORAT HAI...AUR APNE PAIRON PAR ZOR MAT DALIYEGA...VARNA ZAKHM AUR NASOOR BAN JAYEGA...AB YEH BATAEYE SHEHZADE KI AAP MALWA MAIN KYA KAR RAHE HAIN...
(he just needs rest for a few days,and don't put pressure on your foot,it will worsen the injury,now tell me your highness.how come you are in malwa)

jalal dint want to reveal his intentions to anyone...not that he dint trust bairam khan but he felt it was too early to it...

JALAL-APNE JAB SE HUMEIN ADHAM KHAN KE BAARE MAIN KHABAR DI HAI,HUM KHUD YAHAN AA KAR USS NAMURAAD KO RANGE HAATN PAKADNA CAHTE THEE...ISLIYE HUMNE YEH BHES BADLA HAI...HUM CAHTE HAIN KI HAMARE YAHAN HONE KA PATA KISSI KO NA CHALE...
(from the moment you have told me about adham khan i decided to catch him red handed...and for this reason i haven't come as a prince but as a common person..i don't want anyone to know of my being here)

B.K-HUM SAMAJH GAYE SHEHZADE...AAP FIKAR MAT KEJEYE...AUR HAAN AAP EK KAAM KYUN NAHI KARTE,HAMARE GHAR PAR HI REH JAEYE...
(i understand,don't worry,and why don't you stay at my place)

JALAL-AAP KA BAHUT SHUKRIYA MAGAR HUM YAHAN NAHI REH SAKTE...HUM JO KAAM KARNE AAYE HAIN,USKE LIYE HUM KISSI AUR KO KHATRE MAIN NAHI DAAL SAKTE...AUR PHIR AAPKA PARIVAAR KYUN ISKE BEECH MAIN AAYE...
(thank you so much,but i don't want to put your family in any jeopardy)

salima had been in the kitchen till now,preparing some snacks for the guests...she came out and placed them in front of jalal and abdul...

B.K-BEGUM YEH (he looked at jalal and asked his permission to divulge his identity,but jalal refused) HAMARE DOST KE BETE HAIN...YAHAN SIKAR KARNE AAYE THEE...INKE DOST KE PAIR MAIN CHOT LAG GAYI TOH YAHAM HUMSE DAVA LAGVANE AA GAYE...
(this is my friends son,he has come for hunting and his friend got injured,so he got him here to get treated)

SALIMA-AAP SAB KO KUCH CAHIYE TOH HUMEIN ZAROOR BATA DIJEYEGA...TAB TAK HUM ANDAR JATE HAIN...THODA KAAM HAI....
(if you need anything please let me know,i am inside ,have some work)

as soon as salima went in jalal and abdul also took leave from bairam khan...B.K offered his assistance to look for a suitable shelter for jalal but was refused...jalal was adamant...no one would know of anything unless he had completed his mission...

B.K came and sat next to salima...seeing him a bit worried salima couldn't help but ask "AAP ITNE PARESHAN KYUN HAIN...SAB THEEK TOH HAI"
(why are you so worried,is everything fine?)


B.K "KUCH NAHI BEGUM"(he dint want to lie to her but had no choice) "HUM BAS JAMAIMA KE BAARE MAIN SOCH RAHE THEE"
(nothing dear,just was worried for jamaima)

SALIMA-AAP BAS SOCHTE RAHIYE...JO KARNA HAIN HUM KAR CHUKE HAIN...
(u keep thinking,i have already done what i had to do)

B.K-MATLAB?AAP KEHNA KYA CAHTI HAIN...
(what do u mean)

SALIMA-AAJ SHYAAM TAK AAPKO SAB PATA CHAL JAYEGA...
(u will come to know today evening itself)
...

back in malwa palace...

MAHAM-KAHAN HAI HAMARE DILL KA SUKOON...HAMARI LADLI SHEHZADI...RUQAIYYA SE KAHIYE KI HUM UNSE MILNA CAHTE HAIN....
(where is my darling grand daughter,tell ruqaiyya that i want to meet her)

a maid comes to tell ruqaiyya that her grandmother is called her...ruqaiyya is also very fond of her grandmother...maham has always favored her grand daughter even when adham wanted to punish her for her mischifes,it was maham did not allow adham to do that...now ruqaiyya even though loved her grandmother was totally out of her hand...but maham had a blindfold where ruqaiyya was concerned...

