(ArHi) For The First Time: OS 2, 3 & 4, pg 21 (26/11/2015)

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sk2405

@sk2405

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#151

OS 2:

There was something about this OS that I absolutely loved, it probably was Khushi's 'I-give-back-as-good-as-i-get-if-not-better' attitude. She was a total stunner in this OS. When in the beginning she offered a glass of milk to him, I wondered if she was actually the docile types but then Utha Ghungat and nikli Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada. Every word she spoke had a ring of truth to it. I am sute Mr.Playboy wilk have a tough time handling this fiery Lucknow Express.

There's this lovely senior of mine who's gotten married recently and is facing something similar. Guess I should make her read this.

OS 3:

Ye kya tha Zee! I couldn't stop laughing. But this complete OS was so true. Things like these keep hapenning, don't they! Manorama and Mahinder, so much for thinking it were Arnav and Khushi getting hitched.

Total Ramanchi!! 😃

OS 4:

Oh what a lovely way of showing their differences and then the way they mended them. I am glad she spoke all about her hurt earlier because he might have continued taking her for granted otherwise. It's good she got a firsthand chance to see her husband's true outlook towards her people and her society because she would have continued to doubt his intentions otherwise. The most cutest part was the ending. It seemed like things had fallen in a complete circle from him apologising to her to Khushi doing the same later. Beautifully written!

I loved the 2nd one the most!! 😊

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Jay

@Sharaa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#152

Lazy,plz do other part for OS 2...

We really need our Arnavji to sensible least...

I want him to repent ...bas

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BroknAngel

@BroknAngel

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#153

Glad u didn't stop writing. I would love to knw hw arnav n khushi wil live without killing each odr in d frst story... al r awesome

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Disha

@dishashah4176

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#154

Well I liked all of them and can't really choose from them.

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Bavari

@Bavari

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#155

All 4 are awesome. Thx for the PM.

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vj2102

@vj2102

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#156

Loved loved loved every bit of this. Hope we get to read more soon

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

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Posted: 9 years ago

#157

I knew Khushi won't be a village belle like Arnav was thinking her to be. Good that she showed him his place. Lazy how could you do this? How can you make Arnav so worthless and downright disgusting so as to consider a wife as his property & puppet? I can understand a person getting physical with their partner without emotions but they at least behave well and not in inhuman way like him. I just hated him so much here. He actually gave the vibes of a rapist here, the only saving grace was that he didn't try to force himself on her which he could have done unless Khushi was a pro at Martial arts. But I didn't like it. ArHi have to be hero. I don't know about their firsts, but it was my first to feel such disliking towards Arnav. He is my favorite, how can you do this to me? 😭 You better redeem him. I don't know how. You gotta do something about it. Write a separate SS/ OS for this one. It has left me with such a heavy heart.

Coming to the second OS - it was too cute. Obviously you wanted me to think that ArHi were the prospective partners and I fell for it too. Khushi hiding her face in Garima's neck made me say "which grown up even if shy behaves like this? and then you mentioned their age and I was like What the!! I knew there would be something more than what I'm thinking and there it was.😆 Coming to the chaanta laga haye laga😆 part - I was also smiling wickedly like Khushi. It felt like poetic justice after the first OS. There Arnav as such a jerk he deserved some slaps.😉 BTW I won't mind reading a story about these cutesy kids befriending each other and falling in love.😃

Third OS - It reminded me of the show for obvious reasons and similarities. I felt sad for both of them here. They are in love but still hurt. Khushi's words proved that she might be in love with him, might have forgiven Arnav but she has not healed from the hurt he caused her by marrying her forcefully. The good thing is how easily he understood what had hurt her more and he worked exactly on that to heal her with his actions and words. 😊

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#158

OS 4

This one is my fav... i love Loovveee LOOVVVEEEDD it... i dunno why, par mujhe show background OS bohot zyada achha lagta hai... probably bcz i can see the IPK wala Arnav-Khushi in such case, nd get a glimpse of their lives... khushi's anger was justified, so was the reason behind his not coming... loved the fact he didn't tried to give excuses, any man would do that... rather he did his best to make upto it... gosh, this man is sooo cute... i love him, dammit.

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#159

OS 3

Nd this one is the cutest... bechare chote... itni so umar mei hi got slapped nd rejected by a girl... Awwweee... nd Zehra you are as always succeed to make us interpret it all wrong at first... congratulations... i want many more of aise cute ones.

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#160

OS 2

For a jerk like Arnav, someone like khushi was much needed... ameer baap k bighde huya aulat... thats what it says naa... i wish i could've slapped him... its so good to see how strong khushi is, usse aapna aukat dekha di... loved it.