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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice update... yes i can underztans...still u updated its more than enough.. leave a PM wenever u update next time... take care... will wait for ur PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
this is my first comment...
this is just an outstanding story...
cute lovestory🥱
ab un dono ko mila bhi dijiye...
update the next part soon and plz pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg!!! update kab hua... muje pata nahi tha... vow... shaguni bai ki Jai ho... He is going to ask Shagunibai... vow... Soon Jalal and Jodha milenge... Can't wait... Awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
i have not been sending out pm's..i barely get time to update...sorry..who all r interested in my story do keep a look out for updates plz.thanks once again.
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Posted: 11 years ago
This is the best FF i have ever read aanchal!!!!!!! Pls do write more!👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
When U get chance please update and request pm me if possible...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome😃...
but plsss update soon😭😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 19

AMER

RB-YEH KYA KEH RAHE HO JALAL,TUM JODHA KO DHOONDNE JAOGE..

JALAL-HAAN BADE ABBU,SHAGUNI BAI KI KHABAR MILTE HE HUMNE YEH TAI KAR LIYA THA..AAPKO KOI AAITRAAZ TOH NAHI HAI NA

RB(with tears in his eyes)-KIS PITA KO PRASANTA NAHI HOGI KI KOI USKI BETI KE BAARE MAIN ITNA CHINTIT HAI...PARANTU BETA TUM USSE DHOONDOGE KAISE..

JALAL-HUM SHAGUNI BAI SE MILNE JAYENGE...

RB-TUM ADHAM KHAN KE ILAAKE MAIN JAOGE...SHAGUNI BAI SE MILOGE AUR KAHIN ADHAM KO PATA CHAL GAYA KI USKE RAJYE MAIN EK RAJVANSHI RAJKUMARI REHTI HAI TOH WOH USSE ZINDA NAHI CHODEGA..

JALAL-AAP CHINTA MAT KARIYE BADE ABBU,HUM AAM AADMI BAN KAR JAYENGE...JODHA KA PATA LAGANE KE LIYE AUR APNE ABBU KO NUKSAAN POHCHANE WALE KA PATA LAGANE KE LIYE HUM KISSI BHI HADH TAK JA SAKTE HAIN...

RB-ISHWAR TUMHARI RAKSHA KARE JALAL,EK PITA KA AASHIRWAAD TUMHARE SAATH HAI..

next day before sunrise jalal set off for malwa...he had only taken his best friend abdul along with him..abdul was also proficient in warfare and martial arts and was an amazing archer...he had been with jalal since the age of 5..his father was a soldier in humayun's army and had died saving humayun's life..humayun was so grateful to abdul's family that he had as good as adopted abdul...abduls mother stayed in the palace and was a close to and a confidant of hamida bano...humayun took care of her as his own sister...jalal had already told abdul everything about jodha and also his 2 missions at Malwa...

ON THE WAY TO MALWA...ON THE HORSE BACK

ABDUL-TOH SHEHZADE APNE HONE WALI DULHAN KA PATA LAGANE JA RAHE HAIN...

JALAL(smirks)-TUM TOH JANTE HE HO,JO HAMARA HAI HUM USSE PA KAR RAHTE HAIN...

ABDUL-ISS LIYE AAJ TAK TUMNE KISSI AUR SHEHZADI KO APNE NAZDEEK AANE NAHI DIYA...

JALAL-NAHI,HUMEIN TOH JODHA KE BAARE MAIN ABHI PATA CHALA HAI,MAGAR HUMNE PEHLE HI SOCH LIYA THA...JISSE NIKAAH KARENGE USSI KE HO KAR RAHENGE...

ABDUL-AUR AGAR TUMHE KISSI AUR SE MOHABAAT HO GAYI TOH..

JALAL-TOH ISS DILL KO SEENE SE ALAG KAR DENGE...HAMARA VADA HAMARE LIYE SABSE AHEMIYAT RAKHTA HAI...

ABDUL-MAGAR AGAR TUMHE JODHA PASAND NAHI AAYI TOH?

JALAL-KAHA NA ABDUL,JO CHEEZ HAMARI HOTI HAI WOH HUMEIN DILLO JAAN SE AZIZ HOTI HAI AUR PHIR YEH TOH HAMARI DULHAN KA SAWAAL HAI...USSE TOH HUM KABKA APNE DILL MEIN BASA CHUKE HAIN...

ABDUL-MAGAR JALAL,AGAR JODHA KO KOI AUR PASAND HOGA TOH...

JALAL(with an evil face)-throws his dagger at a nearby rock and slices it into 2 pieces...USS NAMURAD KA YEH HI HASR KARENGE HUM JISNE HAMARI BEGUM KI TARAF DEKHA BHI...