RUKU-DADI JAAN(comes running and huge maham) KAISI HAIN AAP,AAJ SUBAH SE HUMSE MILI NAHI...
(dear grandmother,how are you,why haven't you met me since morning)

MAHAM-THODE MASHROOF THEE HUM BETA...AAP BATAEYE,AAPKE MIZAAJ KAISE HAIN...HUMNE SUNA AAJ AAP MEHEL SE BAHAR GAYI THI...
(i was a little busy dear,but u tell me,i heard u went out of the place today)

RUKU(remembering the handsome stranger) HUM MEHEL KE BAHAR GAYE THEE,AUR BAHUT MAZA AAYA HUMEIN...
(yes i did ,and i enjoyed a lot)

MAHAM-SUBHAN ALLAH...AAP HASTE HUE KITNI PYAARI LAGTI HAIN,KAHIN KISSI KI NAZAR NA LAG JAYE AAPKO...
(u look so nice when u smile...i hope you keep smiling like this always)

RUKU-AGAR LAG BHI GAYI TOH AAP HAIN NA HAMARI NAZAR UTARNE KE LIYE...ACCHA AB HUM CHALTE HAIN DADIJAAN...HUMEIN THODA KAAM HAI(thinks to herself I NEED TO FIND OUT ABOUT SOMEONE)
(when you are here i will always smile grandmother...ok now i have to go,have some work.)
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nice update...
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OMG!!! ruq saw jalal.. continue soon & do pm...
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part 22
Jalal and Abdul set out towards the jungle in search of Shagunibai..Jalal knew that only Shagunibai can help him ...his only hope was finding Shagunibai...ever since he had heard of Jodha and had known of his relationship that had been formed long back,it had kept him restless...why does he not remember Jodha..he knew that Jodha was just a few months old but he was 3 years old,then how can he not remember her...he was cursing himself...if only he remembered her at least he would have tried to find out abt her sooner

Abdul was silently observing Jalal being immersed in his own thoughts...he can only be thinking of rajkumari Jodha,Abdul was certain of this..for finding out her whereabouts it was necessary to get to Shagunibai...

ABDUL-JALAL,AAP THEEK HAI?CHOT HUMEIN LAGI HAI MAGAR LAGTA HAI BECHAIN AAP HAIN..

JALAL-SACH KAHEIN ABDUL, HUM BECHAIN HAIN...REH REH KAR HUMEIN SHEHZADI JODHA KI YAAD AA RAHI HAI...HUM KAISE DHOONDEIN GE UNHE...AUR KYA UNHE KUCH BHI YAAD HOGA?

ABDUL-AAP ITNA ZAYADA MAT SOCHIYE JALAL...JAB ALLAH TALLAH NE YEH RAASTA DIKHAYA HAI TOH AAGE BHI WOHI RAH DIKHAYENGE...EK EK KADAM HUM SOCH SAMAJH KAR RAKH RAHE HAIN...

JALAL-BAS AB SHAGUNI BAI KA PATA MIL JAYE...KAB SE UNHE DHOONDNE KI KOSHISH KAR RAHE HAIN...

they came upon a pond and decided to rest there for sometime...after tieing their horses nearby they took a seat under a tree and soon fell asleep...a beautiful song filled the atmosphere with piousness and joy...the sounds of temple bells and shank could be heard for afar...it was the time for aarti...AARTI OF MAA KAALI...


Ambe Tu Hai Jagdambe Kali Jai Durga Khappar Wali.
Tere Hi Gun Gayen Bharti,
O Maiya Hum Sab Utare Teri Aarti.
Tere Bhakt Jano Pe Mata Bheer Padi Hai Bhari,
Danav Dal Par Toot Pado Maa Karke Sinh Savar,.
Sou Sou Sinho Se Hai Balshali Hai Dus Bhujaon Wali.
Dukhion Ke Dukhde Niwarti,
O Maiya Hum Sab Utare Teri Aarti.
Maan Bte Ka Hai Is Jug Main Bada Hi Nirmal Nata,
Poot Kapoot Sune Hain Par Na Mata Suni Kumata.
Sub Pe Karuna Darsane Wali Amrit Barsane Wali,
Dukhion Ke Dukhde Niwarti,
O Maiya Hum Sab Utare Teri Aarti.
Nahin Mangte Dhan Aur Daulat Na Chandi Na Sona,
Hum To Mange Tere Man Main Ek Chhota Sa Kona.
Sub Ki Bigdi Banane Wali Laaj Bachane Wali,
Sathiyon Ke Sat Ko Sanvarti,
O Maiya Hum Sab Utare Teri Aarti.

Jalal got up and looked around to find the source of such melodious and peace giving song...yeh zaroor aarti hai...humane badi ammi ko bhi yeh gate hue sun a hai...toh iska matlab hum apni mantel ke behad kareeb gain...magar yeh awaaz aa kahan se rahi hai...jalal was a little lost in trying to locate the place..he woke up abdul.

JALAL-ABDUL UTHO,YEH SUNO ...HUMEIN YAKEEN HAI YEH AARTI HI HAI...HUMEIN BADI AMMI KO KAI BAAR YEH GAATE HUA SUNA HAI...

ABDUL-MATLAB JALAL,HUM SHAYAD MANDIR KE BEHAD KAREEB HAIN..

