JODHA-AKBAR my version,ff,part 24 updated - Page 29

NICE UPDATE AAACHAL...JALLU FIGHT WITH TIGERS AND JO DREAMS OF JA...SUPERBB PART YAAR...

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part 23

Jalal slowly opened his eyes and looked at his surroundings...a small cottage with thatched roof...a pot of water lying nearby on a stool and him lying o a jute cot...that was all Jalal could make out...his whole body was aching...the scratches from the tigers claws were paining like crazy yet he could feel something soothing them...he looked at his body only to find it all covered up with a green paste...he figured that was what was giving him some relief..

JALAL- HUM YAHAN KAISE AAYE...KAUN LAYA HOGA HUMEIN YAHAN?

he tried to get up to take some water but lost his balance again and fell into the arms of another man..Jalal looked up to find a kind looking middle aged man in front of him..the man made Jalal lie down on the bed again and gave him water ..

JALAL- HUMEIN YAHAN KAUN LAYA HAI?

MAN- HUM LAAYE HAIN AAPKO YAHAN SHEHZADE JALLALUDIN MOHAMMAD.

JALAL-AAP...AAP HAMARA NAAM KAISE JANTE HAIN...

MAN-HUM APKE BAARE MAIN SAB JAANTE HAIN SHEHZADE...YEH BHI KI AAP YAHAN KISSE MILNE AAYE HAIN...

JALAL-AAP KAUN HAIN?

MAN-HUM...HUM HAIN PANDIT BHEEMSEN...AUR YEH DEVI MAA KA MANDIR HAMARE HI PARIVAAR KI DHAROVAR HAI...

JALAL-AUR WOH BAAG JO MANDIR KI RAKHWAALI KARTE HAIN..WOH?

PANDITJI-HAMARE HI YAHAN PALE BADDE HAIN...HAMARE AUR HAMARE MANDIR KI RAKSHA KARNE KE LIYE...

JALAL-PAR HUMNE UNHE MAAR DALA...KYUNKI UNHONE HUM PAR HAMALA KIYA..

Pandit Bheemsen gave Jalal a smirk...

JALAL-HUMEIN SHAGUNI BAI SE MILNA HAI...

PANDITJI-WOH ITNI JALDI KISSI SE NAHI MILTI SHEHZADE...AUR PHIR TOH AAJ AAMAVAS KI RAAT HAI...AAJ TOH MAA KALI KI POOJA LAMBI CHALEGI...

JALAL-NAHI...HAMARA UNSE MILNA BAHUT ZAYADA ZAROORI HAI...

PANDITJI-THEEK HAI,HUM APKO UNKE MILNE KA SAMAY AUR STHAN BATA DETE HAIN...AAP THEEK RAAT KE 9 BAJE VAHAN POOHCH JAAEYEGA...MAGAR DHYAAN RAHE..JAB TAB WOH NA BULAYEIN UNKE SAAMNE KUCH MAT BOLNA SHEHZADE...

after pandit bheemsen ji left ,jalal fell back on the bed and started wondering what his life was and what had become of it now...suddenly he remembered someone...ABDUL...

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At B.K and Salimas house...

B.K-YEH AAPNE KYA KIYA BEGUM...AAP JANTI BHI HAIN KYA HO SAKTA HAI...

SALIMA-TOH KYA HUA...DEKHIYE BHALE HI HUMNE JAMAIMA KO PALA HO,MAGAR HUM YEH SACH NAHI BHOOL SAKTE KI WOH KAHAN SE AAYI HAI...

B.K-MAGAR YEH LADKA,SURYABHAN...AADHA HINDU HAI...

SALIMA-HAAN...AUR KYA JAMAIMA PURI MUSALMAAN HAI?AAP SAMAJH KYUN NAHI RAHE HAIN...JAMAIMA KI UMAR KI LADKIYON KA KAB KA NIKAAH HO CHUKA HAI...HUM KAB TAK APNI BETI KO APNE GHAR PAR RAKHENGE...