ABDUL-HUMEIN TOH QAYAMAT KE AASAR NAZAR AA RAHE HAIN JALAL...

JALAL-AUR HUMEIN MOHABAAT KE...

Abdul and Jalal continue their journey and in a weeks time reach the outskirts of Malwa...

IN THE MEANTIME...MALWA PALACE...

A beautiful room is decorated with candels and incense...a big round bed right in the middle of the room with sheer drapes covering it and a beautiful and dainty doll like figure is curled up on the bed...its going to be daybreak very soon and the curled up figure needs to do some urgent work...get her playboy out of bed...Ruqaiyya turns around and gazes at the beautiful man before her...in nothing but a blanket covering him...she knows her bandis will be coming in soon to wake her up hence she needs to wake up her bed partner and send him on his way...

RUK(shaking his shoulders)-UTHO...OHO KYA NAAM HAI ISKA...AFZAL...NAHI KABIR...HAAN KABIR...UTHO KABIR.

KABIR(wakes up from his deep slumber)-SHEHZADI RUQAIYYA,HUMEIN MUAFF KIJEYEGA

RUK-KOI BAAT NAHI...AB TUMHE JANA CAHIYE...KISSI NE DEKH LIYA TOH QAYAMAT HO JAYEGI...

KABIR(gets up and wears his clothes,while ruku his admiring his physique)-HUM CHALTE HAIN SHEHZADI...

RUK(covering herself with a blanket,goes near him)-RUKO..(she takes her hands to his neck and brings down his lips on hers...kissing him for a long time)...AB JAO...YEH RAAT HUMEIN HAMESHA YAAD RAHEGI KABIR...

KABIR-HUMEIN BHI SHEHZADI(he goes from there)...

the next morning kabirs body was found near the stables with a knife through his heart...the kingdom of malwa not only had a corrupt and insane king and queen mother but also a nymphomaniac princess...ruqaiyya by the time she had turned 12 had been fully aware of what happens between a man and woman behind closed doors...and she did not mind experimenting...be it the stable boys or handymen...she knew if she tried to sleep with any of the royal princes she would get into trouble so her boy toys were handsome poor men who would do anything to get in the good books of the royal princess...little did they know by sleeping with her they were giving away their lives to her...ruqaiyya did not like being caught..she knew is this ever happened her father would kill her so to save her skin she used to get her lovers killed by her trusted servant Zakira,a dqarf warrior..who would think that such a small person would have the precision to execute a kill...once ruqaiyya grew tired of her man of the season she would get a dagger put through his heart...end of story...

ruqaiyya also had another weakness...BEAUTY...she wanted to be the most beautiful princess alive and till now she believed that only she was the most beautiful princess ever...

ZAKIRA-HUZOOR AAJ AAP BAHUT KHOOBSURAT LAG RAHI HAIN...

RUK-KYUN NA LAGEIN...YEH NIKHAAR TOH KAL RAAT KI KARAMAT KA HAI...

ZAKIRA(blushing a bit)-HUZOOR AAPSE ZAYADA KHOOBSURAT TOH KOI HO HI NAHI SAKTA...

RUK-HUMSE ZAYADA KHOOBSURAT KOI SHEHZADI NA HI HO TOH ACCHA HAI VARNA...

ZAKIRA-VARNA HUM USKA KAAM TAMAAN KAR DENGE YEHINA...

RUK-TUM HUMEIN KITNI ACCHE SE JANTI HO ZAKIRA,TABHI TOH HUM TUMHE APNE ITNE KAREEB RAKHTE HAIN...

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OUTSKIRTS OF MALWA...

ABDUL-JALAL HUMEIN YAHAN KHEEMA LAGA LENA CAHIYE...THODI DER AARAM KARNE KE BAAD HUM SHAGUNI BAI KO DHOONDNE NIKLENGE...

JALAL-TUM THEEK KEH RAHE HO...

...

MALWA JUNGLE,AMBE MAA TEMPLE...

Shaguni bai was chanting away shloks and bhajans all praising her beloved Ambe Maa..."TAREEK BADALNE WAALI HAI MAA,ITIHAAS BANNE WALA HAI...JISKI RACHNA TUMNE ITNE VARSH PEHLE KI THI AB WOH HONI GHATNE JA RAHI HAI...DO JEEVAN EK DOR MAIN BANDH JAYENENGE...SACH SAMNE AANE WALA HAI...SABKI RAKHSHA KARNA MAA...JAI MAA BHAVANI"

ok guys sorry for the delayed update...i was really busy pms baad main dungi...now ill try to be more regular...hope u guys like it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
This is a lovely story.😊

Do update soon. And add me in your PM list if possible.😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww what a chapter awesome 😆 😉
Plz do pm me if possible 😳

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