(ArHi) For The First Time: OS 2, 3 & 4, pg 21 (26/11/2015)

First Previous

Page

Frequent Posters

pakpearl

@pakpearl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#171

😛

khazana haath lag gaya..

BOOKMARKED😊

Edited by pakpearl - 9 years ago

Quote

Sadh123

@Sadh123

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#172

Wow lazy, these three were too good.. And my favorite one was.. well the third one.. a married Arnav pacifying his sad wife and cajoling her, is always a treat to read. I was having this goofy grin on my face as I finished reading the whole thing. It was really beautiful to see the great ASR seamlessly mingle in the Gupta house. Reminded me of the day, Arnav spent in Gupta house.

The second one was downright adorable... Aww Khushi rejected Arnav and how!! I liked this wickedness and cuteness.. Both in equal measures.. Lol I would definitely love a continuation for that.. But ofc not possible..

And the first one. Well well though Arnav deserved that.. you should have made him that mean? Haaaw!! 😲 but you did make up with Khushi's character.. She was the girl I wanted to see.. not any damn cheap doormat.

Totally a brilliant job.. And reading anything from you, is always a treat! 😃

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Aaliya Sobti

@Aalu_Malu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#173

Os 1 ...

Very nice one :D i had this feeling that it was arnav making khushi scared :) .. 😎

To be edited soon

Quote

Shamz

@Shamz94

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#174

Loved all of of them but the 2ndOS was my favourite can you write more on that ;)

Quote

Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#175

Really loved first OS. Poor Khushi

Quote

akai

@akai

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#176

simply wonderful OS dear.

it was awesome

Quote

divya_divs

@divya_divs

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#177

glad you wrote these OS for us 😛 they are awesome 😊 enjoyed reading all of them😊 But how I wish to read the continuation of OS2 🥱 Could you please consider my request and think about it 😛 pretty pleassse!!!😛 I would love to read how you unflod the story😊 ofcourse will understand if you don't have time 😊 eager to read more stories from you 😃

Quote

1likeNoOther

@1likeNoOther

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#178

I can't believe how many dofferent genders i just fead in one thread. I loved all the one-shots. And j loved all the genres you chose.

Looking forward to what genre you will choose next and how you will write it. Can't wait 😃

Quote

Shah Sair Hassan

@ShahSAIR

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#179

ok read 2nd 3rd n 4th OS..
For me 2nd n 3rd are incomplete.. One short means complete story bt wo hai nahi.. For me they r scene or i can say simply shorts..

While as 4th one is complete and very sweet..
Pls try to complete 2nd wo yda incomplete lag rahi hai

Quote

1 ... 14 15 16 17 18

(ArHi) For The First Time: OS 2, 3 & 4, pg 21 (26/11/2015) - Page 18

Related Topics

Explore Topics