B.K- AUR AGAIR ADHAM KHAN KO PATA CHAL GAYA KI UNKE MULAZIN KI BETI KI SHAADI EK AAISE LADKE SE HO RAHI HAI JISKA BAAP HINDU THA TAB...TUM JANTI NAHI KYA USSE HINDUON SE KITNI NAFRAT HAI...

SALIMA- JANTE HAIN...MAGAR KAISE PATA CHALEGA UNHE...SURYABHAN KI AMMI JAAN TOH MUSALMAAN HAI NA...UNHONE EK HINDU SE NIKAAH KIYA JISKI UNHE SAZA MIL CHUKI HAI...UNKE SHAUHAR KA QATAL HO GAYA BAHUT PEHLE...YEH LADKA SIRF NAAM KA HINDU HAI MAGAR...AB SIRF ISKI AMMI REHTI HAI ESKE SAATH...AAP ITNI CHINTA KYUN KAR RAHE HAIN...EK BAAR UNSE MIL TOH LIJEYE...

just then they hear a knock on their door and salima goes to welcome her guests...standing at her door is her good friend Nazeema with her son Suryabhan...Suryabhan is a handsome fellow B.K notes when Salima welcomes them into their home...he is tall,has a good built and a decent demeanor...he seems to be a good person..with a kind face and fascinating grey eyes...

NAZEEMA- SHUKRIYA SALIMA BEGUM...KAISE HI AAP...AUR BHAISAAB AAP KAISE HAIN...

SALIMA- HUM THEEK HAIN NAZEEMA BEGUM,SHUKRIYA...YEH AAPKA BETA HAI NA...SURYABHAN...KITNA BADA HO GAYA HAI...

NAZEEMA- BAS ALLAH KA KARAM HAI...

B.K- AAEYE BAITHEYE...

SALIMA- HUM ABHI JAMAIMA KO BULATE HAIN...

Salima goes to get Jamaima from her room where she had been sulking ever since she got to know that her mother had called someone for her marriage...

JAMAIMA- YEH AMMI SAMAJHTI KYUN NAHI HAIN...HUM ABHI NIKAAH NAHI KARNA CAHTE...MAGAR AMMI KO PATA NAHI KISS BAAT KI ITNI JALDI PADI HAI...

SALIMA(comes inside jamaima's room)- CHALO BETA ,NEECHA CHALO...NAZEEMA BEGUM AUR UNKA BETA SHARYABHAN AA CHUKE HAIN...

JAMAIMA- AMMI JAAN HUM ABHI NIKAAH NAHI KARNA CAHTE...

SALIMA- BAS JAMAIMA,HUMNE JO EK BAAR KEH DIYA SO KEH DIYA...AB AGAR AAP NEECHE NAHI AAYI TOH AAPKO HAMARA MARA MOOH DEKHNA HOGA...

Jamaima had no choice ...she wore the elaborate pink color mughal style ghaghra chili Salima got for her and came down to meet the guests...

SALIMA- NAZEEMA YEH HAIN HAMARI BETI JAMAINA...JAMAIMA YEH HAI NAZEEMA BEGUM AUR UNKE BETE SURYABHAN...

Jamaima who was least interested in meeting anyone did an ungraceful adab to her guests...but then her amber eyes met with a set of grey ones and she got lost in them...

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Jalal was standing at the place Pandit Bheensen had told him about...he did not know what to expect but what he saw left him shocked and confused...the tigers he had managed to slain just this morning were again standing right in front of the temple steps that Jalal had to go to...

JALAL-YA KHUDA YEH KAISI MAYA HAI TERI...AAJ SUBAH HI TOH HUMNE INN BAAHGON KA QATL KIYA THA PHIR YEH YAHAN...

this time the tigers did not stop jalal from entering the temple...they moved back from the entrance and jalal without wasting any time went in...the moment he stepped in all his eyes encountered was smoke...and a pleasant fragrance...he could hear some chants going on...

