(ArHi) For The First Time: OS 2, 3 & 4, pg 21 (26/11/2015)

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mahrusweety

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

first it reallyfeeling amazing to read story on arshi
which was their first.
thanks for starting it.
welcome back on IF.
was missing ur work.
part 1
was fabulously awesome
the feeling of dread and terror was amazing
loved it

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

part 2
that was super fantastic
arnav first tym rejection from a village girl khushi
that was awesome
really enjoyed it

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mahrusweety

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

part three
it was like arnav and khushi rishta preperations were in full swing by garima
and i was scratching mmy mind to think of the thing which will happen as fir first tym with any of them.
but arshi being kids and arnav cheek puffed by a girl hand was really first
loved it

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mahrusweety

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

love the part 4
beautiful and awesome os

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tina_1234

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Amazing shots
Can u plzz continue the shot 2

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hema

@Itsflora

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Posted: 9 years ago

#146

loved all of them
lovely os.
but that angry wife one was great!!really like that sharp tongue khushi.

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christi002

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Posted: 9 years ago

#147

All the four shots were amazing awesome, read them in a go😊... loved the updates ❤️

Was really thrilled to read first OS, I somewhere had the inkling that its Arnav's doing but still can't shake of the suspense...😊

2nd one, Arnav was really a jerk... loved Khushi's bold avatar, not submissive, stood for her respect and believes.. 😊 Loved her every retort to Arnav... Khushi really showed him the mirror, his reality 👍🏼

3rd one was cute and lovely... I really thought that it was arhi whose alliances are discussed but it turned out to be of Manorama and Manohar's... "no girl ever rejected and slapped Arnav" awww, that was cute...😊

In 4th shot, I loved your take on arhi how he stayed with Gupta's and called Khushi's mother as amma and lovingly told Khushi that he is not ashamed of her status or from where she came...😊❤️

Loved all the shots, beautiful... ❤️❤️ waiting for more

Edited by christi002 - 9 years ago