~JJKN POETRY CONTEST 2006~ - Page 5

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Originally posted by: Mauritian

jassi the ordinary
and armaan the charming
sat together in gulmohur
with our heart all warming. 😳

they started as boss and secy
and our hearts were all a crying
because jassi was in love
and armaan not knowing. 😭

it went on this way
till one day without warning
armaan fell in love with her
but she was too hurting...

she took off for far lands
and returned beautiful and not caring
she wanted revenge she said
and we had our hair a tearing. 😡

and so it carried on
till they eventually came to marrying
but on the wedding night they got mad again
and she again went back to running 🤢

then t and d led us on a trip
thru, nainital and the pink thing
till they ran out of time
and we ran out of swearing... 😡

now its all done with
and jjkn has long been ending
but we are still on this forum
with dreams of janda ever continuing... 😛

Hey!!! That one was one awesome poem coming from a Chemistry teacher! But then why am I so surprised, if you wouldn't know what chemistry is who else would👏

Originally posted by: laddoo598

No no! Go on Jassi di! Cant wait for your poems! I will vote for yours! 😉

😆no laddoo598, dont vote, this is butchering of poor nursery rhymes,i should be hanged for playing with childrens poems 😡, i was just writing for our alls laughs 😉

Originally posted by: jassisuri

want more 😃 i have made one on ss but that is dangerous ground, give me green signal, and i will write

go on jassi ji😉

your poem 'yes papa' was perfect😆

my hand at limericks. but it is getting too long. anybody welcome to complete it or at least carry on 😛

Jassi, the young secy at Gulmohur
Did not take long to discover
That she had an ugly face,
With spectacles and brace….
And that did not earn her a lover!!

Armaan, who loved playing her boss,
Always angry, always so cross,
He pushed her around
With irritation and frown
Till one day it was too late to find out his loss.

She had loved him nonetheless,
Always forgave him for the excess
But he was far too gone
And she was just a pawn,
For him business was a game of chess.

When she found out she was stricken.
Her heart uncomprehending and broken
So she left them behind,
To free her mind
And her pure love still unspoken

She came back one day with a makeover,
And it took them forever to discover,
That the plane Jane
Had turned into a flame
And was going to devour them with her anger….

👏 mauritian ,it is great, 😳 now for her to discover armaans love

Originally posted by: Mauritian

go on jassi ji😉

your poem 'yes papa' was perfect😆

ok, by evening i will write it down, 😛

here goes, on lines of baa baa black sheep ,

black hater, black hater, are u a fool 😡
no js,no js i have 3 reasons to be cool 😕
one i had a white boyfriend 😉
two i married a white husband 😛
three i always wear white pants 😉

it is only for fun, no offense to anyone

i wanted to write more,but it would have made ss lovers sore

Originally posted by: jassisuri

here goes, on lines of baa baa black sheep ,

black hater, black hater, are u a fool 😡
no js,no js i have 3 reasons to be cool 😕
one i had a white boyfriend 😉
two i married a white husband 😛
three i always wear white pants 😉

it is only for fun, no offense to anyone

i wanted to write more,but it would have made ss lovers sore

Its awesome Jassi di!👏

Originally posted by: Mauritian

my hand at limericks. but it is getting too long. anybody welcome to complete it or at least carry on 😛

Jassi, the young secy at Gulmohur
Did not take long to discover
That she had an ugly face,
With spectacles and brace….
And that did not earn her a lover!!

Armaan, who loved playing her boss,
Always angry, always so cross,
He pushed her around
With irritation and frown
Till one day it was too late to find out his loss.

She had loved him nonetheless,
Always forgave him for the excess
But he was far too gone
And she was just a pawn,
For him business was a game of chess.

When she found out she was stricken.
Her heart uncomprehending and broken
So she left them behind,
To free her mind
And her pure love still unspoken

She came back one day with a makeover,
And it took them forever to discover,
That the plane Jane
Had turned into a flame
And was going to devour them with her anger….

Its the best poem ever!👏

My entry 😃

An ugly duckling named Jassi,
was organized and never messy,
stacking Gulmohur files,
until she ran miles and miles,
to become model with a dazzling smile.

When she came back,
Armaan was smacked,
in the face,
because he never knew her apart from her buck teeth and brace.

All was well,
as the two lovers fell,
in love,
like two white doves.

Along came marriage,
but no golden carriage.
As the bride fled before then,
to the wonderful nanitial,
away from bebe's tadka daal.

Revenge was her aim,
from the man who once saw her as plain Jane.
Enemies separated the two,
as nothing but hatred brew.

Then came the Goa,
And we all cried "aloha",
because jassi and armaan finally met,
and their 'ahem ahem' bust out TV sets.

Life was a dream,
like fresh strawberries dipped in thick cream.
Until the Viddhi crap,
and there was no turning back,
for our beloved show,
which has finished at the mo-