Om aim hrim klim camundayai vicche svaha

Kreem Kreem Kreem Hoom Hoom Hreem Hreem Dakshina Kaalike Kreem Kreem Kreem Hoom Hoom Hreem Hreem Swaahaa"

through all the smoke he could make out a distant figure,the head bent right in front of the holy fire and chanting away the mantras...the woman was wearing a discolored and faded robe of orange...had long chains of rudraksh in her neck and wrists...her hair were open and a long red tilak on her forehead...her eyes were closed and the aura around her was like a concentration of energy...jalal had never seen anything so divine before...it seemed like god was there right before him...all around he could also make out different figurines of goddess kali...and the woman right in the middle totally unaware of anyone...so engrossed in her prayer jalal was about to call out to her but suddenly remembered what Pandit Bheemsen had told him...an hour passed but it seemed that the woman's prayers would not stop any moment soon.Jalal had to meet shaguni bai...has Pandit Bheemsen sent me to a wrong place...i need to go and find out...was Jalal was about to step out he heard his name being called...

WOMAN- SHEHZADE JALLALUDIN...KAHAN JA RAHE HAIN...

JALAL- AAP BHI HUMEIN JANTI HAIN...LAGTA HAI YAHAN SAB HUMEIN JANTE HAIN...SIRF HUMEIN HI NAHI PATA KI HUM KISSE BAAT KAR RAHE HAIN...AAP HAIN KAUN?

WOMAN- AAP HUMEIN NAHI JANTE SHEHZADE LEKIN HUM APKO TAB SE JANTE HAIN JAB AAP PAIDA HUE THE..HUM APKO BHI JANTE HAIN AUR AAPKE WALEDEIN KO BHI...SHEHENSHAH HUMAYUN AUR HAMEEDA BEGUM...

JALAL- LEKIN AAP HUM SAB KO KAISE JANTI HAIN...AAP HAIN KAUN?

WOMAN- AAP JANTE HAIN AAPKA NAAM AMEER KI MAHARANI NE RAKHA THA...AUR AMEER KE MAHARAJ KITNA PRASANN HUE THEE AAPKE JANM PAR...

JALAL- HUM YEH SAB JANTE HAIN...LEKIN AAP HAMARE SAWAALON KA JAWAAB KYUN NAHI DE RAHI HAIN...KAUN HAIN AAP?

WOMAN- SHEHZADE JALLALUDIN MOHAMMAD,HINDUSTAN KE HONE WAALE SHEHENSHAH...AAISA SHEHENSHAH JISKA MUQABALA KOI NAHI KAR SAKEGA...JO ITNA PRAKRAMI HOGA KI USKE SHATRU KAMPEGE USSE...ITNA SHURVEER KI USKE WAALEDEIN KO NAAZ HOGA US PAR AUR EK AAISA SHEHENSHAH JISKI JEEVAN SAATHI HOGI EK HINDU RAJVANSHI...AMER KI SHEHZADI JODHA...

JALAL IS SHOCKED,HOW DOES THIS WOMAN KNOW ALL THIS...YEH SAB TOH SHAGUNI BAI NE KAHA THA NA..TOH INHE YEH SAB KAISE PATA,KYA YEHI HAIN SHAGUNI BAI.

WOMAN-HAAN SHEHZADE (the woman finally opens her eyes and jalal can see clarity burnig thru them).HUM HAIN WOHI SHAGUNI BAI JISSE AAP DHOOND RAHE HAIN.

ok guys here is chapter 23...i hope u like it...it would be nice if along with likes i get some comments too...

Aanchal awesome update ...so jodha ko love at first sight wala feeling aya after seeing surya😆

Originally posted by: indudolai

Aanchal awesome update ...so jodha ko love at first sight wala feeling aya after seeing surya😆

HAPPY DIWALI AND HAPPY NEW YEAR AACHAL