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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: indi52

^^^ durga 🤗


thank you for your lovely critique. that music question is bugging me. i know we layer it in instinctively as we read... but rabba ve... i want it in. the problem is it may sound cheesy unless i find a good solution.

you liked the nani part, and mami's frenzy? you know how everything goes a bit crazy when someone central to the home is not doing well.

during kidnap i never got the things that would have been normal... so... i guess my insides decided to do something about it. it is weird how much of what gets written pretty much writes itself... when it doesn't i know there's cause for concern.

never done this, durga, don't know if i have it in me... but till you try how will you know.

lovely comments. i will find a way to get the music in.

sannata. can you imagine how it must have been when dr verma said, "coma"? but the mana, the mind, is there, and it has secrets unknown,

I think it is time to seriously solve this music issue. Let me think of something and pm you, later in the evening.
The kidnap track was a big mess. They didn't bother to deal with the sensitiveness of the issue. An important person is absent from the scene because of some work about which not a single person knows about, extends his stay which he had never done before and nobody gets even a hint that there must be something terribly wrong with the whole scenario. 😲
You are right about that trying. Unless until one enters the fray, one can never realise one's capabilities to sustain in there.
I could feel that sannata, a silence looming as Khushi visualises the touching of the cheeks. Terrific imagination. 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: indi52


thanks, my dear ami, and for that one line in pink, i will give you a dream hotwa moment in the next update 🤗. i wuv nani and her pota and their mirror quality. she doesn't ahve to fuss over him, because he isa part of her, that's all... and boy does she push him to be all he can be... shaadi kareka padi... awww. so much love and dna.

shut up khushi, gives me shivers on my shin (its a good sign 😆 though it may not sound like it.)
thanks for tolerating the not so happy parts of my ishtory, but phikar not bitwa is doing good...a nd isspkaur has demanded more bitwa next update... me already lolling in it. 😆


I join Isspkaur in that hartaal...just imagine us carrying a sign "more hotwa", good to know youare working on it and that "shutup Khushi" is a good sign...really. The whole coma thing is too fresh in my head as i told you an aquntance of hubby had a stroke and slipped into a come, thankfully he came out of it and doing fine at the moment...but honestly i couldn't help but think about his wife...i don't know her, don't know their relationshipe, but i think every relationship has Arnav/Khushi in them...just so thankful that she didn't lose her Arnav and so so happy that looks like your khushi won't either. Tragedies happen in real life but then again so do these good things that truly feel like a miracle!


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: BarunDiwani


I join Isspkaur in that hartaal...just imagine us carrying a sign "more hotwa", good to know youare working on it and that "shutup Khushi" is a good sign...really. The whole coma thing is too fresh in my head as i told you an aquntance of hubby had a stroke and slipped into a come, thankfully he came out of it and doing fine at the moment...but honestly i couldn't help but think about his wife...i don't know her, don't know their relationshipe, but i think every relationship has Arnav/Khushi in them...just so thankful that she didn't lose her Arnav and so so happy that looks like your khushi won't either. Tragedies happen in real life but then again so do these good things that truly feel like a miracle!




We could have more than one placard! How about "BITWA BADHAO" Campaign... and
"HOTWA KI SEWA HI ISHWAR KI SEWA HAI"...also "BITWA KO COMA SE BACHAO!!"... ya phir "BITWA HI TOH HOTWA HAI" 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: indi52


okay, arshi, i am laughing and enjoying your comments. eye of horus yes. kadoos, but naturally. beat up shyam? shall we do it here? 🤣

good to see you, my friend... take time off from that hectic sched of yours and drop in for a little relax time, okay? see ya, take care.


Yes plz do so ... I would get some relaxation .. You know how much I LOVE 😡 him in my analysis. Already gave him so many names ...Seriously some beating tou banta hai ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is so nice chapter,

Thanks for pm and would like to read more

Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

I join Isspkaur in that hartaal...just imagine us carrying a sign "more hotwa", good to know youare working on it and that "shutup Khushi" is a good sign...really. The whole coma thing is too fresh in my head as i told you an aquntance of hubby had a stroke and slipped into a come, thankfully he came out of it and doing fine at the moment...but honestly i couldn't help but think about his wife...i don't know her, don't know their relationshipe, but i think every relationship has Arnav/Khushi in them...just so thankful that she didn't lose her Arnav and so so happy that looks like your khushi won't either. Tragedies happen in real life but then again so do these good things that truly feel like a miracle!




oh ami, in bold pink, yes i like to believe that... certainly in strong relationships between two lovers these two characters are there.

and now, my readers are on a strike... what is it? do bongs attract the striker in all of us, no matter where they are? but i have to say, the vision of a hartaal with zillions of girls marching, raised placards in their hands saying "more hotwa, "more bitwa," "hamara bitwa lauta do lauta do," etc., is super exciting. should be part of some story, maybe a movie, and then hotwa appears on a helicopter and lands among them... ha ha ha... achchha ok, am working to get the man back. ab theek hai?


and yes, there are miracles... i believe in those too. 😆


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: binimoti

This is so nice chapter,


Thanks for pm and would like to read more

Update soon



thank you, binimoti,

i will update soon and let you know... 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha

Yes plz do so ... I would get some relaxation .. You know how much I LOVE 😡 him in my analysis. Already gave him so many names ...Seriously some beating tou banta hai ...



arshi, ok, my friend, slither snake scorpion skunk sicko spidey... one major dhulai coming up. 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: IssPKaur



We could have more than one placard! How about "BITWA BADHAO" Campaign... and
"HOTWA KI SEWA HI ISHWAR KI SEWA HAI"...also "BITWA KO COMA SE BACHAO!!"... ya phir "BITWA HI TOH HOTWA HAI" 😆



aiyo, isspkaur, my dil and things are in a flutter just thinking of this hartaal, oh all the girls marching together, placards aloft, hormones on high 🤣... i want hartaal i want hartaal... just wrote to ami, what this sight does to me... in pink, of course, pyaar sabse bada hota hai... and love is god haven't we heard... and for hotwa, ours is but that one true thing... 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: indi52



arshi, ok, my friend, slither snake scorpion skunk sicko spidey... one major dhulai coming up. 🤣

Ah, the Shyam beating up talk. Just y'day I was watching IPK Telugu, episode when Arnav is held up and he gives a beating to this guy in dark who's responsible for the kidnapping, but doesn't know that it is Shyam. I was thinking, chalo unknowingly he has beaten Shyam at some place. But really, we want some nice bashing up.

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