JALAL-HAAN ABDUL,AB BAS HUMEIN MANDIR DHOONDNA HOGA...CHALO..

both got on their horses...and began to ride in the direction they thought the music was coming from...after some time they came to an immensely dense area...

ABDUL-JALAL YAHAN MANDIR KAISE HO SAKTA HAI...YEH JAGAH ..YAHAN PAR JUNGLE KITNA GHANA HAI..

JALAL-NAHI ABDUL,MANDIR YAHIN KAHIN HAI,KYUN YEH MANDIR AAJ TAK ADHAM KHAN TAK KO NAHI MILA...TOH ISKA MATLAB YEH ACCHE SE CHUPA HUA HAI...

ABDUL-HMMM...TUM THEEK KEH RAHE HO...HUMEIN THODA AAGE JAANA CAHIYE...SHAYAD KOI SURAK MIL JAYE...

both rode a little further only to come across one of the most beautiful structures they had seen...the temple was standing on intricately carved pillars on all sides,with huge rudraksh trees looming over it giving it the necessary shade and privacy...a huge gate which lead to the entrance was being guarded by tigers...jalal could not believe his eyes...the tigers where sitting right at the entrance of the gates keeping watch on all sides...

ABDUL-JALAL YEH HUM KYA DEKH RAHE HAIN..

JALAL-HUMEIN TOH YAKEN NAHI HOTA ABDUL...KYA YEH SACH HAI YA HAMARI AANKHON KA DHOKA...

ABDUL-AB HUM SHAGUNI BAI KO KAISE DHOONDEIN GE...HUM TOH ANDAR BHI NAHI JA SAKTE..

JALAL-NAHI ABDUL..HUMEIN JAANA HOGA...TUM YAHAIN TEHRO...HUM ANDAR JAYENGE...

ABDUL-NAHI JALAL,HUM AAPKO AAISE NAHI CHOD SAKTE...

JALAL-ABDUL YEH HAMARA HUKUM HAI...TUM YAHIN RAHOGE..AGAR KOI BHI GADBAD LAGE TOH KISSI KO MADAD KE LIYE LE AANA...

jalal then rode his horse to the entrance of the temple and got off...the tigers stood at attention...jalal was about to put his foot in when one of the tigers growled...jalal had no other choice but to take out his sword...seeing this both the tigers pounced on him...jalal tried his best to overcome them..he slashed at them..pushed them with all his strength..he was fighting with both the tigers at the same time...he was badly injured..his sword was still in his hands..the only thing between him and death...one last time he took a shot at the tigers and slashed with severely in one single stroke...the tigers fell on the ground and jalal after this could not hold himself still...just as he was about to fall he was caught in a pair of powerful arms...jalal lost his consciousness...

...

Jamaima woke up scared and sweating...she was really upset with her ammi and had fallen asleep after she had been send to her room...she had just seen a very unsettling dream...the same man that she had accosted just this morning,was lying in a pool of his blood...after being mauled by tigers...she could not get the picture out of her head...it had been horrific...she felt so restless...

"WHY DID I SEE THIS DREAM...DOES THIS MEAN THAT THE MAN IS IN DANGER...SHOULD I GO TO FIND HIM..BUT WHERE DO I FIND HIM...YA ALLAH HAMARI MADAD KARO..HUMEIN SUKOON BAKSHO MERE MAULA"

Jamaima heard salima calling her...

JAMAIMA-JI AMMI...

SALIMA-BETA...AAJ SHYAM KO HUM CAHTE HAIN KI AAP ACCHE SE TAYAAR HO JAYEIN..

JAMAIMA-KYUN AMMI...HUM KAHIN JA RAHE HAIN KYA...

SALIMA-NAHI BETA,KOI AA RAHA HAI...

B.K-AREY AB TOH BATA DIJEYE KI KAUN AA RAHA HAI BEGUM...

SALIMA-HUMEIN TABASSUM KO NAYOTA DIYA HAI...

B.K-AREY KAUN...WOH JO BAAR BAAR APNE BETE KA RISHTA LEKAR HUMARE YAHAN AA JATI HAI...

SALIMA-HAAM VAHI...LEKIN ISS BARR HUMNE KHUD UNHE BULAYA HAI...

JAMAIMA-LEKIN KYUN AMMI JAAN.

SALIM-TUMHARE RISHTE KI BAAT KARNE KE LIYE JAMAIMA...

...

ruqaiyya had asked her best spy to find out about the handsome stranger she had seen in the market place...abdul and jalal had been followed to bairam khans house and before they had left for the jungle ruqaiyyas spy had been summoned by ruqaiyya to know of the stranger ,hence he only knew of them being at bairam khans house...ruqaiyya decided it was time to call bairam khan to heal her ailment...her desperation to get information abt the stranger...Bairam Khan had to be summoned...
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nice update 👏
jalal fighting with tigers was awesome
Edited by sw123 - 10 years ago
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Aanchal, awesome update!
Will Jalal and Jodha finally come face to face?
Update soon!😃

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